When the Wind Rose, 2005

I have read a lot of new articles and this one is really down to earth. Most of them are computer veterans. Once they build this or that website, they have everything. Or they are the second generation of rich people or something like that. Nine out of ten rebirths are in the above two categories, and only the other ten percent are engaged in small businesses (buying discs, wholesale and assembling computers for schools) and the like.

It's not a brainless novel, it's just a grassroots story, and I personally felt it was a bit awkward and coercive in the emotional scenes with the rich woman's family. The two school beauties took the initiative to help, but it felt like something they could only dream about. After reading part of it, I still feel that the flavor formula is familiar. There are too many coincidences and too many beautiful women who care about people, talents and wealth.

Teacher Lin is delayed by the protagonist. There is really no need to provoke him. I always thought that two women would be enough. If there is more trouble, the marginal benefit will decrease.

I hope the author will never write a plot in the end: the protagonist is moved by the deep affection of his roommate, changes his initial concept, and then takes the initiative to teach the roommate how to pursue Gu Ranxi and Yu Mo, and finally catches up with the help of the protagonist. This will be very boring. Even if they are not the protagonist's harem, don't give them away! And they don't have any special personality charm, so there is no need to force them to join the protagonist's entrepreneurial team and grow a lot, becoming different from their previous lives, so they can get a different ending than their previous lives! Because the woman obtained through the guidance of the protagonist will eventually expose the various differences in thinking, personality and philosophy between the two people over time, because everything before was a fiction under the guidance of the protagonist, but the roommate is not like this. There will always be a moment when the false performance will be exposed. There are such TV and movie plots! Actually, there's really nothing to write about about the roommate's friendship, and they don't have a deep friendship with the protagonist. At most, they can live in harmony! The previous book is still reasonable. The friend himself was with the woman in his previous life, and the protagonist only accelerated the emotional process between them. There is no need to write about the love of roommates in detail. In the end, just arrange a random passerby for them!

First appearance

Real girlfriends really have no sense of existence. In reality, a relationship like yours would have become obsolete long ago.

This heroine is really uncomfortable to watch. She is so ignorant and she always feels like the protagonist is rushing to lick her.

Can it be messed with the user's perception? It's a pity that Liu Feifei's character was created. Is she a supporting actress? Shares are given away at every turn. If the author wants to be realistic, the shares cannot be dispersed when the company just started.

A novel with too many women would be boring

Zuo You has no merits. He is coquettish and willful, like an idiot. He is really poisonous. Otherwise, he should just disappear.