The True Lord Spiritual Appearance

Together with the monks who have recently appeared, we can form a Westward Journey combination Crazy Master (Tang Monk position/Wukong position at the critical moment) Chen Yuan (Wukong position) Fat Taoist (Bajie position) Monk (Sha Monk position) p. S. It seems that in addition to military generals, there will also be medical saints and literary saints appearing. It is so satisfying, looking forward to it!

Summary in one sentence: The long plot is not as well written as the short plot. The short plot has a good atmosphere and a strong fairy tale style, so it is worth watching. The logic behind the long plot is relatively passive, and it feels like the protagonist is being pushed around by things. Many things are just a matter of making amends before they happen, so hold your breath! ! ! (For example, Bai Susu didn't notice that the snakes under her were eating people for ten years, so she turned a blind eye and let them wander around the world. It wasn't until she saw Chen Yuan's sword energy that she realized that her subordinates were making trouble and killed them. This plot really made Xiao Bai very fond of her. I always felt that she was a careful type. How could she ignore the matter and not find out for ten years? Don't doubt your own team. What? ) The scene where Xingjun wanted to capture Chen Yuan was really confusing. When Chen Yuan, as Xingjun, fought against the five degenerates of heaven and humans, he descended to earth to become a saint, Xingjun actually jumped out to catch him 😂 During this process, I remember that if it weren't for the master, Chen Yuan almost died, and then it turned into a fight between gods, and then Chen Yuan ended up karma through self-destruction... It's messy! ! To summarize my personal impressions of this book Early period: Puppet show + a collection of small plots similar to Liaozhai + unlocking the wood carving characters (highly recommended, I like it very much, and the atmosphere is in place) Mid period: big plot (discovering historical misinterpretations) + props (obtaining the Kunlun mirror) + fighting gods (solving concubines) (I don't like this part of Journey to the West very much, it appears. There are many foreign gods, mixed with some short stories, which is quite good) Later period: Returning to the main plot of the official history, it feels a bit rushed to finish, there are almost no short stories.

After reading two chapters, I felt that the writing was very familiar. I thought of the Great Master of the Sui Dynasty that I had read a year or two ago, so I went to look up the author's information, and it turned out that it was really you.

Xianxia, ​​there are a few books about Xiaxia, insist on

You have to know, if it weren't for the sacrifice of this little ant, where would the Demon-Suppressing Emperor come from? For the sake of longevity, let go of things that don't go well with your intentions and your heart. What's the point of gaining longevity in this way? To live forever for the sake of eternal life? If what I ask for comes true, it will be okay if I die today.

I have read a lot of modern fairy tale novels, which contain fairy spirit, demonic spirit, divine spirit, and ghost flavor... But they lack popularity, and some of them even have incorrect views. He prides himself on being selfish and cruel, and even calls compassion and kindness the Holy Mother. Although it is just a novel, the author is a human being and so are the readers. Xianxia novels must first be popular (at least the protagonist must be humane) before they can talk about other gods, demons, fairies and ghosts. Otherwise, this novel is not meant for people to read. This novel has always been humane until now. I feel that the protagonist is a human being with some special abilities. A great novel, I hope you stick with it and keep going.

After reading the first three chapters, I thought I had found food and grass, but when I read the seventh chapter, I can only say that the daily poison guide is indeed a daily poison guide. First, the class leader saves the pig's feet or takes in the pig's feet. The story written by the pig's feet makes the class leader popular. If you get the money, you are equivalent to repaying the favor. Second, where is that ghost in the Wang family? Pig's Feet didn't go back all night. The first time the class leader saw Pig's Feet the next day, instead of showing concern, he told Pig's Feet to continue writing the story. The class leader described here is a profit-seeking person. Third, here in Yuanwai, the disciples of the class leader are all selfish people. Then the disciples and the class leader do not ask the reason, randomly connect the cause and effect, knowing clearly that there is a ghost, and want to defraud Yuanwai for a hundred taels of silver. It is not a pity to die, and the pig's feet actually want to save the class. The Lord repays the favor? I don't know why you describe it like this. From this, it can be seen that the character of Pig's Foot is a brainless waste. How can such a character cultivate immortality? Even if he succeeds, he will be persecuted by evil spirits every minute. Of course, it may be that the author does not have the writing skills. Fourthly, according to the author's description, the son of a foreign minister accidentally killed someone because of jealousy, and then the mother of the deceased also died because the white-haired man sent the black-haired man, and the deceased's father took revenge. It is reasonable and reasonable. I don't know why the pig's feet are involved in this kind of cause and effect. Is it just because the pig's feet are the villains, should they die? Moreover, Pig's Foot is not a police officer, so why should he participate? The deceased's father has taken revenge, so of course there are police officers, so what does Pig's Foot have to do with it. This is the review I gave after reading seven of them. To sum up my thoughts after reading them, pig's feet are a waste.

After reading Chapter 16, I was confused by the plot. What did the author want to express? The protagonist meets a crazy old man and develops some magic power (at this time, the protagonist does not know that the statue of Guan Gong has absorbed the incense). Then the county magistrate asked the troupe to perform. The protagonist saw that there was a monk who was harming people (the monk was the victim and came to take revenge. The protagonist also heard about it). He did not run, talk or make trouble. In order to repay the master of the troupe, he did nothing but acted 😵 In the evening, the statue of Guan Gong spontaneously broke the monk's spell and became a enemy of the monk. The Yuanwai's family also knew that there was an expert in the troupe. Then a fight broke out. The victim's monk's family died, Yuan Wai's family died, Yuan Wai's family died, and the wealthy squire who was invited to watch the show died. 😰 The mastermind behind the scenes was the county magistrate who was driven crazy by the protagonist using evil methods. Someone from the victim's monk's sect found out that the protagonist used evil methods to harm people and chased after him. I don't know what to complain about at all. Is the author of this plot serious?

Recommended from Sanjiang and read 12 chapters. Let me tell you about the plot I watched. The protagonist discovered the soul charm and knew that he was in deep danger but refused to leave. You are a rookie. If I remember correctly, you can only enlighten half of the paper frog's body. You don't even know how powerful the person is or what methods he has. You just stay in the Liu Mansion with Old Man Zhao, saying it is to repay the kindness of taking you in. Also, when Li Yuanshan did this for the first time, Guan Yu's statue was stabbed inexplicably. Without this stabbing, all the guests he invited later would not have died tragically. It was unfair. The strangest thing is that when the protagonist is in danger, he still has to say something like "I am the only one who worships you in this world." ? ? It feels like deliberately creating conflicts, letting the protagonist go deep into the whirlpool, and uphold self-righteous justice. Maybe this is the author screening readers.

The writing is readable, the plot is very good, and the world view described is very positive, without any mindless contradiction between good and evil. Cultivation of immortality is not just about upgrading and skills, but more about the state of mind of cultivating immortality. The master of the protagonist is well portrayed, which makes the simple game of fighting monsters and cultivating immortality a little more pyrotechnics, so that the eyes are not filled with levels and various techniques. To end with a sentence, read less comments and read more books. This is my favorite type.

The protagonist can conquer demons, but he can't do it in vain. He has to pay for it. After all, it is very dangerous. If he doesn't handle it well, he will die in minutes, so he must learn to ask for benefits. People with ability are often the guests of high-ranking families. Once you are famous and wealthy, would it be difficult to apply for a household registration in ancient times with a little money? Is it difficult to apply for a degree certificate? The protagonist is a time traveler who has arrived in a mysterious world. He is so holy. His survival to this day depends entirely on his halo, right?

Yes, a very good book, but there is a suggestion to add causation. If there is a cause, there must be an effect. If you interfere in other people's causes, the effects will also be on you. If you see the son of a member of the Communist Party of China killing the other party's son, this is the cause, so when someone comes to take revenge, this is the effect! Without this time traveler, Yuan Wai's son will die, so it is reasonable to ask the city god to take the person. However, if you prevent the consequences from happening, then you will bear the consequences, and you have to pay back the consequences!

The recent plot is actually very unreasonable if you think about it carefully. The protagonist can slaughter an army of 30,000 people by just building a foundation and not following the rules. So, wouldn't the unruly Jindan Qi in Barbarian be able to do it too? If there was a tacit agreement between the two parties not to take action against mortals before the protagonist entered the scene, then after the protagonist entered the scene, why couldn't the barbarian monks take action against ordinary soldiers? Wouldn't the author allow it? Or do you mean that the righteous monks are on tight guard? Has the protagonist ever thought about the consequences?

It's disgusting to see. So if you use repayment as a cover-up, what kind of repayment do you have? Did the script written for the theater troupe bring no profit or fame to the theater troupe? Moreover, the incident with Old Man Wang left the protagonist alone, and no one came to look for him that night, so what kind of kindness could there be? Is this it or time travel? The highlight of time travel is nothing more than our modern vision and perspective. Where can you find it here? Everywhere is revealed to be pretentious and unreasonable, what the hell was written.

The heaven and earth, the sun, the moon, and the stars are the three lights. By practicing the power of the three lights, you can reach the gods of the underworld. The power of the three lights can subdue demons and ghosts. The wisdom of the three rays of light can open up the virtues of the dark and restrained dark; you can exercise the authority of the gods or be crowned by the king of the palace. Reward 1,000 points for encouragement. It is not easy to write from the historical military comfort zone to the Shinto zone! This book should be about following the path of Erlang Shen and becoming the main god. In fact, we still need to make more offerings so that He can come to this latitude more. The stronger the coordinates of the incense and Dharmakaya in this latitude, the stronger the will will be.

Don't use lines about pesticides. Someone who wrote Mulan before came up with the sentence "Sister, she is the queen" and it made me bow down.

When are all the main characters going to have character cards, haha

The plot is incomprehensible, the plot is sparse, and the characters are inconsistent. All I can say is to purify it 😥

Embarrassing. There's something wrong with the protagonist's character. He doesn't look like someone who traveled through time. He looks like a fool. A fool matches a lunatic just right. When a normal person encounters a mentally ill person with a 🔪, he won't run far away and still miss him? In modern society, people are indifferent, and the protagonist's kindness is a bit exaggerated. From his insistence on abandoning the opera master, to his concern for the crazy old man who met him once, to the ghost messenger who comes to help. It's too fake. It's hard to persuade the damn ghost. I just persuaded the master to leave. If he didn't leave, I would take three days off. Knowing that there is an irresistible danger of his own, will he put himself in danger? Han Paopao did the right thing. When he saw something was wrong, he slowly retreated behind everyone.

It's a bit messy to read. Some of the writing is pretty good, but some of it is a bit awkward. The theme of the story is good, but mainly it's a bit messy. There's no sense of immersion.

Author, don't you read the novels you wrote? Why don't you first take a look at what you wrote?

The protagonist's abilities come from nowhere, and nothing is explained clearly. Suddenly, he learns spells just by looking at them, all relying on a torn book and an inexplicable golden finger, which makes him speechless. It is better to just write the golden finger as a book of ghosts and gods. You can use fame and incense to cast ghosts and gods spells. But there are ghosts and gods in this world. If you compete with local ghosts and gods for incense, you will be in a dead end from the beginning.

If the writing is too high or too low, you can't change the protagonist to a clear-headed one.

Avoid poison, brothers, the main character of Our Lady, everyone wants to kill him, but he also lets her go. The explanation is that she has a back-up and cannot be killed. If you co-write, others can kill you indiscriminately. If you defeat her, she will be let go. You are so afraid, why are you cultivating an immortal?

This book is so well written so far. It's rare to see such a good book. Good luck, author! Quickly add more to the shelves. I support you by ordering them all. I would like to make a small suggestion. When I read a book, I usually read the monthly ticket first and then the comment area. I clicked in several times and saw various nitpicks at the top of the comment area, so I didn't click in. This really affects the reading of newcomers. You don't have to delete the comment, but it is best not to let others see the kind of comments that affect their reading when they enter the comment area, and push it down. I feel like this should allow more people to read this book.

The author's standards are there, the writing is smooth and natural, and there is a sense of weirdness, weirdness, and spiritual practice. It is interesting but not mysterious. The drawback is that the initial description of the female cultivator is unsatisfactory and a bit confusing. There are also the names of realms. Nowadays, these realms have been used by bad writers, Bai Wenshuang and Shuangwen to become iconic and ruin the popularity of books that have been around for a long time. The author can learn to use his realm divisions like Lan Ke Qiyuan to write. Otherwise, it will be too easy to use the current realm to jump up the combat power or to enjoy the culture. Only when the realm is blurred can we write better about fairy tales (better art will not be too rigid). After all, a good story is the king.

First-class writing, third-rate plot, tasteless, tasteless

Hezi Wen, he has no skills at the beginning. When he saw Guan Yu appearing for the first time, he already knew that something was really going on with this member's family. Why didn't he run away and wait? This directly caused the people in the back yard to be a disaster for you. There was also a kind character in the back. If the protagonist is really kind, he should go to Zisha and become a holy mother. It's a coincidence. The one who can still be said may have been taken away by others when he came in. When the man behind came in, the protagonist stayed behind and found some movement in the yard. He just ran away. He didn't care about his little ability. People with normal IQs could run at these two points. The protagonist is just like ✓, he just doesn't run.

I'm most annoyed by books like this that are always involved in other people's affairs.

The plot is good, but it's a pity that I don't like nosy novels.