I Can See Cultivation Opportunities

I can only say it's undeniable. The first 28 chapters were written by the author, and the protagonist's intelligence was on point. After chapter 28, it's probably all guns; it's handwritten, completely detached from the established setting. Add to that the protagonist's brainlessness, a doomed situation, and then a divine weapon protects him—a divine weapon that even a level one cultivator could…

Your opening is completely illogical. After the evil cultivator possesses the body, he can only do one thing: use every means to make the protagonist search for all his previous hiding places, obtain the cultivation resources inside, and then begin secluded cultivation. All of this is for the subsequent possession.

I just finished reading about 70 chapters, and my personal rating is 🌟🌟🌟🌟 (out of 5). Although many book reviews mention numerous flaws, after reading it, I feel that what they consider flaws are simply due to deeply ingrained personal biases. It's like, "I feel it should be written this way, it should be written that way," or "I feel this thing should happen, so it has to happen."

The "false and sneaky" approach is strategically reckless, but tactically rather cautious. Why did you have to go out and have fun when you had so much room to grow in the early stages? Wouldn't it have been better to use up all your resources and take advantage of everything you could before going out? If you go to Qixing Mountain with me, would that guy surnamed Zhao even dare to come along?

The author should change the synopsis; this one feels a bit stiff, really!

The premise is good, but this heretical cultivator looks too much like a teacher. It feels like a real apprenticeship ceremony. Shouldn't they be wary of each other? He doesn't resemble a heretical cultivator at all; he's just a tool of the righteous path.

The synopsis alone is enough to deter anyone from reading it.

He revealed all his cards from the start, leaving no secrets behind, telling everyone everything. Even the enemy praised the protagonist as an unparalleled talent! 🤔

This introduction seems like a formula from ten years ago: "Slaying demons and monsters, comprehending the universe, with a beautiful companion by your side," "Immortal and undead, supreme ruler of all realms." Seeing your introduction reminds me of "A Mortal's Journey to Immortality," which might have been a hit ten years ago. 🥱

Especially the way they even calculate what "opportunity" is, it's almost comical 😅. They even calculate the inheritance of the Green Wood Daoist... This just boils down to one thing: there are no opportunities in the mortal world. Cultivators always have low-level resources, and they can calculate even when those are almost gone.