
Douluo Dalu: My Body Becomes an Immortal
斗罗之本体成仙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 510k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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You see, when you get to Shrek, you become wiser. You can obviously steal the master, but you have to risk your life on the character of Tang San and his son? And I always feel like the author is going to give jelly grass to other people in Shrek. Is it my imagination?
Aren't you afraid of being killed and taking the treasure by trading Acacia Heartbroken Red with Tang San? Tang San was not a good bird. When he was apprenticed to Yu Xiaogang, he said that once he is a teacher, he will always be a father, but when Yu Xiaogang was poisoned in the Soul Hunting Forest, Tang San was worried that his secret would be exposed, but he had the idea of killing people to silence him. The Tang Clan Kung Fu is Tang San's forbidden love. If you join the Tang Clan, it will be okay, otherwise.
The heroine problem
In this book, I planned to write about a kind of path to immortality, without the involvement of a female protagonist. However, I saw many book friends saying that it would be monotonous and boring without a female protagonist. So I plan to add two female supporting characters later. The overall plot remains the same, but the change is a little more involved.
It's so damn poisonous. You gave the fairy grass to Shrek even though you knew the plot. It's so damn poisonous. It's a rubbish novel.
Good guy, look at this description, there is only level 7, haha, every college can't get it unless you have full soul power. Level 7 is good in all high-level colleges. It can be said to be a genius. If you work hard, you will be a genius among the top. The reborn master thinks that the others are just children, let alone adults. Not even a child can persevere. If you have talent and don't work hard, who can blame you?
Look at this picture
A common problem that Douluo fans cannot avoid If they grab the jelly grass and the plot is not arranged well, they will deliberately give the lovesickness to Tang San and Xiao Wu in some way, so that they can pass the plot smoothly. With this, the protagonist's body collapsed. You can let Tang San grab the jelly grass instead of grabbing it, but if you grab the jelly grass and then trade it or something, it doesn't fit your character. Someone in the comment area said it well, this is a life-threatening test of the character of Tang Ritian and his son. Forcibly giving or trading Lovesickness Red to Xiao Wu, the thief looked embarrassed. The rogue rabbit himself is not responsible for his own life. He insists on giving away his life. Why are you so embarrassed? In general, sending fairy grass to Xiao Wu and Master Bai who are not in his harem are some of the minefields in Douluo fan fiction that non-Shrek and the group camp cannot avoid. Whoever writes it will die, and the character will collapse. In fact, the plot of Shrek has to be forced, just cut off the beard in advance, save a cat halfway, teach Ning Rongrong in Soto City to teach her how to be a human being, and then fight the soul there myself, wouldn't it be wonderful? In the later stage, we need to focus on splitting up kittens in a room at the Rose Hotel. After Oscar has a crush on Ning Rongrong, he tells him Qibao Liuli's overall mate selection criteria. The other half must be of the attack type, and he didn't use his support. And his teachers all knew that they were taking advantage of him even if they didn't tell him. If you do this, the tiger and the sausage will not be washed. Xiao Wu could persuade her in advance not to go and talk about the pros and cons. It's best to listen to it and go back to the forest to stay. A rabbit can survive any storm in the future. If you don't listen, let her do it. It's none of your business if someone dies for love. Be ruthless and report it directly. Giving the Heartbroken Red to Xiao Wu and Master Bai has always been a flash point in the non-Shrek camp, and whoever touches it will die.
(Personal suggestion) I hope to skip the Shrek part quickly, after all, many people don't like this plot. As for the eye martial arts, as for the development direction, we can be bold and directly target the heavy pupils. Or try to evolve or integrate these things into the martial soul when you comprehend the rules later. After all, although Douluo Continent is a fantasy floor, it still has merits. For example, the relationship between martial spirits and people can be regarded as a natal magic weapon or a tool to prove the Tao. Soul rings usually have some elements or incomplete laws in them (probably😰) If this is the case, Douluo Continent should be the easiest place in the world to understand the laws and elements. ——Come on! I hope there will be no more eunuchs.
The introduction is so well written, but in fact, he still tortures Tang San and so on. He has said more than once that he will not control people casually, but it turns out that he is really not a human being when he is casual. Will he control people from two continents and force them to believe in him? Do you have any grudges between Tang Hao and you? Just kill him directly. If he doesn't leave, drive him away. Mental deterrence will be enough. And Tang San's Purple Qi. What you originally exchanged for meridians, Mysterious Heaven Technique and Immortal Grass knowledge, you must have secretly learned the Purple Demon Eye yourself, and then you absorbed what others cultivated. Is it wrong for people to hate you? For the method of exploding the ring, they directly carried out massacres, not to mention the people who killed Shrek later. In your eyes, if they don't go with you all the way, they should be damned. Isn't it right that they come to ask for fairy grass for no reason? In your eyes, they should be damned? Then you are still cultivating a shitty immortal, don't insult the immortal
The improvement was so drastic in the front, and the levels were lowered in the back, so I just gave in. Write less plots to reduce your intelligence!