Douluo Dalu: My Body Becomes an Immortal

The story was going well until it came to Shrek Academy, where everything suddenly went awry. They could have quietly learned the skills, but instead they risked their lives to gamble on Tang San and his father's reputation? And I have a feeling the author is going to give the other Shrek Academy members some amazing herbs, but I don't know if it's just my imagination.

Wasn't Tang San afraid of being murdered and robbed if he traded the Acacia Heartbreak Red with him? Tang San was no saint. When he became Yu Xiaogang's apprentice, he said "a teacher for a day is a father for life," but when Yu Xiaogang was poisoned in the Soul Hunting Forest, Tang San worried that his secret would be exposed and even considered killing him to silence him.

I plan to write a story about the path to immortality, without any female protagonist involved. However, many readers have expressed that the lack of a female lead makes the story rather monotonous and boring. So we plan to add two female supporting characters later on. The general plot will remain the same, but there will be more entanglements.

That's fucking toxic! They knew the plot all along, yet they still gave the magic herb to Shrek Academy. That's fucking toxic! Garbage novel!

Good heavens, look at this description! Only level seven! Haha, all the academies would accept anyone with at least full soul power. Level seven is pretty good even in advanced academies; you could call it genius. With effort, you'd be a top-tier genius. The reborn person has an adult mindset, while everyone else is just a kid. Don't even mention that an adult can't keep up with a child's efforts. If someone has talent but doesn't work hard, who can they blame?

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Common problems that Douluo fanfiction cannot avoid Those who steal the immortal herb will deliberately give the Love-Sickness Heartbreak Red to Tang San and Xiao Wu through some means, so that the plot can proceed smoothly. This immediately shattered the protagonist's character.

(Personal suggestion) I hope you can skip the Shrek scenes soon, since many people don't like that part of the story. As for that eye-shaped martial soul, its development direction could be bold, directly aiming for the double pupil technique. Alternatively, when comprehending the laws later, one could try to evolve or integrate these elements into the martial soul.

The synopsis is so well-written, but in reality, it's still the same old story of torturing Tang San. And he's said more than once that he won't control people indiscriminately, but when he does, he's inhuman. Next, is he going to control people from two continents and force them to believe in him? What grudge does Tang Hao have against you? Just kill him.

The character level increases so drastically at the beginning, then suddenly drops to a lower level; I'm speechless. Please reduce the amount of idiotic scenes!