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It's really well written. It was this supernatural smell that made my hair stand on end in the middle of the night. After reading the comment area, I will share my views. Let's talk about the advantages first. The author's words are very emotionally appealing. From the initial search for clues in Shilin's house, to the introduction of the "mother" in the locksmith's house, and the encounter with the reporter from West Mall, the atmosphere when encountering a ghost is well portrayed. You can feel the coldness in your body and the feeling that something is looking at you somewhere. In terms of the main character creation, the boldness of the male protagonist and the cuteness of the nurse doll are both quite vivid. The supporting roles are also remarkable. The shortcomings, I think, are that when reading, it is obvious that the male protagonist has no "spontaneous drive". The driving force of the male protagonist now comes from wanting to find out what happened to his original body before he traveled through time, and to find out who the "man in black" is. But these are passive. It will be dangerous if you don't understand it clearly, so you must do it. If you plan to write a long novel, after the "Man in Black" incident ends in the future, the male protagonist needs to have his own reasons for pursuing these cases. Whether you want to master more supernatural powers or learn more about supernatural beings, it is better than being involved in supernatural events due to unknown circumstances and having to explore. Otherwise, it will be easy to get fatigued if you continue to be passively involved in promoting the plot. It will be very tiring to see the protagonist being pushed around because of the unknown. Also, regarding ghosts and ghosts in the book, I don't know whether the author intends to write a non-combat type or an upgraded monster-killing style. I think the former will be better, so as not to completely lose the supernatural flavor in the middle and later stages. I dare not say anything about the details, such as the rhythm, but it does seem a bit immature at the moment. For example, the paragraph about Ximen Mall seems a bit delayed when I read it. For example, the male protagonist investigated it again by himself and then with Ye Xin. But for online novels, I don't think it's a big deal. As long as there are more, the weaknesses in the plot arrangement are not a problem. 😋 In short, I quite like it. According to the current supernatural situation, I think the author maintains this level, which is at least a niche quality level. Please vote to support it first.

The writing is good, and the plot direction is not something that can be guessed conventionally. I prefer books in this style, and it is worth reading now. I hope there won't be a female protagonist, because most of the novels I read are good at plots but not about emotions. I hope the author will not give up the trap

But it feels a bit uninteresting, so let's just publish another hundred chapters so that readers can savor it carefully.

It's okay to introduce poison every day. I recommend eunuch books every day.

Sent now? , In the future, if newcomers don't have a completed novel with a million words, who will dare to pursue you, subscribe to you, and invest in you? It's boring.

The plot techniques and connections are quite good That's the logic of the entire plot. Is this really normal logic? This reminds me of the book from the starting point called: I am a Worm It's the same, the plot logic of this book is the same, inexplicable, but the navy is very strange, very special, everyone said that this logic is very good Ah, if the author can see this, I would like to ask, is your identity more special, or is this There are many birds who like this logic in the forest (Well, I don't know if the author is strange, but I am very strange anyway. I won't say there are many people who object to the logic of this book, but at least it is impossible that there are none except me. The author of that book directly refused to reply, but because he is too famous, he can still find people who post the same questions as me. Everyone has the same problem)

It's pretty good-looking, but it doesn't match the introduction 😂

Newcomer? This guy is new 😍

Good looking. Pure newbie? Then you are awesome, write well, not to mention the master's plan, at least you can definitely make a living by writing books, it is really suspenseful... By the way, the introduction is a golden finger novel, click on it and you will find that it is a realistic suspense of hell...

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Although the main plot is not clear yet and the setting is also foggy, it is quite interesting The protagonist Mang is really reckless. Without saying anything else, let's be reckless first. This wave is not dead. Let's be reckless again.

The beginning is very strange. In order to clear away the connection with the murder after your rebirth, you should not clean up the clothes that look like the murder weapon and stay away from the scene of the accident. Your motive of running to the murder scene to prove that you are the murderer is very strange. So what if it's proven, do you have to pay off the debt for your predecessor who didn't kill you?

Although we only saw the protagonist in the third chapter, and although it felt like there was no outline, the suspense flavor was quite right, and the comments section was full of praise. Hurry up and remove those irrelevant tags...

Tell me, is this what a person should say?

The writing is okay, but why is it that the introduction and content have not been completed even after 30 chapters? Moreover, it is too mysterious and not good.

The text quality is indeed good to excellent online. But why don't you have a main plot? You are writing a long story, not prose.

Maybe it's because the three golden chapters haven't been written well, so the popularity hasn't increased. The content of the first chapter can be explained in a few paragraphs, just like an introduction or excerpt, so that the protagonist can be quickly introduced instead of reading the summary of the first chapter.

It feels like a mystery article, the first few pictures have been describing psychology. I don't like to watch them anyway. I like folklore, horror and weirdness, but I don't like crime-solving and reasoning. Just work hard and make a miracle happen

It is recommended to change the name. 😰 At first glance, I thought this name was for the protagonist of an urban supernatural type. It feels like the enemy and the enemy are from the same origin as a Kamen Rider. I don't think there is any fantasy content in the back, it's just ordinary crime.

Is this a mystery novel? The descriptions of logic, characters, and pig's trotter's perspective are weird, and I can't understand what the plot is about. At the beginning, the pig's trotter talks about a certain person picked up by a nurse, and sometimes it talks about the reality of past lives. I don't understand what it is about. Are these common ways of writing mystery themes?

By the way, can anyone recreate the glory of suspense? What will become of our suspenseful partition in the end? Now the monthly vote list has mysteriously recovered. There hasn't been anything good to watch in the past two years, and I can't stand the man-machine writing in Mysterious Resurrection. When will our suspense area be revived?

I just saw it from the daily guide today. Is it correct? 😢

To be honest, reading this book feels like reading I Have an Adventure House for the first time. Although the writing is a bit worse, the style is very similar. It's a pity that it was cut.

It's quite interesting, but it's just too little, and too little is leaked out. Come on, author.

It feels good and bad at the same time. The plot is really interesting, but the setting is a bit boring. I feel that this book has gone in the wrong direction from the beginning. It is useless to say more and I have already cut it. I hope the next one will be better.

It's a pity, but my favorite thing in this book is the little nurse doll. This kind of safe dirty thing looks quite cute 😊 I hope there will be similar characters in the next book.

The suspense data is already very good, but the result is still cut 🤤