Star Ring Mission

My thoughts after reading this book and my personal opinion on the individual combat power of this book. I came across this book by chance recently. I haven't read a mecha novel in a long time. It's surprisingly good. Of course, it cannot be said that there are no problems at all. At least the problem of combat power collapse that has gradually started since the game came out is not too serious now, but for the sophisticated party, it still affects the reading experience to some extent. Let's talk about the previous one, that is, the combat power classification in the game stage. The gap between one generation, two generations, three generations and four generations is very obvious. There is basically nothing to say. The division of combat power is relatively reasonable. Mainly since the game came out, starting from the fourth generation of machines, the combat power has gradually become outrageous. If I remember correctly, the four levels of monsters include ordinary, elite, general, and lord. The fifth generation has an extra hero class, and the sixth generation has an extra emperor class. First of all, what I want to say is that the division of combat power has gradually become blurred since the fourth generation. I remember when we first fought against the Zerg planet, people other than the protagonist were fighting elites one-on-one, which was already at the top level. Then there were about ten mechas with the highest elite level and the lowest ordinary level (still uneven), involving an ordinary fifth-generation monster. How should I say, in the middle, it spanned generals, lords, and pseudo-fifth generations. I don't know if it counts, so I won't add it for now. In other words, they have crossed two small levels and one large level to fight monsters. Add a living ship and a standard colony ship. If we have to say that their combat power is equal, then it can barely be considered as evenly matched. There is a problem, but not a big one. The real problem with the collapse of combat power comes from the beginning of the fifth-generation aircraft. I remember correctly that the fifth-generation aircraft has an additional hero level on the level of the fourth-generation monsters. The first time I felt that the combat power problem was the first encounter between the protagonist and that imperial prince. After analysis, the performance of the mecha was poor, the protagonist did not win, and the technical protagonist was stronger. Taking this point in time as the center, let's establish a numerical division of combat power. If the combat power of the first-generation aircraft is expressed as 1, the second-generation aircraft is 5, and the third-generation aircraft is 10, it can be roughly calculated in this way based on the expressiveness. The gap between the third and fourth generations is huge. It can basically be calculated as ten times. Then the combat power of the fourth-generation standard aircraft is set to 100. (The standard value is just a reference. It can fluctuate by 10 to 20, which is used to divide garbage and high-quality products.) At this time, driver skill bonuses are introduced. It is how much a master can perform beyond his level when giving full play to his body's performance. For example, the fourth-generation ordinary aircraft has a combat power of 100, and the protagonist can make the aircraft display stronger combat power. An example is the performance that the protagonist performed after he had been lying dead for five years. An ordinary mecha beat a general or lord-level mecha and completely won. Let's briefly divide this increase level. According to the expressiveness, there is no big jump in strength between the four generations of monsters of different levels, so the combat power value will not jump too much. For example, the standard fourth generation is 100, the elite is 120, the general is 140, the lord is 160, and the pseudo fifth generation is 200. Judging from the protagonist's steady play, he was able to use a 100 mech with a combat power of 180 to 190. Since he couldn't defeat the pseudo fifth generation from behind, this combat power was considered normal. At this point, the combat power values ​​of the fourth generation are basically clear. Rookie pilots can exert 30 combat power out of 100, and those who can exert 100% of their physical strength are already elites. The masters are beyond the level, and the top bosses have doubled their power (note, old man, I am talking about you). The fourth generation has this foundation, and let's look at the fifth generation. Judging from the fact that ordinary fifth-generation monsters can become pseudo-fifth-generation monsters after death, the dead fifth-generation monsters are definitely not as good as normal fifth-generation monsters. The mecha transformation should only make up for part of it, allowing him to fully exert the fifth-generation combat power. It may be possible, but it may require too many resources and the gain will not be worth the loss. However, the gap between the pseudo fifth generation and the ordinary fifth generation is destined not to be too big. The value of the ordinary fifth generation is temporarily set to 210. The gap is not big, but what about the elite fifth generation? 230, General, 250, lord 270. Finally, there is the hero level, because there is a clear gap between it and the lord. It has 10 more points, which counts as 300. The protagonist's fourth-generation machine can perform at a super level, but the fifth-generation machine did not see how strong he is, and the bonus is not easy to calculate (not counting optical brain assistance). At this time, let's look back at the battle between the fifth-generation machine. The mecha that the protagonist got from the old man has repeatedly shown that it is not a good product, but it can be used by the old man. If the head is released, it cannot be the worst garbage, so it is tentatively classified as elite or general level, with a high probability of elite value of 230. As for the prince's mecha, which is known to be from ruins, the worst is lord level, and there is a high probability that hero level is 300 combat power. But based on the actual combat level, the maintenance author here has lowered it to Lord Peak, which is a value of 270. Otherwise, I really can't explain to you how a 230 value can withstand the crushing of a 300-value mecha, because you wrote at the time that there was a technical gap between the two, but not that big. Even if there was a gap in light and brain, the Creator at that time only provided assistance, which was obviously not enough to make up for the numerical difference. If you force the circle, it will be the protagonist's technical bonus of 20, the body of 230, the optical brain assist of 10, and the final combat power of 260. The enemy mecha numbered 270, and the pilot barely used the mecha's full strength, with no bonus. In the end it was slightly better. How should I put this result? Anyway, whether this mecha is the pinnacle of lords or a heroic mecha, I won't say it. It's all over. If you originally wrote a hero machine, the protagonist would die on the spot. This is the first place where the combat power collapsed, and if I forgot about it in the middle, let me tell you the second place that I can confirm. After the garbage that was killed by the androids died, the protagonist's mecha lost contact with the main army. The heroine drove a mecha with a value of 230 to kill fifth-generation monsters randomly. Well, the heroine's mecha level in the early stage was not as good as the top domestic ones, but she caught up with the fourth-generation mecha, and then she didn't touch the mecha very much in five years. She controls an elite-level fifth-generation machine to kill randomly. I vaguely remember whether you wrote that she killed a general or some fifth-generation monster. Well, if you look at it that way, she is already the second master in the alliance besides the protagonist. I won't go into details here. Everyone knows it, and it's clear whether her combat power is high or not. Then came the Stargate Guard Battle, and a sixth-generation machine attacked. Judging from the subsequent attack by the duo and the entanglement with the emperor's mecha, the deputy chief was obviously at the same level, the emperor level. The third major battle power collapse is coming. Let's look back at it. During the Stargate War, the protagonist had a pseudo-sixth-generation machine and a group of fifth-generation machines. I just can't bear to look at it. That commander's pseudo-sixth-generation mecha, although I don't know how far the author sets the gap between the pseudo-sixth-generation and the sixth-generation mecha, but based on actual combat performance, the original pseudo-sixth-generation mecha can perform at a stronger level than the fifth-generation top mecha, which is tentatively rated at 330. So the real sixth generation is tentatively set at 350, the elite level is 370, and the general level is 380 (don't wonder why the bonus is 10 points less, I have tried my best to set it for you). The lord level is 390, the hero level is 400, and the emperor level is 420. (I'm tired, you can see for yourself) Then, even if a rookie pilot is unable to use the mecha to its full potential, a mecha with a final value of 400 cannot be stopped by a group of troops with weak strength and poor mechas. The combat power of the deputy chief here was too low, and the situation continued until the new city was established. Several royal knights stopped him, but their strength was not shown for the time being. The real collapse of combat power begins with the Royal Knight Assessment. Three people from that empire used 230 mechas to explode into 300 value mechas, and the princess even counterattacked the 330 pseudo-sixth generation. Don't tell me about the triple explosion here. Your collapse is even more serious. Then there is the heroic bio-mecha of the duo, which is set to have two master-level pilots. Can a 400 hero mech exert 400 combat power or explode with a pilot bonus of 420? Two of these levels are fighting a group that has nothing in the sixth generation. Counting the help of battleships, I can barely make it up for you. Then the protagonist's royal knight, an emperor-level mecha, got entangled with the deputy chief who was pulling his hips. Well, his level has recovered here? Could it be that Mr. Kizaru has always been a liar before? Finally, the protagonist broke out and used a 300-level fifth-generation peak machine to defeat a 420-level opponent. Here we can calculate the bonuses for the protagonist, 300 for the mecha, 80 for the full power of the optical brain, and 15 for the pilot bonus. (I can't bear to calculate whether the opponent has the sixth generation of optical brain blessing.) The final value is 395, and then factoring in the bonus of 15 for the mecha's consciousness body, the final value is 410. This can round out the incomprehensible part of the fight, but is this really normal? Think about it for a while, the real result is that the protagonist is not as good as it is, which is normal~_~. And in the end, the two 420 mechas join forces. The combat power is definitely not additive. The final attacks are partially overlapping and partially offset. I regard the last hit as an attack value of 500. So what exactly does the protagonist use to make up for the gap between his 410 attack and 500? Does it rely on the last three levels of negative energy to explode? But no matter where you look at it, it's impossible for him to have a bonus of 90. This is still a good thing. If you really want to look at it in terms of performance, the protagonist's final mecha does not even have a value of 410. For a mecha value of 300, I will give you a technical negative energy bonus of 30 (forced hacking), a mecha awareness bonus of 10, and a light brain burst of 40 (it is just a light brain without a mecha after all. It is really inappropriate to add too high. , And the opponent also has a light brain in the setting, so I just ignored it), and the final value was only 380, not to mention the bonus of 20 for the opponent's 400 mecha (this bonus value is really not worth the weight of the former chief of the Twelve Royal Knights). Even so, it is normal for the protagonist to be killed instantly, and there is no room for maneuver. I really wonder if you have just skipped the level restrictions of ordinary, elite, general, lord, hero, and emperor that you have always thought about. Just like in the hot-blooded comics, the protagonist's strength is high and low, and the opponent is also high and low. Everything depends on the author's will, and everything depends on the protagonist's aura. I posted this mainly because I wanted the author to set the power of the mecha, pilot skills or negative energy bonus. Everyone has different levels, and different mechas will ultimately exert different strengths, but there is a clear gap in the end. It is not that he is super skilled when he is used, and he basically pulls his hips when he is not used, and he is a picky person. I don't know if the author has the patience to read this. My writing hand is numb, and so is my body🤣🤣🤣

After reading Chapter 520, the emotional drama really persuaded me to quit. As some book friends said, the author wrote the plot so that the male protagonist would not take the initiative or refuse (the scumbag routine). Then it is forced to write that the male protagonist is an innocent young man. The male protagonist and the female protagonist have gone through so many things, why can't they communicate privately? They insist on writing hundreds of chapters about a misunderstanding, and it will only be resolved in the finale. These chapters are very poisonous. Let's seal it and detoxify it before reading.

Tomorrow Chapter 2: Eat, drink and have fun Introducing the local customs, the next three chapters of the competition opening ceremony environment, personnel, mechas, rules, reward introduction, another day 🥱, the day after tomorrow the officer competition, all aspects of action in secret, another day😑😑

Sister Ting works hard, look at others! ! !

The following is a review of the first 700 chapters of the book. If you are not too nervous, you should be able to read the rest: Overall review of the first 700 chapters:There are bright spots, but overall it is mediocre. Advantages: 1. The scene description is more detailed, and the logic of the characters' behavior is basically self-consistent. 2. Although the part involving military equipment is relatively new (I checked the information, but I have no in-depth understanding), and the space war and related descriptions are somewhat civilian (a common problem in most science fiction novels), the overall performance is better than 80% of the science fiction novels I have read so far. Disadvantages: 1. The protagonist's arc is missing: the protagonist's growth is too flat, lacking growth highlights, and the protagonist's actions have no purpose and no stage goals. For example: Taking Dou Po as an example, Xiao Yan's initial goal was to win the three-year contract. Then the Soul Palace appeared to capture Yao Lao, and the goal became to rescue his mentor. In the end, he learned about the conspiracy of the Soul Palace and became the leader of the Soul Clan. Collecting strange fires is used throughout the text. People do things for a purpose. The author may want to create a story about a rich second generation who has nothing to do but gradually awakens and reaches the top, but what he wrote really makes people disagree. The protagonist's subjective initiative is too low, and he is just drifting with the crowd. You can do it like this for the first 400 chapters, but you can't get to chapter 700 and the protagonist still has no purpose (falling in love does not count). 2. The villain is too stereotyped: The author has repeatedly stated in the comment area that he wants to write a growth-oriented villain, but the growth of the villain should be felt by readers, rather than the author explaining or even spoiling it to the people who ask questions in his comment area again and again. Either spend more time describing the villain's past and mental journey, or change each stage. The creation of Xiao Jie as a villain was a huge failure at least in the early stages. I've read a lot of both female and male videos (I don't read many female videos at the beginning). In female videos, there are many villains who fail to court and therefore become hateful. Many high-quality novels usually describe the past and growth of the villain through colorful pen and ink, allowing readers to love and hate at the same time. This is a popular routine for creating long-term villains. As for male videos, they tend to change villains in stages. 3. The description of the emotional line is too childish, and too much ink is wasted, resulting in a scratchy writing and a serious sense of fragmentation. The relationship between the protagonist and the heroine begins inexplicably, (physical contact (soft, holding hands) La, etc.), Smell (the fragrance of the body), blushing (looking at each other, etc.)... This is a very low-level description of emotional initiation.) It is the best way to create sparks between the male and female protagonists by shaping the personality charm of the male and female protagonists. This is also a good way to enrich the arc of the protagonist. And the inexplicable female supporting character, who is talking about Lin. It would be great to delete her and use more pen and ink to describe the heroine's past and growth. 4. The author's common sense of modern warfare comes from science fiction war movies + animation (EVA, Macross, Gundam, etc.) + Internet military equipment parameters. It is recommended that the author find a friend who understands military affairs to re-understand how modern warfare is fought. The author's description of space war is, to put it mildly, a space version of the war rules on Earth with upgraded parameters. Let me give you an example. In the article, warships with sub-light speed or super-light speed sailing capabilities actually fired their guns at each other within visual distance. You have to know that this is done in the anime for a big scene and to highlight the cruelty of mecha combat. However, judging from the concepts of beyond-visual-range strike and unmanned warfare that modern warfare emphasizes, in the phase of space war, the launch of kinetic energy weapons by both sides should be at least millions of kilometers away, and the attacker will not send a large number of manpower to the scene when the situation is unclear. 5. Many of the author's descriptions of space wars are contrary to common sense. For example, a nuclear bomb explodes in a place with a thin medium like space, and there is a shock wave. It is too civilian. You can write about electromagnetic pulse better than shock wave. The iteration of kinetic weapons and energy weapons is too childish. The upgrading of civilization depends on the mastery of physical rules, such as the four basic forces. 6. The author said that he wanted to write a space opera, but space opera is a science fiction type full of fantasy and adventure. It combines the grand cosmic background with heroic adventure to form a unique narrative style. Such works not only explore the future of technology, but also reflect human nature and social issues through interstellar wars, political struggles, and emotional entanglements. Therefore, space opera is not only a form of entertainment, but also often triggers thoughts about the future and destiny of mankind. But after reading 700 chapters, I felt that the author was writing a space Qiong Yao drama disguised as science fiction. The above are all comments. I hope the author will polish the text in the new book. If I can persist in reading the whole book, I will continue to write a final comment.

This is the last chapter of "The Halo Mission". Thank you very much for your continued companionship. See you in the next book!

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What Sister Ting is best at is that there are several women who like the male protagonist at the beginning, and the female protagonist and the male protagonist like each other without revealing it. Later, she will kill the other women and even like to torture them 🤫

After reading more than 400 chapters, I can't stand Hide and Seek any longer. I'm offering you all the subscriptions. Don't delete my posts. Maybe my mentality is different. Now I just want to have fun when I read novels. The reality is already frustrating enough. (After typing this paragraph, I feel that my thoughts are clear)

I've read half of it, and I feel generally good. But I need to skip reading. Which mothers-in-law should I skip? The author is only suitable for writing about battles. Which families are really difficult to write about? Don't touch them.