I Create a Restricted Area in the World of Cultivating Immortals

There is something wrong with the way the author writes it. The dog is waiting for someone to come over and pretend.

It feels like sending warmth. It doesn't have the feeling that a restricted area should have, and it doesn't describe the horror of the restricted area. It's almost all written in one stroke.

Daily Detoxification

It's very good, it has its own personality, I recommend it, keep up the good work, update it soon, and I'll vote for it!

It looks fine from the front! But later on, I felt that the protagonist gradually lost his mystery!

I don't have anything to say, except that there is no female protagonist. So the author, please don't dive in to answer. I am really grateful to you for answering.

The word "but" appears dozens of times in a chapter