Time Travel Love Game and Become the Male Protagonist Who Must Die

This is very well written, why doesn't anyone read it? The light novel section is not that great. I think this level is much better than some of the toilet paper on the rankings. Come on, author.

I really like this novel, it's like reading Japanese comics 😭😭 Come on author, this is the only novel I like so far ❤️❤️

. It's not fair, it's not fair, please be nice to Mu Muzi! ! !

The author's writing is okay, but my suggestion is to reopen it. It is estimated that not many people can read the paid chapters. Chapter 36 directly destroys the characters of the male and female protagonists. Objectively speaking: the male protagonist did nothing wrong, because he said from the beginning that he was just a friend. From a subjective point of view, the only thing he did wrong was that the male protagonist tried to personally destroy himself in the female protagonist's heart. The image of the heroine makes the heroine unhappy, but the heroine, who has been bullied and bullied but does not dare to clarify, thinks that the hero's keeping a distance while helping her is an act of bullying her, and spreads all the grievances and anger on the hero. This is disgusting. You are obviously not boyfriend and girlfriend, why do you want the hero to tolerate all your willfulness while helping you? The male protagonist's feedback is even more outrageous, you can help but you can't lick! Because of a misunderstanding, the male protagonist was so despicable that he did not hesitate to break the fig leaf between the female protagonist and his relationship (which can be regarded as a half-hearted acceptance of the confession) and asked the female protagonist to give him a chance to protect her. I was speechless. It was obviously the female protagonist who wanted the male protagonist to protect her. The male protagonist chose I found a compromise way to do it, instead of the male protagonist begging to be the flower protector, a person who traveled through time and space was manipulated like this. I can't think of how the author would write a Shura field with two female protagonists or even three female protagonists. The character design is collapsed and the plot will be completely unfinished if it is not good.

Come on, uncle who rushes to the street!

The male protagonist is not good enough, he is just gentle. The two girls and the male protagonist feel a bit unworthy.

The problem is a bit big, and there is something wrong with the author's portrayal. Well, where to start? Let's talk about the male protagonist first. Although we can understand what the author wants to express, but the author's expression method... I can only say that he is a newcomer at first glance, but I don't know if he is the author. At the beginning of the article, the male protagonist emphasizes his own moral values ​​many times. There is indeed nothing wrong with the general direction of the male protagonist's morality, but he doesn't want to put that emphasis over and over again, right? What does this look like? This is also reflected in the best friends. Emphasizing the love of best friends over and over again and deliberately sensationalizing is a poisonous point, which greatly affects the perception. Let's talk about the plot processing: the male protagonist was beaten to death with a stick at the beginning, which started the plot development of the male and female protagonists in an extremely abstract way. I watched it with the expression of an old man looking at his mobile phone. The author mentioned in the article that the male protagonist was almost 30 in his previous life, which was very inconsistent with the performance of the male protagonist. I originally thought it would develop in a gentle way, with the male protagonist helping the female protagonist, but deliberately keeping a distance in the process. The female protagonist's feelings for the male protagonist also evolved from friends to likes. At the end of the redemption, the female protagonist recognized her feelings. A very routine development. But the author is really surprised. The subsequent plot development is especially the part where the heroine of the convenience store is bullied, the hero shouts "Stop!" In an abstract way, and the subsequent scene where the hero and heroine hug each other, and then the hero and heroine go home to stay overnight. There is nothing wrong with the classic routine. The only fault is that the male protagonist first emphasizes keeping a distance, then says he feels sorry for the female protagonist, and finally says it doesn't matter anymore. The problem is that in that short plot, the male protagonist emphasizes it over and over again, which is like being both serious and independent. Let's talk about the first heroine: a classic image of being weak and being bullied, but she is submissive in the face of bullies and punches her friends hard! Yes, the author shaped the heroine like this. I wonder if the author read it after finishing it. The plot is roughly like this: the male protagonist is a friend who helps the female protagonist, and the female protagonist has a crush on the male protagonist and regards him as a hero. The male protagonist was going to act in a drama to help the female protagonist, but the male protagonist insisted on playing the villain to avoid deepening his affection for the female protagonist. However, the female protagonist thought this was a betrayal, and ran away on the pretext of going to the toilet. Then the male protagonist and his gay friend flirted with each other for several hours. After that, the male protagonist decided to go to the female protagonist to apologize (the real article is very abstract, I mean If you can't reach it, I suggest you go and see for yourself), the male protagonist went to the female protagonist's house and knocked on the door. The female protagonist said that she didn't want to see the male protagonist. The male protagonist said that she was sorry and could they meet and talk. Then the point came. The female protagonist said, "What's the use of talking about this now?" You read it right, this is what a vulnerable girl who was bullied said to her friend. I just want to ask: "What does the male protagonist owe her?" What is her identity and status that allows her to say this? The image of the heroine completely collapsed here. To summarize, the male protagonist decides to act in a drama in order to help the female protagonist, but the female protagonist does not want the male protagonist to rebel and thinks this is a kind of betrayal. She felt that the male protagonist was sorry for her, and then when the male protagonist came to find her, she asked him what was the use of saying this now. Dear me, where did this little princess come from? The earth can't rotate without her? Even if a normal heroine doesn't like it, she wouldn't blame someone who is trying so hard to help her, right? The key is that the male lead didn't do any harm, it was just that she didn't want him to play the villain! Be normal and say, "This is not Natsume-san's fault. I'm sorry, I want to be alone." Then just start the follow-up plot normally? As for shaping the heroine into a little fairy? As for the second heroine, because I have only seen Chapter 35, she has just appeared, and I haven't seen much except that she was given away a little too quickly. As for who she met in the game at that time, and why she turned into a girl with dyed yellow hair, earrings, and a hot girl outfit, and getting involved with gangsters, let's not talk about the plot that makes people wonder if she was picked up by gangsters. After all, this kind of thing can be easily reconciled. About the background of the novel, it is a high school romance light novel in the skin of a college student. The author forgot that the male protagonist is a college student and then wrote the second female protagonist as a junior high school student. College students and junior high school students are too abstract. I am not kidding. The word "junior high school" is indeed written in the article instead of "high school"...

After reading Chapter 36, why does the man want to apologize? It is Ito Yingxue who wants something from the male protagonist, not the male protagonist who wants something from Ito. He helps her and asks for this and that. I just want to ask why she can be angry and aggrieved? Did the male protagonist ever say he wanted to be her boyfriend? Just because she is pitiful? It was agreed from the beginning that he would help her clarify the rumors and get rid of the bullying. She was good to the male protagonist, so she had to accept her pursuit of him? She was still aggrieved, pushing too far, not knowing what to say, and having a lot of things to do. In order to clear up the rumors, she finally came up with a stage play to help her get rid of the bully. As a result, the male lead was not happy if he didn't play a hero. Doesn't it look right to you? This was written as if the male protagonist was begging her to act. I also apologized, I don't understand how to write such an awkward plot, she is beautiful so I have to consider everything for her and comply with her wishes?

Why would a man be so weak be let out? To whom? If the two women can't manage well, then don't do this kind of plot, okay?

To be honest, it would be uncomfortable for anyone with a normal outlook to watch the two heroines develop to this point. Please change your writing as soon as possible and choose one, otherwise I really don't want to watch it.

I'll give it a thumbs up. Although it's not top-notch, the writing level is still better than other romance light novels. If you are short of abortion, you can go to the big boss py, or go to the big boss book club to advertise or something like that

After a brief look, the setting states that the male protagonist must die in the original game, but I didn't see that in the novel. Instead, I thought it was very hasty. There are only two ways to die, one is for the female protagonist to turn black and be killed, and the other is to be killed by a gangster, which corresponds to the two current female protagonists. In fact, these two ways to die are the same. , I didn't see the conditions for death. According to my understanding, death should be because no matter what efforts the male protagonist made in the original game, there were more than a dozen ways to die without changing the result. This is called death. I can only say that the author's current content does not match the title of the book. The method of death gave me a very hasty feeling.

Anxumu Muzi

A brief explanation: Wanting it all means both rejecting and kneeling down to lick it

The male protagonist was both upright and upright, and as soon as he finished speaking, he turned around and overturned. He started to screen the fans in front of him and slipped away.

Please read and collect, this is really crucial to the author!

To be honest, the protagonist's indecisive character is so realistic that it may have been adapted from the author's own character. Maybe I've had this thought too. But this is what the general public does, isn't it? This is how we ordinary people deal with relationships sometimes. Maybe this book is not a pleasant read, because I was very confused and worried when I read it from beginning to end. I can sympathize with Natsume's tangled guilt and anxiety, understand that Yingxue is emotionally unstable because of her exclusive sweetheart, and feel even more sorry for Mumuzi's willingness to sacrifice herself for love and put herself in Natsume's shoes. Reality is always harder to deal with than fiction. In this world, we can have both peace and harmony, and we will live up to the Tathagata and live up to you! Sorry, I lost my temper. No sleep tonight.

It's hard for me not to suspect that you're just trying to make up the number of words with a lot of imagination. Finally, another bad ending.

Ito Sakurayuki

Didn't I say there are three heroines? When will they appear?

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