The Wind and Dust on the Path of Immortality for Mortals

We know what Han Li is going to do, we have no sense of expectation anymore, we already know what you are going to write next, that's it, it's already very boring when you set the protagonist not to know that mortals can cultivate immortality.

I think it's very interesting even if you haven't seen Time Travel, it feels like you slowly meet the protagonist. You don't have to have watched Goldfinger, right?

What's the point of letting a person who has never read The Legend of Mortals Cultivation to Immortality travel through time? . . .

The master's thighs are not hugged and he insists on doing it in a messy way. What a wonderful beginning is ruined by the author's own fault.

I don't know the significance of the plot in Chapter 13. Do you need this hard-boiled egg? Are you willing to join other organizations just for the sake of a foundation-building pill? Don't forget that your master is a golden elixir and your master is a Nascent Soul. With such a powerful background, you lack these? We've made an appointment for ten years, and you're so impatient? I can't bear it anyway

The fanfic is so ridiculous if you don't know the plot! You might as well write a mortal novel yourself! Once it's written, it might become popular. If you don't know the plot despite the traffic, will any ordinary book fan buy it? It's thankless, this kind of fan writing is just asking for death! Not to criticize you, but a ten-year-old bookworm said that he has never seen this kind of writing without eunuchs! Mouse tail juice, think about it before writing, otherwise it will be in vain

? If you don't know the plot, do you know how poisonous it is? A hundred times more poisonous than Hedinghong

I think so! I can still read it, of course for an old bookworm like me who has no books to read. As long as there is a book that can be read, I will read it, because there are fewer and fewer books that can be read.

The writing is all about anecdotes. The protagonist lived for more than 30 years in his previous life. How come he doesn't seem to have the mind of a teenager? I don't know what the author is thinking, and the writing style really needs to be improved.

I've read a lot of Golden Finger, this one is pretty good too

(Personal opinion) The setting you gave the protagonist is not bad, right? I think your setting may sometimes make some readers uncomfortable (including me). As for the setting of the protagonist's past life, I think even if the protagonist doesn't want to waste time on these things, I think the protagonist should have known about or read a few novels about cultivating immortals. (Personal) To put it bluntly, now that I see the protagonist like this (a nerd 😒), I feel a little emotional. So you should know more or less about immortality.

I saw a book called Mortal Immortal Miao. What time are you going to insert?

The poisonous point is as follows: The protagonist has never read The Legend of Mortals Cultivation to Immortality? So what's the point of traveling through time?

To be honest, as a scientific research dog in my previous life, I didn't even study the essence of spiritual energy and cultivation. Even if I opened my mind, I wouldn't be practicing stupidly step by step like a native. I could refer to the fan fiction next door and use scientific methods to cultivate immortality. Goodbye

Insert Han Li time earlier. The author should consider inserting Luan Xinghai😆😆

Update soon. It's very well written.

Looking forward to the collision between the protagonists of the two books and the application of scientific research technology in previous lives~

The character of the protagonist is just a boy who delivers treasures. He should practice cultivation and go home to take care of his children.