
There's Something Wrong with Your Script!
你这剧本有问题啊!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 210k Words
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Infinite Flow
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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101Chapters
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It was good at the beginning and was interesting, but in the later stage, the combat worldview collapsed and became too confusing. In fact, it is not impossible to mix worldviews, but the progress was too fast and nothing was solved. I dug a lot of pits and just jumped over without filling them. Later, I felt like I wanted to finish it quickly when I got excited.
I was bored when I watched it earlier! I may not last until chapter 20. The plot is bland and doesn't have much development. (Also, a time-traveler has a God's perspective, that is, he looks at everything in the world he travels from the perspective of the reader. Only when everything is transparent and unchangeable is a time-traveler.)
I have just written more than 20 pieces, are you ready to be a licker again? As for the plot of Poison Ivy, it's really about forcing someone to have a relationship. The main character's IQ drops when he sees a woman, right? Choose this copy. Pay a hammer and call Batman and Gordon to start a team together
The Origin of All Things Arkham, this book is really a licker. If you can't lick it, you still have to lick it. If you read it again after reading this book, you will find that this book is really not that licky. I feel good about it.
Laughing to death, even the author dares to touch the starting point of Big Pit Dog Licking, I would like to call you the strongest
Chapter 11: Really national self-confidence. I have to stress it again. It's awesome.
Not as good as the previous one, even though it's all about dog-licking
Promise me, don't write about dog licking in this book😂
I just read Chapter 19, and I was speechless by the protagonist's operation. We all know that meteorites are still calling us at home, but we haven't used our brains for many years.
The article contains one section in the east and one section in the west. It is in a dream world for a while, and then jumps to the real world of Batman, without going too far. There are no paragraphs, how to write it?
As expected, this guy secretly set off.
The green light represents will, not courage. The guardians chose to use the green light just because they had no special emotional preferences.
The writing is great. The previous chat group with 100 million people had a good start, but it was ruined by the dog-licking plot.
I don't plan to watch this world with this one, because to be honest, I've only heard of and read his comics and novels, but I haven't actually played the game and don't want to read it.
And I read your profile. Your profile says that you mainly write Western fantasy. I don't know why you added this?
After all, this is the author I have been reading. I have always thought that the book "Thugs of the World" is a very good book.
I really like the books you wrote. Although it is a pity that the last one ended, I will continue to read this book. Come on!
I watched the animated version of Alice in Wonderland as a horror movie I think deeply about it every time I watch it.
The first twenty chapters are as bland as water, and I don't feel the desire to continue reading at all. Coupled with various typos and omissions, my personal evaluation is hay.
I like reading this kind of imaginative books very much But I almost fell asleep while reading this book...
The new settings seem quite interesting😸
I can't see the full moon, it just feels boring