Entertainment Begins with Operation Red Sea

Having just read the first few chapters, I see quite a few issues. I suggest the author show the book to friends in real life before publishing it. There are too few books of this type; I hope the author can improve with each chapter. The following are just my personal opinions; friendly discussion is welcome: ① Lack of setup.

It's well-written, but the plot keeps jumping around. I've read ten or twenty chapters, and I still don't understand the main storyline. Promise me you'll keep writing! 😅😅😅 Trying to lure more people in to try it out!

Why do some books fail to become popular? The authors might wonder, but for a reader with nearly twenty years of experience reading online novels, the problem is immediately apparent from the first chapter. Readers today, with so many online novels of varying quality, don't have much patience for lesser-known authors. If the first chapter is unpleasant, many readers will simply pass on the book.

Is anyone watching? Any suggestions? I probably won't listen.

So?

It's good, but I personally don't like stories that combine entire worlds. I personally prefer stories that involve traveling between individual worlds.

No wonder nobody reads this. It starts with someone searching for a wife, then jumps straight into creating a military company. Don't you know people like to start from scratch these days? The first few dozen chapters are filled with ensemble casts, then it ends with a self-sacrificing, saintly figure. You're always the one sticking your neck out when there's no benefit to you. Ha! Let whoever wants to read it read it.

Gao Wen

Putting everything else aside, I envy people like you who can start your own book if you're not satisfied with what you read 😁😁😁 and most importantly, you can still write over five million words, awesome!

Next time, don't give the protagonist a powerful family background halfway through the story. You're writing Chinese web novels, not Japanese manga scripts. That's a major flaw and a deduction.