First Grade Elixir

A brief discussion on the narrative and characterization of the three books of Babao Actually, I have complained about it several times in the book review section of the chapter before, but recently I couldn't hold it in after re-reading Daomen. Babao smiled when he saw Quan, please don't affect your creation of this work. Mainly from three aspects: 1 The logic of the plot is self-consistent Let me put it simply and crudely. Babao uses a lot of tricks in this book and uses a lot of slap-in-the-face routines and black-and-white tricks in this book. To be honest, as a reader who followed the Eight Treasures Book from the Taoist period, I feel very uncomfortable. Although Sansan said before in the discussion that this is a new attempt, from the perspective of reading experience, I personally don't like the routine of this kind of novice novel. (I dare not speak for others, only for myself) Take the recent plot of the Academy Interrogation as an example. Compared with the two reversals of public recommendations in Dao Sect, the plot design is too thin and rough. A slap in the face just for the sake of a slap in the face, the characters appearing in the show are all out of character except for one's own camp, which leads to plot disorder. Take Zuo Shenyin's scientific research behavior in the Qihai world in this book as an example. The research on self-propelled plows in Daomen was completed by a team for more than 10 years after the accidental participation of Zhuge Jiaguang. During this period, a lot of subsidiary scientific research results were developed. Logically speaking, there is no problem at all. And what about the left side of the book? For a person who has never received education in modern basic natural subjects, you ask him to skip the scientific research accumulation and just rely on a few instilled formulas and theorems to reach the forefront of scientific research in natural subjects? Is he a genius in the natural sciences? Judging from the previous description, he is obviously not, and his intelligence is worrying. Then this kind of plot is like a tree without roots and a castle in the air. Even for modern college students, if you throw in an introduction to quantum physics and analysis of biological genetic maps, 90% of them will not be able to understand it. How many non-major college students can understand the COVID-19 research papers in nature and science? Natural subjects are not social subjects (especially political and economic subjects). For the latter, you can take modern political and economic theories and slap them directly on the head of the ancients. If you encounter geniuses among them, you can learn and use them immediately. This is also the rational basis for the characters such as shopkeeper Liang of Xixia and the general manager of the Duanmu family in the book Daomen to quickly accept and operate the advanced market and economic manipulation methods proposed by Zhao Ran. But I think the natural subjects part of this book is very poisonous. Of course, it's not like other authors have made similar settings in their books. But in general, it is not as good as Daomen in terms of logical self-consistency. 2 The abolition and unification of characters In terms of character design and characterization, from the current point of view, Daomen is still the pinnacle work. To put it simply, there are no useless characters. Each character who appears has his or her own background, personality, outlook on life, and relationship between the characters. Moreover, the behavior of the characters is dialectically unified with their personality. Even if the behavior of the characters changes to a certain extent, there are traces to follow, and it can even be said to be a blur. At the same time, the portrayal of the characters is three-dimensional, rich and full, and the characters and the storyline basically achieve a harmonious symbiosis between people and people. A few examples: Zhao Ran's choice between good and evil, such as the choice between the emperor and the queen mother fighting for Suo in Ye Yunxuan. It's hard to say that Zhao Ran is a pure and kind saint here, because the story is designed so that the objects of contention are on the opposite side of the general background. What if the holders of the rope are Li Dayin, Luo Zhiqing, Dongfang Jing, and Lu Zhiqing? It has been said more than once in the book not to test human nature. Even so, it still does not affect the fullness of Zhao Ran's image. The respective demeanor of the two heroines, Zhou Yumo's charming and naive loyalty when facing Zhao Ran in addition to asking questions, and Rong Niang's scheming skills in facing Zhao Ran's virtuous and gentle manner, are all portrayed in a three-dimensional and vivid manner. The behavioral changes of Shao Yuanjie, Chen Daoshan, and Li Dayin, and the changes of Du Tenghui, I think are models for describing character changes in Taoism. The background, motivation, and purpose are all clearly explained, and they fit perfectly with the background of the story. They are not obtrusive and reasonable. Other characters also have clear character trajectories in their respective home arenas, which are more reasonable in connection with the corresponding stories. To put it simply, the characters stand up. In the book Taoist Master, it is a test of writing ability to reasonably integrate the various vest characters designed by readers into the story, but Babao successfully did it. In fact, I personally think that the writing power of Babao in the Taoist book is more advanced than that of Daomen, but the story design and character portrayal are a bit lazy. As for the characters in the book Yipin, I don't know if they were influenced by the editor. Like most authors from Qidian, Babao began to strengthen the label attributes of the characters and established the characters by stacking labels. This was very clever, but the characters were difficult to establish. If we use Japanese dramas as an analogy, these characters who rely on labels are the tool men of instant noodles and cuteness dramas. In fact, starting from the middle period of the book Taoist Master, all the characters appearing on the stage have become tool men. The character design in the early stage is still very brilliant, such as Shen Pearl's appearance and exit. Babao cleverly used historical allusions and legends to reasonably connect this character with the protagonist's story. But starting from the middle and late stages, such detailed and careful conception and description of characters can no longer be seen. This is even more true when it comes to this book. Except for the fact that the protagonists are all pure tools, this writing method is very clever. If you are writing a novice novel such as xtian/xrenxxianzhuan, it doesn't matter (because you don't need to use your brain to read it), or writing a short and medium story is fine, but in a long story, the characters will be extremely thin and the storyline will be difficult to develop. If Babao's three books are a cosmology, then Taoism is a three-dimensional world, Taoist priest is 2.5 Dimensions, and this book is two-dimensional. 3 Deep Thoughts and Thoughts This part is actually not easy to draw a conclusion because the book has not been finished yet, but I still want to talk about it briefly. From Babao's Dao Sect to now, the only books I have followed based on the author of the Qidian books are Babao and Another Squid. The writing skills of the first few books were too poor to read, so I only followed Mystery and the last Wasteland, but I haven't finished Wasteland yet. The main reason why I pursue Babao's books is that I personally think that 1 Babao's books are not white 2 His writing skills are relatively mature 3 The most important point is that the writing is very clearly reflected in Babao's books. It's a bit exaggerated to say that you can learn how to be a good person from Babao's books, but it is quite helpful to observe, experience and reflect on your own methods of doing things and how to deal with the world. The book "Tao Sect" tells the story of Zhao Ran's transformation from a laborer to one of the makers of Tao Sect rules. The ups and downs during the period are vertical and horizontal, and the officialdom management has both the ups and downs of the story and the inevitable consequences of the interaction of the characters. Although the protagonist's practice direction is limited, the thoughts and behaviors of serving the country and the people still make people feel both high-level and down-to-earth. In the Taoist chapter, the protagonist is basically looking for cooperation and balance in interests throughout the article. Although it is not as lofty as the Taoism, one or two truths can be gained from it. But this book, so far, contains intrigues, exclusions, and cooperation for interests, but the entire narrative is like children playing house, very childish; due to the collective intelligence of the supporting characters, the story lacks texture. In summary, as an old reader who has followed Daomen to the present, I can understand the current creative status of Babao, but I have reservations about the story design and character portrayal of this book. At present, the book is estimated to be more than halfway progressed. I don't know what to plan for in the future. I will continue to follow this book, but selfishly I will put my expectations on Babao's next book. Finally, I am very grateful to Babao for keeping up with the creative progress after work and giving in-depth text feedback to readers. I hope to see more interesting works.

I couldn't help but express my feelings: My cousin really wrote a book about immortals, why don't fellow Taoists believe it?

The influence of Jixia Academy is so great that it is inconsistent with the background of the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period. Jixia Academy belonged to Qi State in history, so his influence was mainly in Qi State, but other countries only had the influence of reputation. Firstly, after reading this book for a long time, I couldn't figure out which country Jixia Academy was in. Secondly, I couldn't understand why it had influence beyond the country. Because human beings are born political creatures, and during the Spring and Autumn Period, war among various countries was the main line. In this case, whichever country Jixia Academy is in will inevitably be bound to that country. For example, if it is in the Chu State, then he first wants the Chu State to give him a piece of land and allow him to run a school. Then the students in your school must be given priority by the Chu State, and many of your teachers must be from the Chu State or close to the forces of the Chu State. In doing things, they will inevitably become more and more biased toward Chu. This is just like the reason why Harvard will inevitably favor the United States. In this case, other countries will naturally resist your Jixia Academy. Especially when it comes to practical interests, such as refining the elixir of longevity, if you ban it in any country, I will openly refining it and sell it for money in other countries. You said that the ban was approved by our country's laws? What is your official position in our country? Do you want to declare war by sending experts to our country? Your Jixia Academy can expand its influence. If you help your country unify China, and conquer the territory, where will your influence extend? Don't think of anywhere else. At the beginning of the article, everything was near Chu State, so I thought if Jixia Academy was in Chu State, then it would be okay for the protagonist to escape from the Chu State border, but then it didn't feel like it. Also, the technological leadership of Jixia Academy is exaggerated. In the Spring and Autumn Period, when a hundred flowers bloomed, it was actually the situation when everything just started to develop, especially the most advanced combat power related to cultivating immortals. It must have started not long ago. Just like each country has its own advantages, the cultivation system and weapon refining should also have their own advantages. Why is it that during this period, your Jixia Academy can focus on the best talents and technical skills such as cultivation and alchemy? Just by relying on the nuclear weapon-like existence of these anti-virtual masters to operate better, the country where Jixia Academy is located can easily unify the Spring and Autumn Period. From now on, you can control Jixia Academy as you like, ban the Longevity Pill and the Heavenly Book, as you like. Instead of the current situation where countries are fighting each other and the conflicts are extremely deep, your Jixia Academy can both transcend the outside world and control the radiation of the whole of China. Yes, if there is no process of how this was formed, I really feel that the author has made a strong setting for Jixia Academy.

This time it's true cultivation! ---Babao Rice "First Grade Alchemy" In an accident, Wu Sheng, a college student, traveled to the Spring and Autumn Period and became Wu Sheng, an assassin of the same name who was at the peak of the God Refining Realm. Assassin Wu Sheng suffered severe injuries after a failed mission and lost all his cultivation. Wu Sheng, a college student, relied on his excellent acting skills to play the role of an assassin while evading the pursuit of the academy while also looking for opportunities to reshape the sea of ​​​​Qi. From then on, Wu Sheng, who came from another world, received the reward from Jixia Academy, followed Mu Taoist to learn the Book of Heaven and reshape the Qi Sea. He fought wits and courage in Langshan Mountain, and worked as an alchemist in Yong Kingdom. His vest could be Wu Sheng, Shen Wu, Shen Wu, Wu Sheng, Sun Wu... Step by step, he entered the academy and became the leader of the academy. Eight Treasure Rice adheres to the writing style of "The Law of the Taoist Sect" and "Where Are the Taoist Priests?", With beautiful and capable writing, and vivid and interesting plots. Especially in the volume "Deep Sea", the tossing and turning inside the academy is described in an amazing way and has a long aftertaste. The current progress is more than 1 million words, updated twice a day. I have never asked for leave since the book was opened. Updates are guaranteed. Welcome everyone to enter the Eight Treasures Universe and start a new journey of cultivating immortals~

It feels quite outrageous. It always makes the protagonist turn around and turn around again. The key is the strong reversal, without the natural flow of self-heating. It seems that in order to write about the battle of wits and courage between the protagonist and the villain, the battle of wits and courage is written in a large space and on a single event. The logic of the event is ignored, which affects the development of the plot. It can feel that the author is unique, making it difficult to penetrate into the situation, and feeling a sense of contradiction and violation.

Picking peaches and bullying subordinates who have no background are the basic operations of a selfish boss. Moreover, since he gave Cui Ming a sum of money and promoted him, and the reason was for his son's marriage, Fei Wuji's operation was barely considered decent. Zhaoyuan is just a bridge of communication, reminding you of the risks that may arise when information asymmetry occurs: Fei Shaofu, Cui Ming's business also includes the shares of Sun Wu and Xue Zhong, two big city walkers. The proceeds from taking Yan Luoshan by force were Yan Luoshan's assets, but the price included offending the two men who were exercising power. Whether this business is worthwhile or not is worth re-evaluating. Fei Wuji is a villain, but not a fool. According to this logic, Fei Wuji's concession should be a high probability event. However, my prediction is that Fei Wuji will not give in and will be unexpectedly tough. When I read historical stories, I was often used to one-sided and simplistic characters. For example, Fei Wuji, a villain, offered Meng Ying to the King of Chu for his own selfish purposes, alienated the King of Chu's father and son, and framed Wu Zixu's family, Bo Pi's family, etc., Which eventually led to the Chu country being in danger and his own clan being destroyed. But was the King of Chu in history really that confused? Did Fei Wuji's behavior contain a more complicated background? When I first saw Tang Xuanzong in "Where Are the Taoists?", He was greedy for money and obsessed with singing and dancing. Seeing the Anshi Rebellion taking shape step by step, I really sighed and hated Xuanzong's mediocrity. But the fact is that money is the bargaining chip for soaring, singing and dancing are the rituals of formation, the world is about to be annihilated, and iterations of dynasties or eternal generations are no longer meaningful. This plot was really a wake-up call for me, and it reminded me of how many times I had made completely different judgments due to lack of knowledge, structure, level, etc. In this world of Eight Treasures, the higher-level battles involved have reached the level of the ancient true gods. Since both Longshou and Bu Sanshi covet the gods such as Lingshan Space and Dayu Space, it cannot be ruled out that there is a Hedao or even an ancient god boss behind Fei Wuji, and he has discovered the secret of Yanluoshan. Even Fei Wuji's previous sacrifice of Meng Ying to the King of Chu was a calculation by the big boss behind it. In addition, from the perspective of the novel, the pistol pulled out must have fired bullets. When Sun Wu arranged for Xue Zhong to guard his home, he was already doomed to have a war in the Yangzhou school. Since Fei Wuji and Wu Sheng had a dispute on Yanluo Mountain, it would definitely be difficult to resolve. Moreover, the protagonist of the novel needs to constantly face higher-dimensional dangers to ensure the urgency of the plot. Then let Fei Wuji lead the big boss fight later.

I seem to have seen Wu Sheng's box of gold somewhere...

Start the path of mediocrity to hegemony. First cannibalize and assimilate the southern barbarians. If you want to be rich, build roads first. The road has become a country, and the people around you will soon become Chinese. After the country becomes strong, it will destroy the surrounding small countries, and the fish country will be in danger. After defeating all the barbarians, Chu will be in danger.

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It seems that there must be an idiom solitaire, right? Let's start with it. The new book is on the market. Congratulations on getting rich.

Sun Wu is the assassin Wu Sheng, and there are also Ji Bai, Shen Wu and other vests. The world doesn't know where he came from, nor does he know where he came from. He first learned swordsmanship, lived in Yunmengze Tianmen Mountain, and made his career as an assassin. After joining the world, he killed seventy and two people. He was seriously injured and lost his sword. He was trapped in the capital of Ying. He was wanted by Dasuo and Jixia Academy of Chu State. After wandering around many places, he escaped to the shore of Yingshui River and under the cliff of Langshan Mountain to avoid disasters. He found a cave and built a beautiful garden of pine and bamboo, calling himself the layman of pine and bamboo. During this period, he practiced alchemy, cultivated alchemy, and made alchemy as a career. He joined the gang of Lanqiao thieves and committed crimes in Pengcheng; he also committed himself to the master of Shenyin Peak and set fire to Dangshan Mountain. The person who committed the crime was the hero of the Wolf Mountain, and his desperate actions were not tolerated by the sect. When dangers and dangers overwhelm the enemy, when he is wary and uneasy; when he is running around in panic and his life hangs by a thread, he assumes the alias of Sun Wu and corrects his origin to show off to others. As his deeds became apparent and his reputation grew, Sun Wu's alias was mistakenly changed to Sun Wu, and his pseudonym of Jin State in Hedong was changed to Qi State in Shandong Province.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               by a divination master, may have said: Wu Sheng of the two generations, should assist Wu Sheng. Xuan was entrusted by Prince Guang to assassinate King Liao of Wu. He assumed the name of Chef Zhuanzhu, used his sword to fly and hid it in the bellies of fishes, and a comet struck the moon, so he faked his death and escaped. Helu ascended the throne, worshiped him as the general, and led the Wu division to attack the powerful Chu. Use guerrilla warfare to attack the east and west to harass the exhausted enemy; use mobile warfare to make detours and outflank and annihilate. He has countless strategies and has repeatedly accomplished extraordinary feats. In the ninth year, the capital of Ying was conquered. Since King Zhao, Wu Ji was captured and the famous sword of Ou Yezi was recovered. In the meantime, the subordinates of the Jixia Academy who were practicing and walking were destroyed and built as a capital. After his triumphant return, he said: "The heaven and the earth are not perfect, the saints are not omnipotent, and all things are useless." So he hung up his seal, took off his armor, went boating in the rivers and lakes, abandoned his sword and hid, and became an elixir. Legend has it that the Yue girl has A Qing, a shepherd, who can defeat three thousand Yue armors with bamboo and wood. Her swordsmanship is magical, inherited from the ape slave owned by Sun Wu; Ye Shigong said: "The legends about Sun Wu and his life are either false, false, exaggerated, or exaggerated. Therefore, there is a sigh of "a thousand-year dream, all the experiences are yellow beams"... However, "Ten steps can kill a person." , Thousands of miles without leaving a trace. When things are done, they go away and hide their bodies and names. This is the case for righteous men in ancient and modern times. This may or may not be true, but it is true that it is not deceived by its ambitions and its reputation will be passed down to future generations."

Zuo Shenyin was finally killed by Yu Fengxing. Let's not talk about Zuo Shenyin's mistakes. If Master Sun Wu had not appeared for a while, would Yu Fengxing still kill him so painfully? No, but will continue to expand the pie and continue to use it, and will not take action until it is completely unusable. So does Zuo Shenyin have any strategy to break the situation? The pessimistic view is, no. Zuo Shenyin's appeal has always been clear, which is to restore the country. Is Yu Fenxing able to help him regain his country? Under the trend of unification, it should be impossible for Yu Zongzhi to buck the trend. And even if Yu Shixing has this ability, can Zuo Shenyin provide corresponding exchange value? The tragedy of beating a worker is that his status is not equal to that of his boss, and he usually needs help from his boss. The result of this is that when we make deals or games with our leaders, we are usually the losers. If we are not careful, we may even become a victim of the struggle between the bosses in the office. So, in this dangerous environment where small things are often squeezed out and big things are occasionally sacrificed, how should migrant workers protect themselves and seek their own development? First, obey the rules. The system is the biggest constraint for everyone, and it can also be used as the biggest guarantee. Yubaba in Spirited Away is powerful and terrifying, but Chihiro, who lost the protection of her parents, had no chance of winning. But when Qianxun insisted on a job, Yubaba had to arrange a job for her. Because this is the rule, even if you steal, there is a way. When Yu Fengxing dealt with Shimen, he had to set up a trap; when he strangled Zuo Shenyin, he also had to prepare an "explanation" carefully. This is about following the rules. On the other hand, Zuo Shenyin wanted to kill Luo Lingfu and Ziyu when something unexpected happened. He also wanted to ask Master Yutian to uphold justice after killing the important officials of the academy. This is unruly. Second, keep ambition. Yanbo layman directly offended the son of the plane because of his lust; Yongguo was destroyed because he was greedy for the power of the great power and ignored his own growth; Qingshu sold out because of his love for power, and also lost power because of his love for power. In short, there is no real ambition in the heart, and what you want is superficial and unrealistic. Third, know how to adapt. For example, Hall Master Song can join Langshan as a bandit, or he can enter the palace as an official. At the same time, he can select talents in an eclectic way. Of course, the best example is the protagonist Wu Sheng. Going to Hufang is not to become a doctor, but to restore Qi Hai. I am grateful for the kindness of Mu Taoist master and disciple, and I am willing to give a kind reminder, but in times of danger, I still have to hide in the cave and not make unnecessary sacrifices. When there is an opportunity, risk your life to save Jin Wuhuan, and don't forget to steal some property. In Langshan, there is no greed for money. Be on the mean and don't be obsessed with status. In the academy, do not indulge in power. Wu Sheng is lucky. He has a generous boss in Langshan who takes him to make a fortune together; he has a monarch who appreciates him in Shangyong and they expand the territory together; and he has a wise and knowledgeable boss in the academy who constantly supports him. Wu Sheng was also unfortunate. Zuo Shenyin of Langshan changed hands and wanted to sell him; Qingyu separated from him under the good situation, and the country was eventually destroyed; the future between the protagonist and the school's Yu Xusheng should also be difficult to reconcile. But these fortunes and misfortunes have never affected Wu Sheng's ultimate goal-the pursuit of the great road. The money earned by Langshan has been turned into grains of spiritual sand for practice; the fiefdom of Mangdang Mountain is to obtain more resources for practice; the purpose of seeking the protection of the Academy is to obtain more secure practice. To put it simply, on the premise of not violating laws and disciplines, first determine your lifelong career plan, and then prioritize your work according to your own plan. If it is beneficial to your own career development, do more and do it better regardless of the cost; for things that are of little value to your own development, if the rules allow it, you can delay it and mess with it as much as possible, but you must keep your face intact. Know how to advance and retreat, and don't do anything that crosses the line; have choices, and don't be bound by false reputations. Looking at Taoist Master Babao again, perhaps the writer is his avenue and his works are his sea of ​​qi. All the work he usually does can provide nutrients for enriching and perfecting the Qi sea. Then no matter what he encounters, he can calmly say, I am a writer, and these experiences are my precious materials.

The jianjia is green and the white dew is frost.

Qingshu is a very interesting person. He is the hidden clue to several mysterious cases, and there are many doubts: 1. When Qingshu sent the message to Shimen, who did he mean? 2. Qingshu was promoted to walking, who accepted his fate? 3. Qing Shu rushed to Shouchun, who arranged it? 4. Who is Qingshu from? This volume is called Deep Sea, so Deep Sea must be Wu Sheng/Sun Wu/Shen Wu/Wu Sheng? Could Qingshu be the deep sea? Or Mount Emei? The following will first sort out the scene where Qingshu appeared, and then try to explore the above issues. ## Qingshu's first appearance was to round up Shimen Yu followed the arrangement, and Luo Lingfu (who was still walking at the time) rounded up Shimen and surrounded him in Longxing Mountain. However, Luo Heyu surrounded and refused to attack, saying that he was waiting for the order from the real Tianshi. Qingshu came with [Zhenren Xin]'s order, "Qingshu passed the message and obeyed it." After that, Qingshu showed the [Jiang Fengxing] token and sent a message, "My family's Fengxing said that the matter of the Longevity Pill was obscured by outsiders, so I left the messenger. It happened that my practice has reached a critical point and I need to retreat for three years, so I don't plan to pay attention to it anymore. This matter is over. My family believes that they only know Shi Zizhong walking in the academy, but they don't recognize the big thief Shi Men. Shi Zizhong is also in seclusion, and we don't know how long it will take to get out. As for the thief in the Pengcheng case, he should be severely punished and dealt with quickly. In order to avoid damaging the reputation of the school." At this time, Yu Fengxing felt strange and doubted: "Isn't this Jiang Fengxing's intention? Could it be Master Yutian's intention?" Qingshu's reply was "[Master Yutian] "The meaning is what Jiang Fengxing meant, and there is no difference between the two." Afterwards, in front of Shimen, Qingshu repeated the first two paragraphs of the message, both of which said "Jiang Fengxing", so that Shimen thought Jiang was heartless and committed suicide. Afterwards, Qingshu held an umbrella for Yu Zongxing, got into Yu's car, and returned to Linzi together. ``` As a messenger at this time, Qingshu had a detached attitude. As a disciple of Jiang Fengxing, he held a license to act on behalf of Jiang Fengxing. However, he seemed to rely on Master Yutian and dared to "correct" Jiang Fengxing's attitude. What's interesting is that at this time, Qingshu and Zhenren Xin-Yu Shixing were living in harmony: holding Xin Zhenren's handwriting (instead of Yutianshi), holding an umbrella for Yu Zhenxing. ``` ## Qingshu's second appearance was during a walk in Yangzhou When he came to deal with Sun Wu's problem, Qingshu's first concern was why Sun Wu didn't take the initiative to surrender. He then generously submitted a letter of recommendation from the Song Dynasty and accepted Sun Wu into his school, thus winning the hearts of Zhongli Sophora Flowers in a nostalgic manner. Then Qingshu began to make friends with high-ranking officials in Yangzhou, and began to expand financial opportunities for his subordinates. In order to handle cases, he began to dispatch Sun Wu. However, Sun never responded enthusiastically to Qing Shu. Later, Qing Shu began to feel uneasy because of the fact that Xue Xingxing was studying in Yingdu. Later, Zai Qingshu even sent Zhong Li to investigate the relationship between Sun Wu and Wu Sheng. After finding no results, he also recruited a bunch of friends for Sun. Sun Sui, who felt that his power was weak, deliberately bypassed Sun and gradually built his own team. Inspired by the Yingdu Academy, Qingshu also began to arrange for Zhongli to start solving the backlog of cases. As a result, Sun Wu hit every target and solved the backlog of cases. Luo Lingfu, who was later promoted to the post of minister, presided over the roundup of Shen Douke, and Sun Wu's detection of the fake elixir case was related to it. He admired Sun Wu's ability to solve the case and wanted to recruit Shen Wu to round up the case. However, Qingshu became even more jealous at this time and arranged for someone to "slander" Sun Wu as Wu Sheng to prevent him from solving the case. ``` At this time, Qingshu showed that he was in a position of great importance, he was able to move around, he had the skills to control his subordinates, and he was motivated. As for jealousy and aggression, they were all manifestations of "motivation". Correspondingly, there was also the "unscrupulous" part. Even though he knew that Sun Wu had nothing to do with Wu Sheng, he still had to use this to delay. ``` ## Qingshu's third appearance was to suggest that Jingtai attack Yangzhou Academy Qingshu returned to Linzi to recuperate after being injured. At this time, he had recovered and returned to his original unit: Jiang Fengxing's Qifu Pavilion. After Wu Sheng and others attacked Shouchun Academy, he rushed from Linzi to Shouchun. When Jingtai met Qingshu, he was very cautious towards him because "Qingshu had been abandoned by Jiang Fengxing a long time ago." There is a big question here. When was this abandonment? After the Shimen case? Or after the Shen Dou Ke case? Or even before the Stone Gate case? ? Seeing Jingtai's suspicion, Qingshu took out Jiang's token and explained, "Everyone has misunderstood Yu Shu about what happened back then. Shu doesn't know how to explain it, but we should work together now... Jiang Fengxing personally ordered Shu to come to Shouchun, and asked Jing Xingxing not to doubt anymore." There is also something arousing here: What is "what happened back then"? "Jingtai asked a few more questions, and Qingshu answered correctly, so I believed him." It can be seen at this time that Jingtai, as a die-hard Jiang family, is very suspicious of Qingshu. The token cannot convince him, but he also checked other information, and Qingshu answered it. But about the token: when it is deprecated, will the token be withdrawn? Or are the tokens only issued every time Jiang takes the place of Chuanzhi? Then Qingshu talked about Sun Wuxian's submission to grab the credit. Jingtai said at this time, "I sent people to Linzi to submit the submission seven days ago. It should have been received long ago. I am still wondering why Jiang Fengxing has not sent the letter yet, but Yuan Zhonghe went there in person!" Therefore, it is possible that Shizui Jing submitted the document earlier, including Jingtai, his deployment "Yuan Zhonghe", and the head of the inner stall who actually received the document. Qingshu intercepted Jingtai, and then proposed a plan to attack Yangzhou. Later, he and Jingtai were ambushed and seriously injured. Two of his retainers died. ``` The Qingshu here is an image of guilt. He was abandoned by Jiang Fengxing because of what happened back then, but he explained that Jiang has re-enabled him now. He is holding a token and can still answer questions about things around Jiang as usual. Either what he said is true, or the source of the information knows Jiang well. ``` ## Sorting out the high-level struggle lines So far, Babao has revealed the truth about the Shimen case. The so-called Pengcheng robbery case was the fishing law enforcement of the Xin Zhenren-Yu Fengxing-Luo Xingxing group against the Jiang Fengxing (not mentioning Yu Tianshi's attitude)-Shi Xingxing group. Legalistically speaking, the Xin Zhenren family knew the law and broke the law. They smuggled longevity elixirs privately and could not get on the stage. In addition to the huge profits Wu Sheng guessed, perhaps the most important thing was the private worship of the Dragon Head God. Worshiping requires resources, and the fastest way to get resources is private elixirs. This means that the Xin family has both resources and "divine help", and is quite powerful. The Jiang family may be "checking for cheating" from the perspective of maintaining rules, or it may be a larger game between the gods. One thing worth noting is that Jiang Fengxing is in charge of the Qi Fu Pavilion. In this book, this is the only place that requires "shou " to use magic power. In the Taoist universe, receiving is a kind of heavenly recognition. In theory, it is an ability obtained by applying to the righteous god (realm). Therefore, from the perspective of the "great battle", it is understandable that the Jiang family is relatively conservative about orthodox rules. However, the Academy is just dogmatism and opportunism? Huzi and Wang have not yet clarified the four major harmonies, so there is still a lot of room. ## Back to the original question Now we go back to the beginning: 1. When Qingshu sent the message to Shimen, who did he mean? 2. Qingshu was promoted to walking, who recommended it? 3. Qing Shu rushed to Shouchun, who arranged it? 4. Who is Qingshu from? These questions are still difficult to answer, but there are some interesting paths Scenario 1: Qingshu is Jiang's person 1. Qingshu is Jiang's person, which conveys Jiang's meaning. Jiang just seduces Shimen and cannot be abandoned decisively. This time, continuing to investigate longevity pills is a battle of ideas. 2. Qingshu traveled to Yangzhou to solve the Shimen case on Jiang's recommendation. In addition to passing orders, Qingshu was responsible for the crime of abandoning the disciples, so he was temporarily abandoned. However, in fact, Jiang was still using Qingshu. 3. It was Jiang's order to rush to Shouchun. Because the accusation from Yangzhou arrived first and no news of Shouchun was received, Jiang was worried and asked Qingshu to go. 4. Qingshu is Jiang's person through and through. Scenario 2: Qingshu is Yutianshi's man 1. What Qingshu conveys is Yutianshi's meaning. Because of the seriousness involved in the case, in order to protect Jiang, and perhaps cut off Jiang's love, Yutianshi abandoned Shimen and sent Qingshu to correct Jiang's intention to convey to Shimen. 2. Qingshu was expelled by Jiang because he killed Shimen, but Master Yutian still rewarded him and allowed him to travel to Yangzhou and leave Linzi. This not only gave him real power but also avoided conflicts with Jiang. 3. Qingshu rushed to Shouchun on Master Yutian's wish, because it was not difficult for Master Yutian to obtain Jiang's token and become familiar with Jiang. Probably to help Ginger. 4. Qingshu is a member of Yutianshi. He is motivated and motivated. He can skip the middleman Jiang and directly contact the big boss. Why not do it. What is more difficult to explain in this scene is Master Yutian's attitude towards the rules. Scenario 3: Qingshu is a detective of the Xin Department 1. What Qingshu conveyed was the meaning of Zhenren Zhenren. Master Yutian faced Jiang's subordinates for committing the crime, and in order to protect Jiang and cooperate with Xin, he gave Qingshu vague authorization and let him handle the camera. 2. When Qingshu walked in Yangzhou, it was the Master Xin or Master Yutian who rewarded him. This place is more troublesome because Yu and Luo made it clear that Song Mu was the one who wanted to go to Yangzhou last time. Qingshu was "carried out" by the other party, either in Yuluo's eyes. 3. Qingshu rushed to Shouchun, which was arranged by the Xin family. As Jiang's disciple, Qingshu's status should be no problem, but he was abandoned by Jiang. It may be that Jiang discovered his unscrupulous side and was incompatible with Jiang who upheld the rules. This may have been Jiang's affair in Shimen. The reaction after the incident may be that Jiang had expelled Qingshu a long time ago, because in the Shimen incident, as long as Xin and Master Yutian reconciled well, Jiang could be completely bypassed, and the same was true for the waist card that Jingtai saw. As for the answers, as long as the intelligence network is good enough, the answers will not be wrong. 3.1 From this, Qingshu may have deliberately misled Jingtai when he went to Shouchun. Because of this arrangement, Jingtai was allowed to go to Yangzhou. It not only gave him the idea, but also provided him with the strength to support him, making it easy for Jingtai to fall into the trap. Otherwise, if Jingtai went to Linzi, then it would be a serious crime for Sun Wu to attack Shouchun Academy. 3.2 Wu Sheng expected to guide Jingtai to Yangzhou, because he arranged for Xue Xingxing to guard Yangzhou from the beginning, and also made preparations for the details of seizing the dungeon. This kind of plan may be just a kind of insurance, but it may also be a comprehensive arrangement. If it is a plan, the only thing that is uncontrollable is Jingtai's whereabouts. The appearance of Qingshu makes this uncontrollable become controllable. If all this is Xin Xi's arrangement, it is quite reasonable. 3.3 During Qingshu's trip, two of his disciples died, but he solved a big trouble for the Xin family, which is in line with his character of using any means to gain power. 4. Qingshu is a member of Zhenren Xin, and looks like Jiang's disciple. His true identity is not known to outsiders, not even Luo Heyu. Qingshu is the deep sea. The Yutianshi line is already noble, why would he bother to change jobs? The advantage of the Xin family is that they are rich in resources and have "divine help". If they are taken to see the dragon head once, it is not difficult to imagine that Qingshu, a character who will do whatever it takes to gain power, will switch sides if he is so shocked. Which one of the above three scenarios will it be? Or even a mixture of which ones? Hahaha, it's just my imagination, welcome to discuss.

It felt good to me at the beginning, but it became more and more toxic from the time of Reshaping the Qi Sea. I endured it until I read Chapter 73, but I still couldn't resist it, so I came here to post a comment.                                  1. The plot of alchemy is too poisonous. Theory and practice are two different things. Strong theory also requires experience gained from practice. I have only seen Xiaojin Alchemy 5 times and know the ratio and technique. The protagonist can produce one pill three times in the first refining. I can't understand it. I can only say that the protagonist is a genius. Putting this aside, the protagonist uses other people's materials on their territory and withholds pills to sell. Don't you look at your own strength and practice a little Qi, are you looking for death? Don't say that others won't check or can't find it, the peak master has also checked the protagonist's identity before. After all, Guan Shi's family has an important way of making money, and there is no way to be cautious, not to mention that the protagonist has only been here for a year. Second, the protagonist is too silly and sweet. The alchemist actually let the winter bamboo shoots renew the elixir fire, but he was tricked later. What is the logic for Peach Blossom to find the protagonist and stay there for a long time? In her opinion, the protagonist's strength should be far inferior to hers. If she finds the protagonist and tells him that he is being followed and reminds him to be careful, she can leave. Wouldn't it be better to hide and change his appearance? But the protagonist not only refused to escape, but also allowed her to stay. You have committed a major crime! Everyone is being followed. Sooner or later, you will be found. The Academy has sent out several people to practice cultivation, and the Peak Master cannot save you. After she moved in, he even revealed his wealth to her, 120 gold. All the belongings he had in the previous God Refining Stage were only 20 gold. Peach Blossom Girl had been doing things like killing people and grabbing treasures before, so it was hard to guarantee that she wouldn't be tempted, but the protagonist didn't have any defense against her. It was really hard to handle.​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​It spends hundreds of times the resources of ordinary people, but the efficiency is extremely low. Forget it, the protagonist is extremely bad at fighting, but he doesn't take the initiative to practice. How can he expect to explode? In Langshan, where I don't care, I am not good at fighting skills, and my realm is not good at all. With Shuo Qi's strength, I have to spend a lot of money to cultivate the gods, but I don't have any idea of ​​​​improving my fighting skills. It is really incomprehensible. Not to mention the memory of the original owner, the memory belongs to the memory and the person has changed. At least I can use the skills of the original owner to practice. I didn't read a relevant description. Maybe I turned on quantum speed reading. There are also some other small poisonous points that I won't go into details one by one. This is purely a personal opinion. If you think I am wrong, you must be right. There is no need to reply below to avoid wasting your time.

This book still follows the path of officialdom and shopping malls. When faced with a crisis, the first thing people think of when practicing martial arts is to seek help from themselves and improve their own strength; the second thing is to find others to help and unite with each other; but in any case, it is impossible to force oneself to seek perfection. Wu Sheng is more suitable to be a politician and businessman, not a master of martial arts and immortality. He has no inclination to be brave and enterprising, and survives carefully along the way. Why don't you change your name and call me the path of a politician who is an alchemist?

What this civil servant is doing is a mudslide in the Internet literary world. He has integrated the disgusting officialdom into cultivating immortals, so that cultivators can also treat people to death. I can't stand it anymore. I'm going to get out.

I urge mine, he writes his, we all have a bright future!

Fortunately, I found it from Wulong Mountain, and this has been completed. Compared with the previous works, this book has dropped significantly, and it can be seen that the mental state when writing was not good. The last book mentioned European mythology at the end. From the perspective of connecting the past and the next, I don't know what I am writing about in this one. From the perspective of the title of the book, I don't see any connection. What is it about? I have been refining alchemy throughout this article, but I haven't achieved any outstanding achievements in this entire article. If you don't have your own achievements and innovations, you can be called the Fighting Immortal, the Sword Immortal, and the Escape Immortal, but you are not worthy of being called the Alchemy Immortal. If you have good skills, you are just a repeater. At most, you can be called the Great Alchemist of Hedao. I can only copy the whole article, and I end up fighting landlords with two old men from Danlunzong. In the end, the old routine ends with the Jade Emperor. Sang Danshi is more suitable to be the protagonist. Born as a giant in the Dan sect, the young master's family is in ruins, the middle-aged is struggling to survive, and the old is gaining both fame and wealth, and has a powerful disciple. The first step in the void is to take a left step to obtain the elixir and then a right step to become an immortal. Who else is there? From the perspective of the assassin's start, it has nothing to do with killing one person in ten steps or traveling without leaving a thousand miles. I don't know what I am writing about. From the perspective of the most critical bright line, the text of the Heavenly Book, apart from making the protagonist panic in the early stage, it seems to have nothing to do with it. Even if the whole world were allowed to practice the writings of the Heavenly Book for free, it would not be seen to be of any importance. It is not something that ordinary people and fools can understand. On the contrary, the biggest role is to select geniuses. If Heaven had not given birth to Wu Sheng in the Spring and Autumn Period, would Hedao have not been beaten in the void for countless years? Can even a fool follow the Tao? Does it take Wu Sheng to know how to mention the number of Hedao? I wrote before that Lu Tong had made a book about the complete record of immortals and gods, and all the divine enchantments that had been unearthed turned into farts, right? Fortunately, although the journey to Wulong Mountain was slow, the author's mental state was quite stable and he returned to Wulong Mountain.

After seeing Zuo Shenyin betraying Wu Sheng, I listened to the book and came to the comment area to have a look. As expected, this book is really outrageous. If the protagonist is stable in the early stage, nothing will happen to him later. He keeps running away, which makes me feel numb. I originally thought that escaping in the early stage is enough to do the opening CG, but in the end, your protagonist has to run away like a bereaved dog. Running away is not a big problem. But it turns out that you haven't run away yet, and it is outrageous. To be honest, without the halo of the protagonist, Wu Sheng would have died countless times, and he would have been forced to go back every time. If the previous protagonist were more stable, he would not suffer so much. It can be said that the protagonist is simply a little white dragon in the waves, who suffers losses and does not have a long memory. I speculate that the protagonist in the future will probably be like a bereaved dog again...

Damn, I suddenly thought of a possibility. In the Taoist priest's book, the Supreme Being said that the other side started to invade from the Dharma-ending heavens... Is it possible that Wu Sheng was using the Donghuang Bell to cause trouble? And the death of the Queen Mother of the West was caused by the Queen Mother's promotion? Then maybe Wu Sheng is really the reincarnation of the Jade Emperor. . . And it leads to a subsequent upgrade path for golden immortals and saints: "The solidification of spiritual consciousness can prove golden immortals, and the integration of the three realms can prove Hunyuan, and then the divine consciousness is entrusted to the world of one's own spiritual consciousness to prove Hunyuan... Both himself and his own spiritual consciousness have obtained the Hunyuan fruit position, and the two elements merge into one Huiyuan. At the same time, the world of spiritual consciousness merges and collapses into one calamity. The Tathagata said that the Jade Emperor has experienced 1750 calamities, no wonder he enjoys this infinite way.

As the ending approaches, what holes are still left unfilled What is the use of the giant panda Dachuan? Xing Tian said that Wu Sheng was a remnant of King Yu, would he still cause trouble? King Yu's wife Tushan has not been found yet. Will she bring any new plot? When I escaped from the ice field, there were Chaos Fish on the road. Is it possible to merge with the ice field?

After finishing the book "Yipin Danxian", are you still interested in it? Do you still have many doubts? It doesn't matter, leave your questions below this post, Sansan will collect everyone's notes and let Babaofan answer them for you~

Idea 1: Wu Sheng comes from a thousand years later. Reason: 1. In the first chapter, when traveling through time, the author described "a thousand-year dream"; 2. The setting of the River of Time in the Thirty-Three Worlds, only Wu Sheng knows the detailed history, even Guiguzi does not know. There are two possibilities for this. One is that the earth transcends the past, and the other is that Fuxi redefines the prehistoric era, the thirty-three generations are reunited, and the historical fragments are reconnected like a river. We can know the detailed history from Wu Sheng who came from the re-establishing of the prehistoric era; 3. Wu Sheng was not included in the calculation, Xu negative covered up the secrets, and missed Wu Sheng alone; 4. The setting of the river of time first appeared in Chapter 237 "Godhead". When it advances, time passes, and when it retreats, time goes backwards. There is no left and right, and there are all kinds of bifurcations. It's just a godhead, and it's a bit too mysterious to involve the time dimension. There are even hints about the process of obtaining the godhead. For example, the godhead comes from Wu Sheng's consciousness and there is a feeling of "familiarity", etc.; 5. Following the third reason mentioned above, why Wu Sheng is not included in the calculation, because it is a "red fish" in the long river of time. This fish swam from a thousand years later. Coming back, this is also the meaning of the key symbolic thing "red fish" in the whole text. What is related to red fish is something that Wu Sheng, whether today or a thousand years from now, cannot give up. No matter how many forks in the long river of time, Wu Sheng will get something related to "red fish". Perhaps this article is one of the various forks in Wu Sheng's long river of time, a fork leading to the best result. Imagination 2: King Yu's enchantment Wu Sheng could only obtain the godhead of King Yu but not the enchantment, so where is the enchantment of King Yu? Did it dissipate or not? Where is the first wife of King Yu that Zhihe Rongtian is looking for? Will he be bound to King Yu? Is it because Wu Sheng did not control the Spring and Autumn Period because the spiritual power of King Yu's barrier was in the Spring and Autumn Period? Is Jiaoshan's attack on Chunqiu Shi looking for treasure, or is he looking for a barrier with King Yu? Imagination 3: The specialness of Wu Sheng's enchantment Compared with the enchantments of other gods, Wu Sheng's enchantment is still the Heaven and Earth Qiankun Dan. Moreover, it has been refined into the written rules of the Heavenly Book. If you can't participate in redefining the Great Desolation, is there any other way to refine the brothers' world into the Qiankun Pill? Imagination Four: Claiming Clan and Becoming Ancestor Wu Sheng has not expanded the area of ​​the barrier for a long time. It has not been determined whether it will be a high-grade godhead or proclaiming Clan Ancestor. As long as Wugo Mountain makes a lot of money, the total number of colorful stones will reach hundreds of millions. When the area is expanded, it will be called the ancestor. There will be no need for others to reward places, and it will be the same as Phoenix. Although his strength is not as good as that of big brothers such as Phoenix, it is just a matter of how many colorful stones he has.

Xuanyuan should take the road of sharing the mastership of the four parties, so everyone must surrender. Li Changgeng followed the path of order in the heavens, so in the past few years when he was the general manager of the heaven, he made great progress and became a great master. Xuanyuan wants to be the co-lord of all heavens and realms, and Li Changgeng wants all heavens to be orderly. Therefore, when they established Heavenly Court in the early stage, the two of them had the same path. Now Xuanyuan does not hesitate to go to war with other righteous gods, and is at odds with Li Changgeng's path. The current situation is that Xuanyuan and Wu Sheng are competing. Li Changgeng now has to make a choice between Xuanyuan and Wu Sheng.

Xuanyuan has too much advantage and too many chips. Combining the current information, Xuanyuan missed three points. First, Wu Sheng will see through the list of gods in advance, which will lead to his unfulfilled path and can only be subdued through force. Although at present, he has the strength, there are still variables. Second, Panda chose Wu Sheng. Pixiu said that pandas will follow the breath of the avenue to find their rightful owner. First there is the avenue and then there is the panda. Xuanyuan thought that there was first the panda and then there was the avenue. The panda chose Wu Sheng, which shows that the spirit of heaven and earth is more optimistic about Wu Sheng. In other words, higher-level chess players are more optimistic about Wu Sheng. The third is Li Shaojun. Xuanyuan did not expect that Li Shaojun would go to such an extent for the true heaven or his own ideals and avenues.

Let's take a blind guess at Wu Sheng's ways to break the situation: 1. Integrate all the worlds and restore the original appearance of the ancient world (become the existence above all the righteous gods and establish the heaven). 2. In addition to Fuxi, create a new prehistoric world (the method of "Taomen"). 3. Xingtian teamed up with the Yin female demon to steal Wuchangjun's home. Wuchangjun and Yushi's concubine died in battle. Wu Sheng avenged his old master and became one of the righteous gods. 4. Pixiu helps each other and becomes one of the three new righteous gods.

There isn't much to watch, and I feel like the protagonist's IQ is on and off. .

It's not very logical from the beginning when you join the academy, and from the beginning of the volume on the barrier, it's not worth reading at all.