Lord of the Mysteries: The Traveler

There's an unresolved issue with this book: the protagonist has read the original book and must know about the Outer Gods. He'll establish a connection with them in the mysterious world. Without some kind of cheat, the game will be over from the start.

The two smaller maps, Abyss of Prejudice and Sanctuary of Glory, are quite distinctive, showcasing a world different from that depicted by the Lord of Mysteries, yet sharing a common core. These two maps perfectly embody the allure of the Apprentice's ability to roam the stars—experiencing interstellar travel capabilities usually reserved for angels or even true gods while still a Saint.

I found myself back here while searching for fanfiction about mysterious things. I had abandoned the series before, but I reread it and found chapter 40 to be really strange. Let me mention two odd points. 1. The plot is hollow. Despite the father's sacrifice to the Outer God at the beginning, the protagonist's lineage as a descendant of the Gate Master, and the forced disbandment of the…

The novel doesn't explain how the protagonist protects himself from being spied on from the beginning. Just the fact that he mentions all the big shots right from the start and nothing happens makes the sense of mystery disappear. It's just a fantasy novel with a mysterious veneer.

[For those who haven't read it: The protagonist is an apprentice, from the Abraham family, and Roselle travels back in time before he went mad.] Great deal! This is the most outstanding fanfiction I've ever read about mysteries. The logic is well-organized, and the historical background of the protagonist is also introduced and described in detail. Each character is unique and not rigid.

The ending was really bad. I just can't understand why the protagonist, who had spent hundreds of years in this mysterious world, couldn't compare to those few decades in the previous world. To me, the ending was meaningless.

After becoming a god, why is the protagonist only thinking about stopping Amon from getting the gold ingots? As the god of the three families of Gou San, and the one with the strongest action, he should have just annihilated Amon, right? Instead, he went and killed Amon directly. Amon now faces the protagonist just like Pales faced Amon—if caught, he's dead.

This is my second time writing a book, and I've subscribed to all the latest chapters. I've already discussed the flaws and shortcomings before, such as leaving the "newbie village" and the sudden revelation of plot points to new readers. I won't go into those again, as the author is still a student and this is his first time writing a book, so some planning is inevitable.

No way! They've all become true gods through various paths, so why not just go after Amon, get the error, then snatch the Fool from the goddess, become the Lord of Mysteries, and go home? Why insist on crossing paths? This forced path-crossing really seems absurd to me.

I waited a few days for it to finish, and it's finally over! This is the first completed mystery fanfiction I've ever read (the other one is a bunch of Sequence 5 novels). From the first chapter to the end, the author's writing style and plot development have visibly improved. I'm looking forward to the author's next book (if they ever write one).