Pseudo-Scientific Beast-Control Diary

I clicked in after seeing that it had 220,000 words! Later I clicked back to the interface! Original 22 recommendation votes😅

How should I put it? It doesn't matter if you use the routine of abusing power to suppress others once and a half, but from the beginning to now, it feels like a routine with no content to read.

To be honest, the male protagonist knows everything about this school, but it's really not that good. If nothing else, the vice principal is disgusting enough.

The more I look at it, it feels a little inconsistent and a little unrealistic. Maybe it's because there are too many plans and darkness in other novels. I feel that when the protagonist faces difficulties, he can just call the media and solve them in one click. It doesn't feel quite right.

How can I put it this way? I originally wanted to read a relaxing and happy pet-raising article. Occasionally, it is also interesting to read about the setting of battle pets. It is why this interpersonal relationship is so retarded, and the early routine articles, if you offend me, I will punish you to death. The road is the same. If a pet-raising writer is so violent and walks around all day, there will be no one he can interact with normally. The whole world feels very violent. If you really do this, you might as well go to the fantasy fantasy of cultivating immortals. Who doesn't have higher combat power than this one? Does it feel better than this for you? As a result, the pet writing is not a pet writing, it just looks like people are stepping on it and pretending to be cool. Also, the storyline of Dong Yi Bang Tou and Xi Yi Bang Tou showing off is too scattered, with no main plot line at all. Little Ostrich's character problems go from one extreme to another, but he doesn't solve them even if he knows about them. Just like Duoduo's character problems at the beginning, they just drag them on, force them on, and it's perfect!

There's nothing else to say except less, come on! !

How to put it, if you don't want to stay here, you have to stay here. It is recommended that the protagonist directly changes to another college to continue his studies. Of course, it is impossible to change directly. After all, talents and other things are hidden (don't talk about big boss training, people are just pure gamblers). Just go to another map for about ten chapters to develop. As long as you show your talent, it is a trivial matter. There will be times when they will regret it.

Absolutely, there are a lot of poisons, the author has the advantage of having a novel concept, and nothing else. It seems that only Chong Mei and Divine Pet Evolution are good books about beast control.

I haven't read it yet, but I'm looking forward to opening it! I hope this is a true beast-control style, not a reckless battlefield commander who insists on pretending to be elegant with his backhand sword. If the summoned monster is easy to get, don't limit the number of explosions. If it's hard to get, don't forcefully write invincible monsters, like Pokémon. Not useless and not particularly strong. The essence of Summoner is to develop cooperative battles! Please become an excellent battlefield commander!

Well, two bad points, I just finished reading it. One is that the protagonist always fights back passively. The second one. If the school recruits the protagonist, the protagonist will not get any money. It means that it is better for the protagonist to love and care for pets, but no matter how good the protagonist is, he still needs to develop. I used to give money to that foundation. How did the protagonist develop? What's more, the protagonist now spends twice as much as others on two pets.

What about your talent and slowing down? Have you forgotten it as soon as you hit it?

There are some poisons. In the free chapters, many of the plots are extremely poisonous. Let's just let it go for a while. When will the book become scarce? Take a look here.

You can write more about Duoduo's transformation, otherwise his character will change all of a sudden. It's a bit unacceptable. After all, Duoduo is a child. It's not that easy to change his character.

There is a problem, the male protagonist turns out to be just a middle-aged boy! How come you become a genius after losing your memory?

To sum up, I think there are too few scenes between the diary and the little ostrich.

This plot can only be said to be very brainless This kind of chapter is really annoying The plot is not that good in the first place, and there are such brainless chapters, which really makes me unable to find a reason to follow it. I originally thought of reading a cool article, but in the end I had to give me a chapter when I started to enjoy the protagonist's brainless slap in the face and pretend to be 13. I really can't understand your operation. I can only say that it is not unreasonable for this book to have poor results.

The first few chapters of Goodfellas made me look embarrassed and I quit.

I can't stand it anymore. I can't bear Duo Duo's character.

If you don't know how to be a eunuch, there are not many beast-control novels that are normally updated or completed! There is too little starting point! Those who write well are even rarer!

Even though it's a free prostitution, the author's writing is really good. It doesn't feel toxic.

Why can't you, the author, finish a book well? Is it interesting to have tj all the time? Consume your book friends' love and trust.

Shuyouqun saw it and came to help you improve your performance.

I read it. This book is quite good and interesting, but it is a bit lacking.

At least 6,000 words a day

So why do Duoduo, a useless person, write about it? It's really poisonous to spend so many chapters writing a little ostrich and then ignore it later.

The subject matter is average, the setting is average, the world background is too small, the plot is average, the story is too bland, there is no passion, no excitement, the imagination is too small, and the imagination is not enough. The only thing that can be determined is that the writing is very good. I suggest the author read more other novels. With the author's writing style, the story is exciting enough, and it is not impossible to write a masterpiece. Come on!

I didn't expect to start a new book. Please give me your support.

There are a lot of typos, I suggest the author correct them when he has time.

The previous book was a eunuch, so I came here to see if yours was also a eunuch, but it turned out to be a eunuch again. I have been reading your book for so long, and I would like to give you some advice. The first time I read it, I thought it was very detailed and brilliant, but the second time I read your other book, I found it boring and unfocused. The story lacks a larger structure and world view, as well as plots with climaxes and rich plot settings. The story like Tenfold Benefit is well written, but the plot is too little, and the plot is repeated over and over again, which makes me tired of watching it. I feel like a little boy, his thoughts are too small and too detailed, and the books he writes are too detailed and small in format. But you said that you are married. Your writing is good, but it is possible to improve the above and become a great master. It is hard to say whether it is easy or not. It depends on how much effort you can put into it and whether you have the talent pattern.

Some books will die if you keep them