The Old Days Ascended to Immortality

The author still needs to unify his point of view, start with the village, and let more than 1,000 people die in the village before starting to subdue the demon. The protagonist hates human life, and then it is his turn to watch naked and teach blood sacrifices to thousands of people to open the secret realm. He hides aside without feeling any guilt in his heart. Isn't this an obvious double standard? You can just watch from the sidelines, but others must be there at all times?

This book gave me a very strange feeling. Let's just say that this golden finger can check information. At first, I thought I could check for weird flaws and find ways to crack it. The result is that the golden finger is used as a foreign object illustration, and it is not that helpful in dealing with weird things. They all relied on strength to get through. Don't you think it's strange for the author? He didn't show it at all. This kind of golden finger can modify and innovate the exercises without any experiments. You will know the results just by looking at them. It is the best aid for preparing medicines and treating diseases. Taobao is so awesome to make a profit from the price difference.

Generally speaking, the writing is okay, but there are some operations from time to time to reduce the wit. For example, the protagonist goes on a mission for the first time and harvests a water condensation bead (useful for practitioners of water-based exercises). In the previous chapter, he was still saying that this thing is of great use to practitioners of water-based exercises, and he is going to change it for something better. Then in the next chapter, there is too much water. Duo (the female water-type practitioner surnamed Lu) met the protagonist on the way and said that he had a treasure on him and asked him to take it out. The protagonist was confused, what treasure, what treasure, I don't know, it could be Zhen Gai (when he was still in the village, he watched Shui Duoduo and others, and picked up something from the fight). So, author, it's up to you to take care of this kind of thing. And this kind of similar description is not just once, but appears every now and then, almost every three or four chapters.

You don't need too much mental activity. Especially some mental activities are not suitable for the scene at that time and can easily have the opposite effect.

If you leave women, you won't be able to write books? Licking the dog

If you have any opinions, just mention them in the comment section. You don't have to worry about being criticized. I'm just afraid that no one will criticize me if there are problems with single-player writing.

Originally, the book felt well written, but a lot of the operations and thinking felt like they were forced on you. You can really write this book well, but if you feed me every now and then, I really won't let you accompany me!

When I haven't read a book for a long time, I thought to myself that if the author hadn't taken care of this book, the main character might not be the main character and would have died long ago. .

In a sense, the Holy Mother. Do this based on the worldview.

... I feel like the low-profile version of Changsheng Zhiyi is okay as a book, but there is still a lot of room for improvement😂

I originally wanted to watch it, but the comment said that the protagonist practiced training and became a monster, so I didn't want to watch it. The most annoying thing is training to become a monster.

Here we go, it seems that the old version of Xiu Xian has not produced any great works, and it almost goes into the palace to face the wall.

Stop writing supporting actresses, just like Fang Yuan

Wrong outlook! The logic is confusing!

Those female characters are so well-written, and everything else is pretty good.

Which master's trumpet are you? Your level is really not like that of a novice.

After reading Chapter 9, the writing is actually quite good, but the main plot does not move forward and is always laid out horizontally. I am really too lazy to read any more.

It's good-looking. I thought it was something like the indescribable Dao Ancestor who brings righteousness and correction in the alienated world. It's pretty good-looking, but I still want to see the true immortal in the alienated world of immortality.