My Game Kingdom

The idea is good, but the timing is messed up, and the player's abilities are chaotic. To put it simply, there's no story, no logic. It's that simple.

Reading these kinds of game stories about resurrecting people from other dimensions now feels really ridiculous. Is it really more costly to resurrect people from other dimensions than to resurrect people from the local area?

Do you know what my suggestion is? My suggestion is that this book could be developed in the direction of erotica. 😏

I think this is a self-indulgent work with a very strong sense of exclusivity.

Maybe my IQ is too low; I can't understand what the author is writing... 😢😢😢

Aside from the player's silly writing being quite good, the rest is really messy. Also, the system is unclear.

The story was written from the start with no intention of being comprehensible; it's a jumbled mess. It would have been better if the protagonist simply transmigrated and gained a cheat ability—the ability to summon players from their original Earth under the guise of publishing a virtual reality game—to help them conquer new territories and spread their faith. With that cheat ability, there's no need to wonder where it came from, what its structure is, or why it was chosen as the protagonist.

It's written in a very disorganized way; only the author can understand it, while others can't. If it were out of 100, one point would be too much for this book.

It's a simple thing that's made complicated. It's like explaining the setting in several chapters, but it can really be summed up in one sentence: The protagonist starts by gaining the power of "I Think," but he needs others to believe in him. He pulls people into the world of "I Am Legend," deceiving them into believing it's a virtual reality game to exploit them.

After reading the synopsis, I realized the protagonist is so powerful that he turned the other world into a game…