Ten Times the Profit at the Start

The author's writing style is very good. I hope it won't collapse in the future. There is a high chance that it will become popular. At present, I personally think that the best thing he has written is the description of pets. This is a big attraction. Come on, author!

It was fine when I was fighting monsters and upgrading before, but things have changed a bit since the appearance of the Sirius Society, that is, the Sirius Society will show up and fight with the protagonist. The aborigines come forward and the protagonist fights. The description of the characters is too superficial. The innocent and oppressed time-travelers are all pitiful and kind-hearted. The Sirius Club treats the aborigines as dogs and all of them look like slaves. All the aborigines are evil people and should be killed! Although the description of pets is very good, others feel like there are several templates, the time traveler template, the time traveler traitor template, the aboriginal template, and then all the characters act according to these templates, like NPCs. The author writes about the miserable situation of the time-travelers, igniting the readers' anger, and then the protagonist fights, and then repeats this routine, changing the soup without changing the medicine. It may be enjoyable at first, but after reading too much, it becomes very boring

This is a book review The plot is thoughtful, the plug-ins are reasonable, and the approach is right. I'm really obsessed with the characterization. Just... Not good. It's very green tea (regardless of gender), and the protagonist's character is turned into a loser by making some complaints (that is, the woman has a good figure, and the couple is dating at a young age), and it's also a bit... Fantasy (I can't tell, but reading novels must be related to reality, the characters in this book do not have that sense of reality). And the positioning of the protagonist is not clear. Writing this protagonist is more like an ordinary person's fantasy, hoping that he can have a cheat, and then be on the same starting point as everyone, and finally be far ahead of everyone. The author arranged the psychological description of the protagonist very densely at the beginning. It felt like he wanted to write a protagonist with an online IQ. But then, it seemed that all the thoughts of that ordinary person were turned into complaints, turned into complaints by the protagonist, and then suddenly became a thing. I won't go into details about the subsequent characters, they are very green tea and unreasonable. However, it can be seen that the author has carefully considered the material selection. Plug-ins are also available. If you like this kind of semi-invincible pet upgrade style, you can do it.

Why are the beginnings and fronts of this kind of group wear almost the same? The protagonist is given such a big hook, but he doesn't want to fly solo? If the strength of a group is too different, if the protagonist's emotional intelligence is not very high and he does not manage it carefully, problems will always arise. It looked very awkward. As for a person who is too lonely and bored, he can maintain his dominance. Possess the strength. You can also share talents. Pull a group of people and beat a group of people. You can firmly hold the power of dominance in your own hands. Isn't it much better to let them be your logistics? When the protagonist goes out to fight monsters, he doesn't just go alone, he has to bring a group of people with him. It's not bad that the efficiency is much higher. But it doesn't operate, it doesn't contact, it doesn't rule. The protagonist is pretty much like everyone else except that he is very talented (I forgot that the protagonist is an author. The author is basically a nerd and doesn't understand this. It's normal. Sorry for bothering you)

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It's similar to Summon the Goblins, and it's too basic to read with your IQ. The more poison you get towards the end, the more poisonous it becomes, and I'm not interested in reading anymore after reaching chapter 80!

To be honest, author, wasn't it the first time you saw those union members killing people and insulting others? You were all killed with a fireball. Why not kill others. If you want to write about the Virgin Bitch, just write Bai. I just can't stand it anymore, what the hell (ﾟoﾟ; If I wait until I become stronger, don't you think I will turn all the aboriginal people into slaves? Don't tell me when will retribution be repaid?

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The most stupid setting of the author is not whether the plot is dark or not. There are books that are darker than this. They are like Big Monkey, which depresses the book just by looking at it. This is really drizzle. The stupidest setting is actually the setting that cannot be upgraded after level 30. It is true to increase the difficulty, but yours directly causes the whole book to jump, because the protagonist's maximum upgrade The level is a bit cool. It is understandable that this setting is placed at level 60. After all, increasing the difficulty can make the writing longer. No one will say that, but it is level 30, and such a stupid setting was made before it was released. I am sure that the author's first order was disastrous, and more than 70% of people will not choose to read it after 80 chapters!

The subject matter is a bit attractive, but after reading the first chapter, I felt that the male protagonist seemed like a bastard. I wonder if it will still be like this later?

This book either has a mechanism for pets to upgrade and feed back to their owners or a mechanism for pets to survive and their owners to survive, otherwise it would be impossible to read.

You are an irresponsible author if you don't finish this book before it is released. Your own book is like your own child. You can cut it off as soon as you say it is an eunuch. It is irresponsible. How do you expect readers to be responsible to you?

It's poisonous enough, but the characterization is worse than that of a primary school student. The little bastard is also disgusting. Is he jealous? It's annoying to watch this thing talk. If you want to write about a yandere, don't use adjectives like "cute" and so on. It really depends on Yue.

The moment I saw the name of the protagonist, I was already chilled. How dare you to make your protagonist look so big in the face? Hao Ren's title of "Bomberman" has already resounded throughout the multiverse, okay?

After working so hard to upgrade the pet, the protagonist can kill a level 15 priest and a level 8 goblin in a fit of anger. . . . . . . I suddenly became confused. I didn't expect you to be a main force. Then you made the level 2 and 3 monsters so dangerous and relied on pets to kill them. Many humans were killed by level 1 monsters. Suddenly, I didn't understand what kind of combat power the protagonist had. Could he be explosive?

After it was put on the shelves, it was full of water. One SSS level talked about four chapters. Nothing went smoothly after that. Abandon it, disgusting.

886 I'm really sick of watching it. Damn, a game can last for 1 or 2 months. I can't watch it for a week and I'm still writing about the game. It's such a waste.

After reading the back part, I won't talk about it. The description in your heart is cumbersome and long-winded. I can't see the refreshing point in the refreshing article. Do you think it will be refreshing to suppress a wave and then explode? Disgusting people are so disgusting that I feel tired after reading them. I read your two books. The setting is very good, but the protagonist is completely retarded. You are a normal person's negligence once or twice. If the number is too many, the protagonist will not be a normal person. I haven't finished both books. I could see the author laughing angrily before reading. Now that I have learned how to wear a vest, I hope Qidian will not recommend your book to me again🙏🙏

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One update a day is a bit too little, please update it quickly.

No matter what others say, once you finish writing a book, it will be of great benefit to your next book. Don't insist on finishing the more difficult things regardless of the results. If you finish it for him, it will improve you the most. This book proves that your idea is correct, and the experience gained from this book will greatly improve your next book.

I feel like if I want to write this book, why should I write it?

The writing is quite good so far. Come on, author.

If you don't comment, you'll be slapped. I'll comment anyway. Hmm... It feels good and will make you popular.

Could it be that one-stop service for book friends to meet offline was caught?

Write well. I had the courage to finish writing this book and I enjoyed reading it.

I was just wondering when it would be updated, but then I saw it was finished? Well, very naughty

Is the author's nickname Tai Shen?