Immortal Mansion Changsheng Road

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Take your time and just accumulate experience. If you don't believe me, go check out those early platinum works of great masters. Now, if you look at them, they are all extremely low! Only by accepting criticism and suggestions from others can you make progress. I saw a new author turned off comments directly! Doesn't this make others not even click? When I read a book, I always look at how many comments there are. If others don't even bother to comment, that means the book is truly hopeless.

The protagonist's performance and inner thoughts are worse than those of the natives. Is he really a time traveler? It's too childish. Did the author bring in the protagonist when writing it? Do we need to bring in modern people's thinking? We bring in the protagonist, what a contradiction!

Actually, it was a bit unexpected. I started reading novels when I was in junior high school. The idea of ​​writing novels kept popping up in high school and college, but unfortunately I never insisted on it. Until I had some free time a few days ago, I suddenly started writing, two thousand words a day, one chapter a day, and no manuscript was saved. After updating for four days, I really felt that the writing was too poor, so I decided to delete it. However, I couldn't find the place to delete it, so I decided to stop updating and wait for a while to read it again. It stopped for a day, but the next day on the Writer's Assistant, there was a message that the editor was interested in the book I wrote. After waiting for another 20 minutes, there was a message that my work could be signed. I was really happy and excited at that time, because I didn't expect that I could sign the contract so quickly in the early stage. Searches on the Internet said that it would take more than 30,000 words before editing, and I saw a person who had written a million words and still didn't sign the contract, so I was completely excited at the time and I regained my confidence. After signing the contract, I will continue to update. Although the results are very poor, with a total of 23 collections so far, it is my first signed book after all, and I will try my best to finish it.

Give it a year and see again. . This kind of writing needs to be voluminous to be enjoyable, but I guess there is a high probability that the author will make me die. 🙂

The author's attitude is so sincere that I can't bear to criticize him. How should I put it? Come on, author, and refer more to other high-quality novels about cultivating immortals. We have a long way to go. See you again if we are destined to 🙏

I                                                                                                                  About cultivating immortals, feel that the first 10 or 20 chapters are a bit trivial and the progress is slow, but the second part is getting better and better. This is my favorite novel! I feel that some aspects are not handled well enough. The protagonist has exchanged so many spells in the sect, which requires so many contribution points, and he has no serious way to earn spiritual stones. Such unabashed exchanges always feel bad. This kind of details should be written more. Instead, there are so many irrelevant details in the first 10 or 20 chapters, and they are not written when details are needed. It fails to grasp the key points. Hope it can be improved!

It's said to be from time travel, but looking at this pig's feet, it doesn't look like someone from time travel at all.

I have never seen a woman! You have traveled through time

The plot is a bit slow, and I don't understand what the protagonist is going to do. The protagonist seems to have no bright spots, and it will be a bit boring to watch it all the time. I hope the next plot will be more attractive!

I am short of books. I just read a novel called "The Everlasting Immortality". The introduction said "A whole family becomes an immortal", which made me not in the mood to read it. Too impractical

This is also poorly written. Are immortals so easy to cultivate? The protagonist is not wary at all. It's too difficult. 😰😰

It's about time travel by modern people, and the protagonist is written like a fool

Isn't Pig's Knuckle a time traveler? Have you never read any novels about cultivating immortals? On the contrary, it is written like an aborigine, a man of two generations, a man of several decades, who still freezes when he sees a woman. To be honest, I don't like to describe the protagonist like this.

Writing a book is to write about the fairy in your heart! Don't be influenced by others!

The writing is very good, but it still needs to be maintained. This book is quite rigorous considering it has over 100,000 words. The details are also in place and logical. Although it is a new combination of old wine, it has the taste of cultivating immortality. I hope that if the author keeps updating it well, this book will become popular.

I hope you, the author, can come up with new ideas and don't follow the trend, because the protagonists of many space flow novels now almost always plant medicinal materials first, measure some wine in the middle of making alchemy, and then practice swordsmanship, fight monsters, upgrade and finally complete the book. This is the outline of most space flow novels. To be honest, I feel bored after watching too much. I hope you can write a different protagonist.

There's nothing wrong with the writing style, but it's just quite average, not very imaginative, and lacking in uniqueness.

The protagonist stood on the boat, looked at the boundless starry sky, and murmured to himself: "Oh, my future is the sea of ​​stars, how can it be rewritten by you, an ordinary person?" After saying that, the void in front of the protagonist twisted out of shape, forming a void crack. The protagonist ducked and entered the crack. The protagonist looked at the author who was not half as handsome as he was, and said coldly: "You are just annoying, but you dare to write this saint to death, and go to hell to repent after death." The author looked at the charming and suave protagonist Feng Shen Yulang in front of him, and was directly attracted by the protagonist's unparalleled face. The protagonist looked at this scene and was slightly stunned. He did not expect that he was not as handsome as the readers but the author was so handsome. The protagonist looked at the author's body and thought to himself: "It's a pity that he was so easy to take advantage of." After saying this, the protagonist waved his right hand, and a crack in the void appeared in front of him. The protagonist stepped away and laughed: "Hahahaha, readers, see you again!"

It has been added to the bookshelf and I will continue to follow this book. If nothing else, I will vote for the author and give rewards every day. Hehe, the author's first fans~😃

Update quickly, one piece a day 😅 is too few

The author's writing is a bit innovative, but not exciting. Golden Finger is a bit backward. In the past, resources such as spiritual grass were needed, but now it is the knowledge of various systems, and there are some cool operations. Change to the kind of traveling through the heavens, soul piercing, Yang Shen world cultivation method, strengthening the soul, returning to the cultivation method, it is easier, and practicing elixir is easier. In some worlds, cultivating immortals does not require spiritual roots, cultivating the Three Treasures of Spirit, Qi, and Shen (the author of Yuchen Golden Chapter only writes about this kind of cultivation). The collision of various methods can lead to a longer path to immortality.

I found a copy of "Immortal Mansion Immortality" today. Did the author copy it from him? He has more than 300 chapters, but you don't even have 100 chapters. Abandoned