Twin Cities: Hero Witness System

It has been a few months since I finished reading "The Battle of Two Cities", but when I found "Two Cities: Heroic Witness System" in the daily recommendations, I couldn't help but click on it. I hope there is an author who can fill my regrets and not let Bao Bao become Jinx and not let her and Vi be separated. The protagonist of the story is Lin Wen. Of course, he is a time traveler. He was born in Zaun and adopted by the old Zhuo Lang. When he was very young, he hated the lower city and hoped to rely on his own ability to live in the upper city, and by the way, Lao Zhuolang would benefit from it. Zaun is full of violence and bloodshed, and smuggling and robbery are endless. To go too far with freedom is sin. This is what little Lin Wen hates, and the bad air full of poisonous gas that he cannot bear. As Lin Wen grew up, he gradually accepted Zu An. He discovered that in this barbaric land, there were also many pure people with bright minds. They worked hard to protect the ones they loved: Old Zhuo Lang protected Lin Wen, Fandel protected Wei, Blast, Milo, and Clegg, Benso protected Ike, Silko and Servika protected Zaun, Saan protected Seraphine. Lin Wen also found the person he wanted to protect. Wei and Baobao, his sister. In order to protect them and strengthen Zaun, he traveled around and practiced, betraying his friend Jace, stealing the method of making Hex gems, and decided to declare war on Jace's home, Piltover. Zaun united, Fandral and Silko unified the city, and my wish came true. Blast and Vi are still together, although Blast has grown into Jinx. Something unexpected happened. Just a few days before Zaun was preparing to attack Piltover in an all-out way, the Noxus Empire invaded Piltover because they wanted to steal the immortal Hex technology mentioned by Senator Stevan. Congressman Gilrab Mann of Piltover immediately called the Hex phone created by Lin Wen to ask for help from Zaun. The shadows of Zaun a thousand years ago overlapped with those of Piltover and Zaun today. The humiliation Zaun suffered during the three hundred years of division was instantly forgotten. "In the battle between Piltover and Zaun, it's not your turn, Noxus, to intervene!" This is the most exciting place I've ever seen. The top leaders of Piltover and Zaun put aside their prejudices, and Zaun, led by Lin Wen, fought bravely for Piltover. Camille, Piltover's strongest spy, massacred Roxas soldiers at the port of Zaun. This twin sister city finally stands together. In the end, thanks to Seraphine's singing, Zaun and Piltover became friends again. But this is far from over. The author's pen has not yet been written, so I can't be bothered here. This is the most enjoyable book I have read these days. The author's writing is very simple. He never uses the embarrassing writing methods of narration and flashback. Instead, he uses "one shot to the end" and always follows the protagonist. There is no disgusting foreshadowing such as "a pair of eyes emerged from the dark black like a swamp. The eyes were blood red and bloodshot, staring at the only light coming from Zaun and Piltover in the depths of the night". It was very comfortable to watch. The only bad thing is that the details are not perfect in some places, but compared with other people's novels, it can be easily compared. This book is not mindless. Every turning point is foreshadowed by the previous chapter, and the protagonist does not grow too fast. It is a book worth reading. Anyway, as long as he doesn't stretch his hips in the later stage, he will get a full order from me. Because I am a student and my parents are strict about mobile phones, I have no chance to touch my mobile phone after the winter vacation, so congratulations to the author for losing a follow-up book after the winter vacation. (This is the reasonable reason for my student party to ask for a book, hahaha) ——————Small Theater—————— "Lin Wen, come and take pictures of me and Baobao!" "Hey, of course the whole family can take pictures together!" Click (the sound of the camera shutter) "Hey, don't hug my waist suddenly!"

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After reading about a hundred chapters, I thought about it and decided to write down my current thoughts. First of all, the name of the book is Twin Cities: The Heroic Witness System. When I clicked in, I had the following expectations for this book: the interaction with the heroes, the rise of Zaun, the protagonist's growth path, and the protagonist in traditional fantasy novels who dominates the world (this is actually a conventional expectation, after all, the protagonist will definitely gradually become stronger). Looking at it now, the best-created heroes and the best-written points are Jace and Explosive. What's a bit bad is Kai'Sa. It feels like the author seems to be trying to create Kai'Sa as the heroine and highlight Kai'Sa's cute side, but focuses too much on Kai'Sa's greedy characteristics. This has the first disadvantage, which is that changing the girl's name doesn't seem to have any effect. It's not that the author's creation is not cute, on the contrary, it is precisely because it is so cute that I don't feel like a Kai'Sa who came out of the void to fight. Then, the advancement of the main plot is indeed a bit slow. Is it too slow to solve the problem of the twin cities just after a hundred chapters? No, I don't think it's slow. At this time, it's normal for other powerful heroes to serve as the background. So why do some of my readers find it slow? Space issue. While the author makes Bao Bao and other characters vivid, daily life becomes the protagonist, and the process of solving the conflict between the two cities becomes a supporting role or even a passing existence. The author is not required to give a perfect solution. After all, we are here to see the story and characters, not to learn. But the excessive daily share does make me feel that the solution to the Twin Cities problem seems too tender and can even be called hasty. The anger and warmth turned into warmth and warmth. Let's give a simple example: The author Jia Kai finally aroused my sympathy for Zaun's situation and even my anger towards Piltover. I haven't even written much about the liquidation struggle of Piltover's nobles, and now Noxus is coming? Is this a joint fight against foreign enemies? Is this Councilor Lam Man? Me: Meow meow meow? ? ? Finally, I say, author, what exactly did you write about the actual growth process of your protagonist? It doesn't give me a real sense of it at all. It was okay in the early stage, but suddenly Shurima came four years later, Drizzt, Graves, me: Meow Meow Meow? ? ? ? What the hell is the protagonist now? ? ? ?

Let Lin Wen die alone, blast ✘Kasha, Wei✘Caitlin, the author deserves to be the one who has written Lily articles, he is really awesome

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Your book master likes it very much, but your update master is very dissatisfied

It is indeed the best book among the two cities. I chose to be born in the bottom city, and my strength is just invincible in Zauanpi City. The writing of this strength is really good. In other books, the protagonist can't even defeat a shimmering creature. He is still a councilor and keeps running to the bottom city without anyone. This book is really good. The most important thing is that it has high strength and high style. This is the key point. I hope I can write more daily articles. I don't want my combat power to collapse, and I don't want to lose my ability.

Author: "About me writing a series of stories about a Twin Cities fan who was backstabbed crazily by the official from Zaun, and how I met my wife Ka'Sa in Shurima but was back-stabbed by the official Kassadin, etc."

The book is okay, but unfortunately the viewpoints are too different. In my opinion, Zaun and Piltover should have a life-and-death relationship. I have suffered in Zaun for hundreds of years. Why can you treat it as a disregard for saying that we are one and the same? Can the Zaans really accept this? Anyway, I can't accept it. The more you introduce it, the more disgusting it becomes 😫

Overall, it's quite interesting. Readers need to have some background knowledge of LOL, otherwise some of the jokes may not be fully understood and it won't be that fun. 1. Let's talk about the character of the protagonist first. He is an ordinary player who travels to another world. He is not particularly holy or extreme. You have your own worldview. The three views are not correct, but you have your own persistence and bottom line. Not exactly likeable, but definitely not annoying. Ps: There is still a sense of immersion. After all, not everyone suffers from hatred and enemies everywhere. 2. The creation of supporting roles, I personally think is a success. The author spent effort to enrich the flesh and blood of each character. Although the writing power is lacking, the effect is not bad. At least every decision basically conforms to the setting and is logically consistent. 3. The plot progress is not very fast, and even the protagonist does not appear as much as in ordinary novels. But because of the shaping of the supporting characters and the background blessing of LOL, it makes people feel quite warm or funny when running daily. Ps is more daily, and the plot does not advance quickly. 4. Update. Under normal circumstances, this book would be four stars or even four and a half stars according to my preference. But the author's writing style combined with his update speed is very annoying. Ps Qingming Festival holiday, May Day holiday, occasionally less update, bet you didn't notice. Points deducted. The last three and a half ~ four stars

This is a complaint post. If you have anything you want to complain about, just say it here. I can basically read it and reply. Then, it's about the book club group... I will start building a group before putting it on the shelves. Well, that's it. Thank you very much for your likes ( ੭ ˙ᗜ˙ )੭

The plot of this book is almost completely changed from that of League of Legends. No one around the protagonist has experienced tragedy. This cannot be called a hero. Jinx and Wei can only be ordinary people. So what does this have to do with the title of this book? Heroes are a joke. It is better to change it to League of Legends plot modification system.

First of all, I really like this book. Even after the latest author said he would stop updating it for a few days, I still like it very much. Let's put it this way, any creation is unlikely to be smooth sailing, and there will always be some bumps and bruises. The recent chapters are indeed a bit weird and a bit watery, but it does not mean that you are not good at writing. It means that the concept and positioning should be more accurate, and the plot structure can be further optimized. In fact, it is not a big deal, and it is okay to treat it as an excessive chapter. Including if you feel something is wrong, it is also the most correct to stop and organize your thoughts. As a reader, I support it, but I have to say something to the readers who like this book, please don't go to the palace. Really, many of my favorite books are like this. If they are not written correctly, I will stop and organize my thoughts, and then I will GG. I am very scared. Another thing is that the author should not let the book reviews affect his own thinking, because many readers are like this. In fact, they don't have too many bad intentions, they are just used to talking about it. In fact, it is not about saying anything, sometimes it is just teasing you. Don't be too impatient. All good things are never rushed. Slowness is not necessarily good, but you have to believe that what is rushed out is definitely not good. Be more tolerant and put yourself in someone else's shoes. Finally, as a book friend said, your book master likes it very much, but he is very dissatisfied with your update speed>_<. You can take your time, or even stop and sort things out, but don't GG, it's too emotionally damaging. In addition, I wish this book will be a hit, and I hope the author can sort out his thoughts soon and give him a more perfect reading experience. I wish all of you who read this book good health and your family members will be healthy and single!

Smiling, a eunuch who simply wants to make quick money by eating anime traffic. When Shuangcheng became popular, he opened this book. When cyberspace became popular, he immediately started the eunuch. Once the traffic passed, he immediately stopped it, and then opened a new account to get new traffic. Is there anyone who can dig up this person's account? Avoid pitfalls. He is poor and most afraid of spending money to support eunuchs.

From the beginning of writing this book until now, I feel that there is a big problem with the mentality of the protagonist. It is completely inconsistent with the power that the protagonist has obtained. The style of acting gives people a great sense of tearing From the decisive and decisive trench law enforcement officer to the current Shurima stage, he is always indecisive when interacting with all heroes This sense of tearing is especially reflected in the dialogue with the yellow chicken. Behind the protagonist are the Twin Cities and Icathia. The protagonist should be responsible for his own country and subordinate countries. Every concession and compromise Lin Wen made in his dialogue with Yellow Chicken represented a step back in status for Shurima from the Twin Cities. Are the Twin Cities really incomparable to Shurima in terms of combat power? Lin Wen's strength, with two Ascended Powers, is almost comparable to that of Ornn and the Sword Demon during the Ascended era. The Twin Cities also have Hex Technology and Janna. What does Shurima have? The yellow chicken and the dog head also have a half-mad and half-stupid crocodile, a Zerath who is ready to stab the yellow chicken in the back at any time But what is the result of the meeting between the protagonist and the yellow chicken? Not only does he have to help others fight Zerath, but also cures the crocodile. In exchange, the yellow chicken just said "I will not invade your city anymore" The protagonist is now a top-notch strong man and the leader of the entire Twin Cities. What is needed is the responsibility of a leader and the mentality of a strong man Be hard when you need to be hard. As a result, since leaving the Twin Cities, the protagonist has almost given selfless help to all the heroes. To put it bluntly, it is licking This sense of tearing is too serious and makes people feel particularly uncomfortable to see If you want to write about a White Lotus who is friends with all the heroes, don't create a trench law enforcement officer who kills decisively in order to protect your loved ones and unify the Twin Cities in the early stages of writing Now I really feel that the protagonist is powerful even though he is strong. But he became more and more timid and did not look like a leader or a strong person.

There are too many daily routines and they are not refined. Now that you have put it on the shelves, the progress of the main plot is very slow and very small, and most of it is daily routines. What do people think of this? It's like deliberately dragging the word count. If you look at the main plot again, the protagonist comes back and holds a meeting to decide the direction of Zu'an. As a result, do you think it is nonsense? You can hold a meeting for several days without explaining anything clearly. What problems do you want to solve in the meeting? Why don't you write it down and tell the readers? If you act like a riddler and don't know what to say in a meeting, this is the author's taboo! ! ! ! Moreover, in Janna's case, you used a mysterious writing technique to explain something that could be easily explained, and the word count was wasted for a long time. The protagonist looked like a child in front of Fander and Silko, instead of the boss and future of Zaun. To put it simply, strength and behavior are completely inconsistent, so what is the use of this strength? Let's talk about the protagonist, what do readers want to see? It's the protagonist's ability to show off, fight, and slash the void. Well, you just skipped a few years of Shurima. You just went to find Kai'Sa and you didn't even meet the void mobs. How about I? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? What's this? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Even when Camille came over, the protagonist didn't take action? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? What is this? ? ? ? ? ? ? It has completely become a background board, right? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? If you have watched One Piece, you should know how much water the animation team added in order not to keep up with the progress of the comics, and they also created many disgusting plots. In order to make the plot of the conflict between the two cities of water reasonable, you brought out Janna and said that Janna didn't like it. The problem is your strength... You can solve it by reducing your strength to ten skills without killing people. You might as well design it so that you don't have that strength and argue with each other. I think it's more reasonable. I saw in your reply that others said that your writing style is like this, but before you put it on the shelves, when the protagonist was promoting Zaun's autonomy, he was not like this, doing nothing and making mysteries. Including the conversation with Jess after returning, it is also unbearable. The protagonist is the Riddler, and you have to pretend to be able to explain clearly. Oh, if this is an anime, there is no problem, but you are a modern person with golden fingers and high combat power. There are too many flaws. In the final analysis, it's the author's fault. There's something wrong with the outline. It's like I don't know what to write after being separated from the 9-episode anime. I only know daily life. I hope you can improve it.

I smiled, what I said was so nice, it would be over no matter what, but now I look at it, it was a month ago when the last update was made, and I smiled innocently.

Jinx

I just finished reading Chapter 66 of Yanque here. To be honest, it's great! A lot has been written about the Twin Cities, but this and Appetite. It's great that Bao Bao didn't turn into Jinx. The development that the protagonist brings to Zaun Pi City is very reasonable. The supporting roles in it are also arranged just right. The character design is also very likable. I really like it. But it's just not enough to read. Can you update it quickly? Thanks.

Explosive yyds

Ka'Sa

Come on, author, you're the best League of Legends fan.

Does anyone know if this guy changed his number? I have to scold him.

It is definitely the author of the Twin Cities Witness System. The IP address is the same and the writing style is the same. I mentioned my suspicion in the comment area and was deleted three times and permanently banned.

Post a real person cos😋

The group has also been disbanded. Why don't you write better for your money? What you write is really the same.

Let me give you an accurate answer as to whether it will be finished or not. I don't mean to scold anyone. Anyway, I spent money to watch it. It's not like the wind blows with my money. As a result, I can't even see the ending. Doesn't this make people who watch the original movie feel chilled?

His new book, Guiding the Way Here, is by the same author. He replied with this vest in the comment area of ​​the new book "Cyber: 3 The intelligence of my body is a billion points stronger"

I don't understand why eunuchs are needed

I am in college. The last time I read this book was in 2022, when I was still in the third grade of junior high school. That day, after posting a thousand-word post expressing my love for this book, I left the starting point and pursued life and studies. Over the past three years, I have experienced my first love and breakup, my first fight in the hospital, my first school punishment, gained some friendships and failed the college entrance examination. Of course I will not say that I have always remembered this novel. On the contrary, I have forgotten it a long time ago. With so many things going on in reality, who would remember a plot of only a few hundred thousand words? I was tired from playing the game yesterday and just finished the main plot of 2077 in which my body turned into fire. I was bored and saw a red APP on my phone, and suddenly I became interested. In just a few seconds, the familiar yet unfamiliar startup screen, the small bookshelf collected by the junior high school student secretly playing with his mobile phone under the quilt, appeared before my eyes. A Fei's Cell Prison, a work by several little-known writers working for love, scroll down Unfinished, "Two Cities: Heroic Witness System". Is the book finished? I forgot what kind of mood I had when I opened this novel that I had long forgotten. Although it was only a few hours after I wrote this - maybe I was not in any mood - I found - It turned out to be a eunuch. It's like a promise that I can make soon but haven't completed yet. It's filled with passion and generosity for hundreds of chapters, but in the end it is picked out and thrown away like unburned ashes. I don't know what kind of mood I was in when I wrote these words, which are probably completely different from my last post - I didn't go back to the starting point just to see my beloved work abandoned by its father. Hahaha. It's almost 4:30 in the morning, and I still can't sleep. Whether it is the ending of 2077 that touches my heart, or the unfinished ending of this book that makes me feel lost, I have no time to tell, and I don't want to tell. But it's still eight in the morning today, so I really should go to bed. After waking up, there will be a brand new tomorrow, and I, Lin Wen, and all the people living will all embark on a new journey that is slightly different, but equally bright . Maybe.