Storyteller of the Sui Dynasty

I always felt strange when reading this article. I felt that the descriptions of the male protagonist and the female characters in it were very disharmonious. Later I thought about it and came up with a few points: First, the female characters that appear in it are either dashing, beautiful, heroic, or powerful, but they all have one thing in common, that is, when you see the male protagonist, you will feel from the bottom of your heart that he is so clean and special. Unlike other stinky men with dirty minds, he is unique to me! If the male protagonist were replaced by a female protagonist, this would be the old-school bloody romance routine covered in fairy tales. The love-hate relationship between the pure and unpretentious White Lotus Fairy and the cold Master, the Peerless Demon Lord, fellow juniors and other handsome guys. All of them are powerful figures in the world of cultivation, but they are all attracted by the strong, clean and unpretentious heroine. They want to get close to the heroine. Doesn't that feel like that? Second, my feeling is that it is "icky". The whole text is full of a lot of "she" words, or by describing the male protagonist's inner thoughts to set off the male protagonist's purity and purity of mind. There are also many descriptions of a certain female character turning around and seeing the male protagonist's "gentle smile" or "sunny smile", or seeing a good-looking Taoist priest in the crowd, and somewhere she can't help but notice a very good-looking Taoist priest. A good Taoist priest, but it's really weird. There are very few male videos that depict male protagonists like this. It has a feeling of serving others with sex, especially in a paragraph where Master Hu Qiu praises the male protagonist for several hundred words. The main theme is how dirty people are in this world, but the male protagonist is the ray of sunshine she sees. He is so pure and dazzling that she can't help but want to catch him and keep him to see if he will be dirty. Oh my God! I don't know if the author was moved when he wrote this paragraph, but I came to see Fantasy Xianxia with my arms in my arms, and I was so numb that I got goosebumps all over my body. The third and final point is that I feel that there are great logical contradictions in the male protagonist's outlook on life. He himself has no IQ, and he has mainly relied on his "female friends" to protect him (that is, he is a soft rice). He did not rely on his own hard power to get through several critical moments, nor did he rely on his own wisdom to use his small skills to overcome the crisis. He relied on the support of big figures above him. In the beginning, he was a fox. Mr. Qiu, followed by Sun Jingchan, and then a cold female Taoist nun. I guess it is the preparation arranged by the author to add a new confidante. He relies on the backer for small things and big things. He is such a person, but has inexplicable confidence in himself. He obviously relies on women for everything, but he insists on some kind of character that is difficult to understand. People try to persuade him, but they don't listen, and they are even unhappy. In the end, they have no choice but to find a way out for him. He is always unhappy when others take care of him. He says that what he cultivates is to follow his heart, but doesn't the implication mean that he should mind his own business? But when I accept help from others, I feel very comfortable and don't want to be soft-spoken. In the end, he caused trouble for others, and when they wiped his butt, he turned around and went to cause new trouble To sum up, I feel that this man is a male version of the pure white lotus. He is also dull in his actions and has no courage. Nowadays, female videos no longer accept this kind of persona. In fact, some of the author's plot designs are very brilliant, but the emotional design and image design of some characters seem old-fashioned and cliched. Nowadays, both female and male videos have been popular for a long time, with the setting of a self-reliant male protagonist and a female protagonist. Either your mind is extremely strong, or It means that your character is extremely interesting in some way, such as being particularly cautious, particularly stubborn, particularly promiscuous, or particularly reckless. The author can look at the top books on the monthly popular list to see what kind of characters the protagonists in them have, and what characteristics of the characters are popular among everyone. Of course, these are just some of my own opinions. If you disagree, you are welcome to refute me

There are naturally a lot of problems with the book, such as the emotional drama and so on. I even wanted to give up on it when I read the book review section before. Many people say that Mr. Li is not good, but I think he is cute and tight. There is a lot of helplessness in the world. Some people are suffering from wars and some are hungry. This is very common and very helpless. So many people are used to how to prevent themselves from pitying others and how to make more shrewd calculations to survive, but Li Laodao said something right. The world should not be like this, and people should not live like this. I know that it is impossible for everyone to be rich, and I know that it is impossible for everyone to stand up and live. I know there are countless laws and theories behind it. But so what, the world should not be like this. Whether you think it is naive or ignorant, isn't this what all people who can be called sages have followed from ancient times to the present? I really don't think there is anything unpopular about Mr. Li who firmly believes in this idea.

I have caught up with the update. The more I read this book, the more speechless and poisonous it becomes. To sum up the whole article in four words, it is false and empty. The protagonist was an adult in his 30s and 40s in his previous life. In this life, he really just lost his wits. He claimed to be a bystander of history, but jumped out again and again for inexplicable friendships. Don't you know what the butterfly effect is? If he really jumped out and became a wheel of history, readers would still have to applaud him. He really was both a bitch and a monument. The big bosses who appear are all Riddlers. They have to use very simple strategies to get you to the high end. When the protagonist sees the boss, he can say some mysterious words to calm the boss. Just like Jack Ma said that money is something outside the body, everyone can understand it. The protagonist is a social beast and said that money is something outside the body. The boss's first reaction is that the protagonist can say this. If you say, the protagonist is a pure, transparent, and pure person 🤔🤔🤔 In this troubled world, you can cultivate what you want, but you should end this troubled world and create a prosperous age that suits your heart. As a result, you are just a coward here, feeling angry when you see the extravagance and waste of high-ranking officials. When you see the poor people and feel pity for them, you really just watch, do nothing, and don't practice to improve your own strength. You just stay there and do what you want. You really can't change the course of history, so just stay there. You keep jumping out to be that butterfly. Author, aren't you contradictory? In troubled times, if you don't work hard to improve your own strength, you can write a book in three days of fishing and two days of posting on the Internet. After writing more than 350 books, you are still a little guy. Such a protagonist really relies on the protagonist's halo to make this one take a look, and let the other take a look to protect him. According to your speed, the protagonist will have some strength in 800 chapters, and be able to speak in 1200 chapters. This novel seems to be written with 1500 chapters. Let's talk about it. After reading it for three or five chapters, it feels like I haven't read it at all. 9K words of money have been spent in a daze. I can still pick it up after reading it after several chapters. So-and-so said a paragraph, and then there are the following sentences: "This is well said", "This is beautifully said", "This is said flawlessly" and so on. I am really afraid that readers will not understand what you want to express. Fighting scenes are always exciting. I can't understand it, but the author of the latest two chapters has learned it. The first chapter is so confusing that it's 3k words long, and the next chapter has a eunuch explaining the fight in the previous chapter, which is 2k words long, plus another 1k words of nonsense. The water is still yours. I won't give examples of other flaws and bad points. After seeing more than 350 chapters and spending more than 20 yuan, I gave up. All true fans, take care.

If the author really wants to write about the suffering in the world. Wu Laizi and the little beggar are obviously more likely to die. You made Wu Laizi eat the elixir even though his internal organs were rotten. The little beggar was also rescued in a critical moment. How come Xia He Ningshuang didn't have an expert come out to block it, and the protagonist couldn't get there in the nick of time? There is a contradiction here. In other words, the tonality is not unified well. Writers of novels always have to mess around when arranging the plot. Just like the sentence "Every young writer wants to present a beautiful atmosphere, but only by understanding tragedy can he be powerful." How to pull it depends on the author's ability. Like the pure little dragon, he will also pull, but he will pull it back to the limit and let the readers breathe. Like this book, when stretched to the limit, the thread will collapse directly, which will inevitably turn away readers. What I think, it doesn't matter. There is also a way of writing "pull off". If it makes people more surprised than sad, then it means that the foreshadowing is not enough. It does not mean that it cannot be written like this. But the only thing I want to complain about is actually the ending of the first and second volumes.

Some places look good, but some places are really uncomfortable, and I feel uncomfortable if I don't vomit: Firstly, the label of the invincible style should really be removed, and they should not be next to each other at all; Secondly, you should really shrink the two oiran characters into one, and write them thicker to at least pave the way for the strong side of your temper. You should also follow the Basic Law; Thirdly, do you have an outline for the audience? Sun Bofu, you know he is not a good person, but to the audience at that time, he was a little unhappy at most and lost his temper. The protagonist directly cut off the relationship. Even if there is foreshadowing in the past life, it is outrageous. The person is not bad to you, and he just said, "I can't practice. I am so unhappy. I am not willing to accept it. You can practice mortal well.", The protagonist has seen through people? The four protagonists really have no logic or foresight at all, and they act purely on the instinct of the Virgin. This is really not something that a person who has known the direction of history and the role of productivity for two generations can do. You said you couldn't bear to see the world, then you felt that you were unable to compete for supremacy, and you were unwilling to push history to end the troubled times as soon as possible; Oh, you said that you were afraid of disrupting the process of history, then how about you were born to practice and improve your own strength to deal with the monster race, a variable that has never been seen in history? Did you fail or don't you have a teacher? You said that you are compassionate and compassionate. It's not like you don't know that productivity is fundamental. You are actually promoting the progress of productivity. You also said that you can't build a steam engine. Have you never seen such a big Gundam? Don't mention the damn steam engine, internal combustion engine, and nuclear power. They're not that outrageous. Oh, you've just read it and you've forgotten it; You also said that you want to leave seeds, so why don't you go write a book and talk about it, make friends with the same people, and start a school? Career helps you spread your ideas. If you don't want it, you have to do it yourself Oh, as you mentioned, the protagonist has only been here for a few months. The turning point is later. Does that mean that your detailed arrangement and schedule control are off the mark? How many people can still persist there? From the above I saw the place where I left it on the shelf, and I really watched the chapter reviews disappear little by little. I can only say that either the author's details were inappropriate and the progress was not grasped well, or it was really the author's intention to put a time-traveler with a hanging belt, a person who has many adventures, into a special person in a few months. Wutouzi, the protagonist who is valued by people who walk in the world, is written as a little person who is pushed by his mother's heart and history, and has no vision or plan. Originally, I didn't say anything when I abandoned the book. I really feel that it is a pity to say this. It's uncomfortable.

Li Shouchu from Pegasus City: I came here with a gift and died when I saw this poison. Where do you have the nerve to say this? Are you worthy of the three women who were stabbed?

I came to read it after seeing the tag of Invincible, and I read the testimonials before the plot unfolded... So far, it is not an Invincible stream at all. I applied for the wrong tag, but even so, you deceived me into a first subscription... You are really unkind... I just came here for Invincible, but you are an upgraded stream, and for me, the pace is slow enough to catch up with Zhu Xian... I want to read a cool article.

I saw 151, the Pegasus City chapter, and I'll summarize it. Let me talk about the conclusion first. I can't stand it anymore after seeing this. 1. The Qiemo City chapter is really well written, including the Nine-Head Case (the dubbing is very interesting), Mrs. Zheng's aftermath (revealing the protagonist's gratitude), and the beggar son as well. Although there are flaws, they are not too damaging. For example, as a Taoist disciple, he split Sanqing... And the fighting scenes are very mysterious... 2. When we come to the Pegasus City chapter, the handling of the encounter with Sun Bofu before entering the city is not a big flaw. We can only say that they are different and not conspiring with each other. However, after entering the city, starting from the moment he was taken into the oiran's room (Is the Golden Light Curse controlled by that thing on the lower body??), The impression was downright negative. In general, he talks about a serious Taoist priest, but there is a serious disconnect between what he says and what he does. There is a clear misunderstanding with the oiran. The protagonist is indifferent and allows others to misunderstand, which makes the plot advance step by step, just like watching some stinky and long domestic dramas. On the other hand, Hongying's handling of the misunderstandings between the protagonist, the oiran, and her own eldest lady is very well written. In comparison, the impression is extremely poor. I just happened to see the two oirans and the protagonist coming to the pavilion outside the city. The more I watched, the more I felt that I was embarrassed. I either refused to accept it or accepted it. It was hypocritical and full of hypocrisy.

I feel like the protagonist is so unhappy. They want to kill you. What are you doing here? There is really nothing to do. Why are you involved in the work? I feel like a holy mother. It is really uncomfortable to watch.

Three female characters who particularly loved the protagonist and were also particularly fond of the protagonist were killed. If you like watching, continue, I will withdraw.

Brainless, Holy Mother, you have no principles of life at all. Bullying the weak and fearing the strong is not a monasticism, it is more like satisfying your own selfish desires. Originally, everyone wanted you to travel around the world and tell stories, but you wander between the truth, the world, and what you think is the right answer. Before, I was very confused and confused, and some things were pieced together... I was very disappointed. Otherwise, you would have been brainless and happy, but you would have mixed it with other things and had no principles at all 😵😵😵

It's disgusting to have sex with two prostitutes

I don't know if the author is led by the readers, but a storyteller should understand that no matter what you write, there will always be people who don't like to read it. What you need to do is to retain those who like to read it. As for others, just let them go. After all, chasing is not a business. Having said this, let's talk about the plot. To be honest, storytelling is not suitable for a dynasty like the late Sui Dynasty. Storytelling needs a leisurely environment, not an era of chaos and turmoil. When people are in danger, who has the time to listen to you? Of course, the storytelling aspect of this book is not important. Although some people have always thought that this is a storytelling article, I can tell you that it is not, at least not now. Because you will find that storytelling is just a golden finger for the protagonist to become stronger. You can replace him with any other thing, such as cross talk, opera singing, anything. So in fact, I have always viewed it as a cultivator who becomes stronger through practice. Then there is the arrangement of characters. When it comes to storytelling, being alone is actually the best state. Especially the protagonist in the book always has to travel around, and it is impossible to drag his family with him to tell stories. Therefore, the little girl with the yellow mark sold herself at the beginning, not because the protagonist cannot take care of her, but because the protagonist can only travel alone. So when two oirans and a little girl came to the protagonist, I was wondering, is the protagonist going to start traveling as a family in troubled times? Although it's not very harmonious, it's an invincible text after all, so I didn't think too much about it. Until the two girls told the protagonist that they would never drag him down, I knew that their lunch boxes were ready. As expected, the protagonist mentioned three corpses. And believe it or not, according to the development of the plot, maybe the girl next to Sun Bofu will also have some ambiguity with the protagonist. At this point, I have pretty much said what I want to say. There are no logical loopholes in the plot of the book, and the protagonist has been moving in the direction set by the author. But what I want to say is that I don't like to see a person with a strong sense of justice and correct views live like a lone star in the sky, nor do I like someone taking out some people who were born miserable to show you what deeper sorrow is. Having said that, I presented you with two monthly tickets as a token of my appreciation to my husband. Dear book friends, we have a long way to go, and we will see you in the next book.

I don't know why so many people support me, I really don't understand (=_=)

I haven't seen such a comfortable book in a long time. The plot and writing are really good. There are too few chapters to open a new book. Wow. I searched for it for a week before I found it. I forced myself to feed myself a bunch of it every day. It was so uncomfortable. It's a shame I found this book. It's such a pity for Little Oriole. This kind of innocent child in every book makes me happy. Come on, author, ordinary people don't have much money. If you write, I'll read it. I promise to subscribe and vote for recommendations. This is what I have to do. I don't want to be fast, but I want to be refined. It's not easy to find a good novel these days

In fact, I think this novel is quite well written. A storyteller must be a storyteller. As long as it doesn't take up too much after it's put on the shelves, I think it's reasonable. I think about those who write about entertainment, there are not many people who can summarize movie chapters and lyrics chapter by chapter. Why are there so many people complaining here? So far, I think the plot is very good, and the protagonist is well established. He is an alien from another world and cannot return home. He is very lonely. He experienced betrayal or white-eyed wolf behavior by his apprentice, and he was quite successful in his previous life. After reading various novels, he was able to flesh out the characters in the novels on his own, which shows that he has thinking and understanding. He has been out of the world since he arrived, and he has already looked down upon some issues of life and death. He has never done anything romantic in this life. He has the memory of entertaining himself to death in his previous life. He has lived through thousands of years of history and has a completely different pattern and vision. This is the reason why he can understand and even look down on the so-called women in brothels, women in court, and grievances and hatreds in the world. Loneliness, knowledge, indifference, so many reasons made him face these stories with the mentality of playing with the world, or even a bystander, without violating his principles and implementing his own morality. This is a person who travels far and wide. Zhuangzi said that wild horses are like dust, and living things blow with their breath. Nothing is completely and absolutely free, so he is wandering in the clouds, like clouds, doing whatever he wants and whatever happens. On the other hand, it is precisely because he is a modern man, a modern man who has lived a life far beyond this life and made his career stronger. And Qie Mo is just a small fringe town, so it is normal for him to be curious about this world. All these things make him look innocent. But is it really naive? He could refuse someone else's invitation decisively, politely and resolutely just because he was not speculative, even if that person was the young sect master or the oiran, who could make him, a man who had to be careful not to eat two cakes or drink a bowl of mutton soup, rich, but he didn't want to, because he could risk life and death to save a completely unfamiliar beggar who was just a little beggar who was asked to save by his benefactor, but he said he didn't want to be used. I think these are pretty good. Is it very watery? I think it's actually pretty good. I don't think it's too watery. What's the point of the wateriness? Is it because of the storytelling part? Is it about introducing the scenery? Did Yu Hua write about various kinds of things? This is traveling around the world. If you don't go see and feel these customs and cultures, can you call it traveling around the world? Without writing it down, readers would not even have a basic understanding of the local culture and customs. Wouldn't they be surprised if someone suddenly appeared tough or gentle? The same principle applies to people. Isn't storytelling boring? I think it can actually be interesting. I just think it's interesting to watch. Anyway, I haven't paid for it, and I don't happen to take the time to read every famous martial arts novel. I think there are many people like me. Someone tells me a story in just a few paragraphs. If I'm interested, I'll search it. If I'm not interested, I'll just listen to it, which is fine. Don't say something is bad every day. One moment you say that someone else's system is not good, and the next moment you say the upgrade is not good. Please, if you read this kind of article and you see his profile, do you still come in to see the upgrade? Would you like to watch an online game? Is it good to play an MMO? Don't just say it's not good, you have to tell why it's not good and what's not good about it? What will happen if this kind of bad thing happens? Is it useful to just say it? No one can understand why. Are you confused during the meeting? Does someone have to raise objections to complete the problem and unite? It's not necessary.

There are a few issues with this book that keep me stuck. First of all, this book is good, otherwise I would not bother to comment. And I think volumes 1-2 are well written, because volumes 1-2 all solve the protagonist's survival problem. But now it's not clear what the protagonist wants to do. On the contrary, the supporting characters have their own ideas. For example, the main purpose of Emperor Yang of Sui Dynasty is to be the emperor through the ages, that is, the world should follow his own wishes, and those who don't should follow his own wishes. If Goryeo refuses to obey, he will be conquered, no matter how much the country suffers. Even if the Grand Canal is built for fun, it is still to go with one's heart. Emperor Sui Yang is a man who builds to go with one's heart in the true sense. Among the emperors of the past, Emperor Jiushi and Emperor Sui Yang are the only ones who can go well with one's heart. But the protagonist is the one who keeps saying that he should follow his heart and his heart, but he doesn't know what he means by following his heart. He might as well say he should follow his own conscience, respect heaven and earth and love others. Other supporting characters have their own outlook on life, but Pig's Feet does not. You said it's not to become stronger, nor to promote the great cause of storytelling, nor to accept disciples, nor to have power, nor to travel after all. There is no outlook on life and values.

After reading more than 300 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The writing was too abstract. It's not surprising to receive this review. The protagonist neither adapts to the times and strives for world supremacy; nor does he cultivate his character and play in the world of mortals. The protagonist in the author's novel is acting like a madman here, which makes me feel sick to my stomach. Besides, even if you insist on writing, can we write about an imaginary world? It must be written about the Sui and Tang Dynasties. Without storytelling, you wouldn't be able to write, right? Although the Supreme Sage of Confucianism and Taoism also copied it, at least the description of the scene is acceptable enough for people to read.

I don't want to read stallion stories, ugh! It was a good chase! Really impressed!

Alas, the author is great, can the Sui storyteller start writing? I've been waiting for so long, two years.

Bai Yueguang? I think it's a literary youth disease. What is said to be satisfactory is actually ego and selfishness. It is the self-sorrow, self-complaint, self-pity, self-injury, and self-movement. When it comes to helping friends, tmd never thought about those who are worried about you. In the name of self, he hurts the people who care about, care about, and worry about the protagonist. Considering your head and not your buttocks!

The protagonist's strength is completely unworthy of the invincible style in the label, right? When will the protagonist's strength reach the level of Yu Wenhuaji and Zhang Daoxuan?

Haha, Pegasus started to collapse. If you tell a story, you should tell a story. Which book should be clearly explained and written along the way?

A very awesome book 🤔I think it can be compared to Xiao Ge Lao once it is written

If this kills Hu Qiu, then probably no one will read it.

It was quite enjoyable to watch at the beginning, but when it came to the emotional scenes, the writing was huge rubbish. I didn't write it if I didn't know how to write it. I had to write it and then force-fed the knife. The plot was as disgusting as the author, not to mention that the protagonist had to keep helping Hongying who hurt herself in the back. She had to say what she wanted. I'll go with you. Thunder, the further you go, the more rubbish you get. To sum up, the first part is okay and the second part is pure history.

Coming from a free website, this book has its own flaws, but overall it is still readable. The protagonist is a comprehensive contradiction, or the author has not yet shaped the protagonist's complete personality, but it really does not affect reading. Currently, there are only so many high-level books serialized on various platforms. How many thousand words can the author write in a day? And how many words do we read in a day when we read? Back to the present, many people say that it is not good for the heroine to die in the early stage. I think it is okay, but the young master will not be stunned to death later? Is this a great tragedy for the protagonist in the book? It's really good that the protagonist can regain his normalcy after great joy and tragedy. Is it possible that book lovers want to see the protagonist enjoy the harem all the way? With all due respect, those who have a harem and have true loves are all nonsense. People's energy is always limited. One person is enough to help each other, and the worm's brain is just greedy for other people's bodies. . . . After talking about so much, I really hope that the author can finish the book according to the current pace. I am working hard on the bad parts of this book and don't change it into something different.

I'm very happy to see you post this article. I am also a man who rushes to work immediately, and I know the pain of working more than ten hours a day. Add in the writing and conception of the text, and you probably won't be able to take care of your family at all. I feel the same way. I changed my job this year from a private company to a state-owned company. Although my salary has dropped, I spend more time with my children and communicate more with my wife. I always felt that work was very important. Who would do this without me? I have to hand it over to the customer the day after tomorrow. Now, just do the work as you like, and wait until you finish it. Don't work overtime if you can. I've read some of your books on other platforms, and some of them I like, and some of them regret it. But most of them are to my liking, and the director of this site has basically booked all of them. I follow the updates every day, and sometimes I can feel the ups and downs of your state. Especially when I was writing the scene opposite the two female protagonists in Feng Sheng, I really got goosebumps all over my body. The visuals are great. Sometimes people really can't do anything against heaven. When time is here, they can only care about one thing. I hope you can write the director well and complete the movie star role when you have time. As for Bai Yueguang in your heart, you can take your time when you become famous and don't have to support your family. You have to slowly fill the hole you dug. You have to have something to do, right?

Wonderful adaptation, slowly unfolding the events of the Sui and Tang Dynasties in front of me

The book has the potential to be a movie and TV show, I hope it will be completed