Card Making System

Although it seems reasonable to only reach the fourth level of Qi training in chapter 30, it is very strange that you have been synthesizing various cards in these thirty chapters, giving people the feeling of a child holding an AK. Also, do you want to write a card flow or do you want to cultivate immortality but have a card cheat?

One moment, the protagonist's family is forced into a desperate situation, and the next moment it is said that someone in the sect is missing. One moment, it is said that the protagonist is an inner seed and needs to be protected, and the next moment, the protagonist is asked to fight to the death across the border to challenge the enemy. The fifth level of Qi refining is all about killing and building foundations, all by yourself. So is the protagonist's family strong or weak?

It's an interesting book. The data and logic of Goldfinger are both good. When it comes to this, let me complain about some books. Goldfinger's imagination is good but the logic of Goldfinger is not good. The reading experience is very poor.

The author's writing is so messy, I'm probably going to cut him off

The protagonist did not understand the essence of cultivating immortality. The purpose of cultivating immortality is immortality, so everything must revolve around this purpose. Spells are a means of protecting the Tao, so they must be learned. However, the effects of spells are nothing more than attack, defense, speed and resistance. As long as these four attributes are improved, the means of protecting the path will be enough. So, you use the Cao Ren Jing as a core? A spell in the Qi refining stage will not be of much use in the foundation building stage. Moreover, since the main character's strength has been overshadowed, the realm-transformation spell must have undergone some qualitative changes. It only has one more characteristic, but it has to be hidden and dare not be used. Therefore, there is something wrong with the protagonist's thinking

There is no contradiction, it creates contradiction, and it is so far-fetched

There are still six layers of foundation building. You are really 6, no, you really need to go up layer by layer, right? Is there any 6 levels of foundation building in the early stage, middle stage, late stage, and Dzogchen? ? ? ?

The pressure on the protagonist in the early stage is a bit harsh, and it is easy to persuade people to quit.

I feel a bit seriously ill, sometimes I feel happy and sometimes I feel miserable, it's all a separation.

I've been stressing about the main character for too long, and I feel like I don't have the patience to continue reading.

It collapsed before it even hit the shelves. It's really...

It's no good. If you can't bring cards when you are reborn, you shouldn't bring the most basic cultivation skills. You only brought your cultivation base to make it easier to write later. Isn't the card slot also part of the system? The body card is still there, so what are you doing? It turns out that there is still contact, so I can barely talk about it. If the contact is gone, the card slot is gone, and the system is gone, shouldn't it be stuck?

I thought I was cultivating immortality in the world of card making, but it turned out that I was making cards in the world of cultivation of immortality.

I couldn't help frowning when I saw the novel's brows

The setting is interesting, but your writing is not good.

Nowadays, the novels about cultivating immortals are based on Western fantasy game writing templates. I just don't understand. Wouldn't it be the same if you just write Western fantasy novels?

The so-called cards here, that is, the card making system, to put it bluntly, is a replacement for the skill system. The essence of the writing upgrade method is to brush the value, not the mechanism I can only say that it is quite satisfactory, nothing to brag about, but at the same time there is no special poisonous point The writing method is very mature (there are too many works of this kind to learn from) Go and check if the author has any previous records of eunuchs. If not, you can probably read with confidence (I have read too many of them, uh, some of them can't stand it, so I can only see 50 pictures)

I have been raising it for several months, and it has died, and I have only updated it so little, and there are not even 50 chapters.

The creativity and setting are pretty good, but the plot is not well grasped. I need to polish it and give it a new look.

After reading Chapter 23, I felt weird and had a schizophrenic feeling, so I retreated.

What is written is nothing but nonsense. To say this book is rubbish is to insult the word rubbish.

I also wanted to write about this topic before😎