The Beginning of Survival: Admitting That You Are a Father

I've seen a lot of interesting beginnings in the past two years, and I'm falling apart every time I write them. The author remembers to avoid lightning: 1 Unnecessary flirting with girls. (Writing about girls in weird genres will seriously dilute the plot, or even completely change the flavor of the plot) Eight of the ten books I abandoned were because the girls failed to write them. The main reason is that those authors write about girls just to make fun of it, but when they don't stop it, they start to enjoy themselves. After getting too excited, they can no longer connect with the plot. Those who want to see girls seriously will go to the urban genre, but no one who wants to see weird movies will want to see girls. It's all based on imagination. 2 Be sure to maintain your original intention and don't go off topic. The remaining two of the ten books were originally very creative at first, but ended up falling into a cliché after writing a few pictures. I remember reading a system war article, which was a melee of various systems. It looked interesting at first, but what about Chapter 5 or Chapter 6? I started talking about the cram school, and then started to add a lot of personal stuff about four things. The question is based on the imagination. Who wants to see these things that are related to reality and us? Everyone wants to see something different. As soon as he introduced these realities, the strange and novel feeling of his magical ideas suddenly disappeared, and he suddenly fell into a cliche. There is also a huge idea in the front, and I think it is also very creative. But after receiving it, I started to follow the boss, started to rank based on seniority, and then started to study how to mix in society? How to build a good relationship with the boss? Then how to use resources to continuously improve your social level? Alas, I feel so low. As I said before, those who look at weird things are looking for different things. What they all want to see is fantasy. Even sand sculptures are completely different from real life. Who wants to see urban class upgrades? 3 The protagonist can be ridiculous, but he must not be wretched, he must not be wretched, and he must not be wretched. I saw an article from the Mirror Space Administration. The beginning is particularly creative, and the end is coming. Then, he needs to capture the mirror image and save the world. Every time you capture a mirror image, your mind will improve to a certain extent. But the funniest thing is that he found that his mental calculations were powerful and he could do it by reading a book. Then what he actually said next was, I want to participate in the strongest brain, so I don't have to win the championship. I want to go to Las Vegas to count cards. I don't have to make a lot of money? Suddenly people felt that this article was not that interesting, and it felt too low. It was possible to write a rather grand background, but as a result, the protagonist is so low-key that it is impossible to support it, so it is just a sleazy urban novel. Originally, the sense of weirdness and oppression he created earlier was very good, and he could have written a story about the end of the world, infinite space, and extreme survival. But right here with the protagonist, the whole story comes to an end. So, author, you must hold on, don't flatter yourself, don't flatter yourself, don't flatter yourself. What kind of school beauty is she? Then, brothers who drink, chat and spank, please don't show up. Really, it exploded instantly. By the way, why do you look down on your ex-girlfriend? There are also the seven aunts and eight aunts of the ex-girlfriend, and the kind of best friend who says mean things and looks down on others. These are all jokes, and they are common transitional sections, but they are not sections that can enhance the experience of the novel. They belong to the plot of water. And it's still an off-topic water story. It's very easy to write these things. It's all written out of inertia, and then the serious plot disappears. The article is written for the protagonist. You must firmly grasp the highlights of the article. Don't go off topic when writing around the core highlights of the article. I lost a lot of money because of those off-topic writers, and I lost all my investment. Now I don't dare to invest, so I will write a long review to support the author. Come on, don't go off topic, write this article well, the front part is very interesting.

1. First, let me talk about my impressions of this book: 1. The setting is poor --> In the early stage, the strange method of recognizing relatives and summoning was indeed novel and eye-catching. However, after the novelty wore off, half of the chapter still stayed at the initial setting. The summoning flow did not develop at all, such as summoning more, or recognizing more relatives, and the ghost father, who was the main combat power, did not improve much and interacted with the protagonist. The book soon lost its initial appeal 2. Laughter problem --> The same problem exists with funny elements. It's just that the joke about mocking the ghost father has no more laughs, and this joke has been used for a long time without being expanded upon 3. Outline problem --> It is obvious that there is no main plot, just small copies to make up the number, and there is no correlation between the copies. Half a chapter, I guess you started writing it after you had an idea, or you were too anxious. The setting of the main line outline still requires complete thinking and deliberation before starting. 4. National issues--> The most difficult thing for me to accept in this book is the "company" Yes, according to the description in the book, it is a national agency. It seems nondescript to use a company to refer to it. If you are afraid, use the name given by other authors, special/weird event response department, town office, etc., Or you can name it yourself 5. Character description issues --> Your description of the supporting characters in the first half of the chapter is really poor. Some of the main supporting characters could be described more. You should use some words to describe your heart, thoughts, etc. Your characters are too dry. I can't even remember their names, so I can only remember Captain Zhou The problem with the book has been mentioned above, but don't be discouraged. Whose book can't pick out a lot of problems? I still feel that you have put a lot of effort into half a chapter. Keep up the good work, the writing is still okay 2. Talk about cutting the book Half a chapter you want to write "Mysterious recovery", this is possible, but it is very difficult. Mysterious recovery itself is a big concept, aura, strange laws, and some authors have opened their minds to the invasion of strange planets. You don't have to be limited to the story of mysterious recovery In addition, there are many books about mysterious recovery, but these books are basically TJ There is a threshold of 200 chapters, and none of them are popular. I advise you not to be too stubborn and insist on blowing up on it My point of view is to cut it if you can. Instead of continuing to write, worrying about poor grades and consuming your few passions, it is better to get rid of this historical baggage, sort out your mood and ideas, and start from scratch. Starting from the heart, you post the outline and click Finish 3. Let's talk about the positioning of weird The word weird was originally coined by everyone because everyone was not allowed to write about the supernatural without the supernatural area, so the scope of weird is actually very wide, including weird, ghost, monster, Spirits, monsters, demons, physical pollution and mutation, and indescribable infections are all possible. You need to expand your ideas and don't limit yourself to death Furthermore, everyone likes to see new things, so you can boldly integrate and innovate in this aspect 4. Provide some references "My Years of Investigating Cases in Zhenfu Division", "The End Begins from a Nightmare", "Guide to Weird Decomposition", "I Eat Monsters in Zhenfu Division", "Weird World of Immortal Cultivation", "Eternal Mist", "I was forced to poach the evil god", "Weird Invasion", "Golden Summoner" 1. World view --> A strange world is shrouded in strange disasters, some are completely destroyed, and human beings can only linger in the corners; some are half-destroyed, but the government's power is still maintained, and cities become isolated islands of survival; some are just beginning to have disasters, and the government is just struggling 2. Disaster attributes --> There are large-scale curses from evil gods, strange planes, and law invasions. There are worlds that are plunged into fog. There are ghost realms of all sizes that keep appearing. There are weird things all over the world that wander around and humans can only shrink back 3. World background --> There are ancient worlds that suppress the government, there are immortal worlds that are destroyed, and there are modern world governments that work hard to resist That's it. Here are the book reviews of recommended books 5. Recommended book reviews can be seen as elements absorption and experience lessons. After all, reviews are much simpler and easier than writing 1. "I Eat Monsters in the Zhenfu Division" --> In the background of the ancient Zhenfu Division, the protagonist Goldfinger decomposes the materials of monster corpses to cook and strengthen his own cultivation ability. This article is extremely funny. Driving is the main point of the article. However, these cars or the writing of the erotic articles are so ridiculous that people will never tire of them. They are not explicit. They are all just imaginary and you know what they are about. In addition, the main story lines of the large and small dungeons are interspersed back and forth, and they are closely related to each other. The length of the dungeons is well controlled. The problem is that just eating food can easily lead to aesthetic fatigue, and the writing in the later stage is also weak 2. "The Years I Investigated Cases in Zhenfu Division" --> Similar to the above 3. "Weird Invasion" --> The writing is very good at the beginning, very terrifying, and very fascinating, but it gets exaggerated later on. Book reviews say it was ghostwritten by someone from the Qing Dynasty. But the beginning is really great. In addition, the government's response structure design is also good. It actually gives many protagonists room and room to play, but the rest becomes more and more like a studio novel 4. "The End Begins with a Nightmare" --> In the modern government background, monsters are mainly weird. There is a bold attempt in the middle, which is to solve the causes of weirdness, use strength and emotion to transform weirdness for one's own use, and build up his own strength. The protagonist does not rely too much on government agencies, but the author did not continue to boldly explore in this aspect later, such as building his own private safe zone, private security company, and private weird army 5. "Weird Decomposition Guide" --> It has a modern government background, but there is not much description of the government agencies. It is just the background. The protagonist works alone, and Goldfinger is a crusher. He crushes weird explosive materials to strengthen his own abilities. The rest is a selling point, and the setting is very creative. You can read more about the world setting 6. "Weird World of Immortal Cultivation" --> The great divine text, a real dark apocalypse, weird captive human beings, really struggling to survive all the way 7. "Eternal Mist" --> Immortal grass level, a fantasy-colored dark apocalypse. The protagonist has a weird possessing ability without side effects. The angle of the golden finger is very suitable. It is not too strong to appear brainless, nor too weak to appear abusive. The growth potential is excellent. The article is very good about the struggle to survive in the dark fog 8. "Golden Summoner" --> Facing the invasion of the laws of the strange plane, the modern government uses modern firepower and strange abilities to resist step by step, and then the protagonist enters the strange plane as an undercover agent. This setting is also amazing In general, there are so many, the focus is on half a chapter. What do you think about it yourself, from others How much have you absorbed from the book, and which specific subject matter do you think you can control, and what subject matter do readers like? Intersect with and boldly innovate. If the world is not destroyed, you can add some funny elements. If the world is destroyed, you can highlight terror, powerlessness, struggle, and survival.

I'm hungry for your collection. I am honest I am eager for your recommendation votes, but I will not take action or destroy your life. I am kind I am greedy for your monthly tickets, but considering that too explicit behavior will make you disgusted, I am silent and careful. I am considerate I am greedy for your rewards, and my attitude will not change because of your height, short, fat, thin, or what you look like. I am impartial I am greedy for your reading. I will dig out all the good things from you from the inside to the outside, from top to bottom, from the outside to the inside, and praise you. I have a pair of eyes that discover beauty. I am eager for you to post and praise me, but considering the feelings of the majority of readers, I will only silently fantasize in my heart and build a world of wanton galloping in my mind, but I will not realize it in reality. I respect you. I am eager to recommend a position, but I will not do anything illegal or disciplined because of it. I have a starting point in my mind and a law in my actions. I abide by the law It can be seen that not only is it shameful to be greedy for these things, but it is also a good author who meets the requirements of modern morality

This is my first time writing and I don't understand anything. I hope to work hard with everyone and chat in a civilized manner

Guess why I was moved when I saw the introduction, but didn't add it to my bookshelf? Because I saw the author's name again

I have lowered my expectations for the weird I have read a lot of weird books, and after thinking about it, I still like what kind of doomsday plot, scary, depressing, hopeless, and the feeling of adrenaline. The relevant plots are: 1. Ghost disasters, ghost realms appear frequently in various places, large or small, the number of deaths is moderate, not too many or too few, but the frequency should be high to enhance the atmosphere surrounded by death 2. The world is on the verge of destruction or more than half way into the city. For example, the ghost army besieges the city, a large number of small cities are wiped out, and corpse pits appear everywhere to produce ghosts 3. The spiritual energy is revived, various spirits and ghosts appear in large numbers, and the government is exhausted to deal with it 4. Ghosts occupy the world and fight with each other. Human beings can only live in settlements. There are either isolation walls developed in the settlements or there are great gods sitting in charge. Human beings have a good understanding of the weird and have developed some means to hide and capture energy. Ghost Man It is best to have a feeling similar to that of the Outlander. The world is destroyed and mankind can only survive. In despair, mankind has found a glimmer of hope. The protagonist has superhuman talents or special inheritance and can travel around the world to unfold the story

There won't be a heroine for sure, even if I'm not into the horror genre

Boss, I just have one request: If you can't write a good heroine, don't write it. In fact, write that you get married in the end. I'm still aroused by the operation of changing the heroine halfway, don't learn to use your strengths and avoid weaknesses, and don't end up in fantasy and immortality. I want to watch that thing, I can see ghosts and supernatural beings.

Monster xx: Who are you, please tell me your name Protagonist: Haha, ask me who I am, ask I am your father Monster xx: Wow, you are very courageous, dare to take advantage of me Protagonist: Be careful with your tongue, I call you, do you dare to agree, grandson, who is my father? xx Monster: Your dad is here, why, I just dare to agree Protagonist: Dad, that grandson in front of you dares to take advantage of you Ghost dad: Wow, wow, ya, ya... Ghost dad, buffer+1 Protagonist: Dad, that grandson is not convinced, not only wants to take advantage of you, but also takes advantage of our father Ghost dad: Wow, ya, ya, ya... Ghost dad, buffer+1

This book is full of useful information, but it is not watery. However, the shortcoming is that the plot is very compact and the background is not introduced much. I have encountered 7 to 9 or more ghosts. I have not counted them. The main reason is that I encounter ghosts so frequently. It is a bit strange that there are so many living people in this world. There is no need to explain it in the early stage. Arranging so many ghosts to fight against the protagonist will make people feel like there are many ghosts in the world, especially when there are so many ghosts around the protagonist and a junior ghost hunter appears once, then the organization feels useless. Later, when I went to the funeral home, I felt even more. There were so many ghosts as soon as the protagonist went to work. Haven't many people died before, and there wasn't a regular ghost hunter to help? Another point is that the protagonist's mentality has hardly changed. I don't know if the protagonist is originally so cruel or something. The murderer in the drugstore is excusable, but In the chapter about the thief, the thief had both of his hands broken off and thrown aside. Not to mention anything else, he would have died of excessive blood loss just by bleeding. It wouldn't be that bad. Breaking his bones would be better than drying off his hands In general, this novel has its flaws. As far as the background introduction is concerned, the plot is too tight and there are flaws in the psychological issues, but you can still watch it.

If your investment fails, come and visit your grave. After all, it is a book about achievement, that's all

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Is this a rush? Damn it, it's obviously very heartbreaking, but I still want to laugh

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I heard that pursuing reading is very important, as it can affect author recommendations, etc... Mengxin doesn't know, and doesn't dare to ask. She also wants to save face and doesn't dare to ask. Reading after a hammer, my fate is up to me!

Why not a ghost mother😏

The article is okay, but the thief goes too far. He is not guilty enough to die. You can call me hypocritical... But I really can't accept the protagonist killing like this. He is guilty, but it is not the reason for his death. I can accept the dark article, but I can't accept the protagonist becoming a loser because of this trivial matter. It's very cheap.

Half ghost detective! ! ! The government's special research results use special formations to put multiple ghost fragments from different sources into the human body formation, allowing people to randomly use one or more of the above ghost abilities. Because they are fragments, the abilities are incomplete or weakened. Because the fragments come from different sources, the fragments respond to each other and are balanced, causing little damage to the human body! After using it for a certain period of time, the fragments need to be removed and restored.

Let me first talk about the atmosphere of the merit story, which is indeed good. But I'm a little confused about the protagonist's character, and there are some behaviors that I don't quite understand. At first, he committed murder in the pharmacy, but between the time he called the police and the time he was sent to the police station, he didn't think of any excuses. You said it was like this when you arrived, wasn't that right? Later at the company, after fighting ghosts with Wang Qiang, there were a bunch of corpses and you didn't call the police? Then why not just stay anonymous? Okay, you can say that there was surveillance at the pharmacy before, so there was no way to remain anonymous. But there are also ones on the way to the company and inside the company, right? So what? ? Did I miss something?

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How should I put it? The latest copy of the Dead Ghost is not as interesting as the previous copies. The previous one carrying the corpse was interesting. I don't know if the author wanted to learn from the Death Ghost. However, it is indeed a bit less interesting. The plot is a bit messy, and the interaction with the human skin book is a bit awkward. This is purely a personal opinion. Don't mind the author. I will still continue to read it. The previous free plot made me laugh so hard that I couldn't stop laughing. Hahahaha. Come on, author. I give you my recommendation vote.

High-end exquisite ghost doll! ! ! The ghost looks very cute and can't put it down. Throwing it can immediately divert the ghost's attention. This is a new product launched by the captain's store.

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What others have, I also want to have A wise man will not enter the Taoist realm, a fool is willing to fall. It is difficult to maintain his sanity when meeting you, and he is willing to be reduced to a keyboard

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I came in after reading the introduction, and I thought it was a bit interesting. 😁😁

Blindly guessing that the ghost dad has a cuckold on his head and has also cuckolded others. The protagonist is the ghost dad's [wise eyes. GIF]

Well, I want to open a book to write about interesting settings and some scene clips. Does anyone support it? Is there any similar book?

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Tombstone Town was not called Tombstone Town before because most of the residents in the village were surnamed Zhao and were known as Zhaojiaji. But later a famous stonemason appeared in the village. The tombstones seemed to be alive. He could carve stone or wood. Not only the surrounding villages, but also the big families in the county came to him to carve tombstones. When the villagers saw the money, Quickly, everyone started to follow suit, and slowly this place became known as Tombstone Town Qiao Yuan watched Old Zhaotou here slowly telling the past, and couldn't help but feel a little confused. Is this Old Zhaotou a human? He looks like a human, but it's too eerie. You say he is a ghost, but he does look like a human, and there is no sense of danger at all. Looking around, this huge town has no popularity at all. There is only this bad old man. Thinking of this, he immediately raises the danger level to the highest level in his mind. According to experience, the more incomprehensible and unpredictable the place, the more dangerous it is. Why are you here? This place is not safe. It will be dark soon. Come with me. I will take you back to my place. At least it is a place where people can stay." Looking at Old Zhaotou talking to himself, Qiao Yuan had no choice but to follow him Following Old Zhaotou into the house, this broken house The bed is all good but there is nothing bad about it. The stool has 3 broken legs, the bed board is full of holes, half of the shoulder pole is left, um~ the bucket is okay, and it can also hold half a bucket of water As soon as it comes, let it go, there is nothing to be afraid of, this old Zhaotou does not look like a cannibal, Old Zhaotou is busy and showing off When the dinner was served, Qiao Yuan followed without hesitation. He finished several large bowls of rice and more than 10 dishes in a row. He looked at Lao Zhaotou and chewed his teeth. He went to the kitchen three times in a row. , Qiao Yuan planned to show off: "Old Zhaotou, tell me, what do you think? I've eaten a lot of food from you today, and brought me to this peaceful place. I'll accept your favor. Tell me if you have any difficulties. I, a native of Qiao Yuan, give me the nickname: Bei Batian. I am the most loyal person. I will never look at anyone who can help." Old Zhaotou was a little embarrassed, but he immediately opened his mouth: "Young man, it's not a big deal. I, Old Zhaotou, am very old, I have never seen anything, and I am not greedy for this life. I really can't let go of my little grandson. Today I happen to meet you, the young man. I think you are not bad. I will sell you here, old man. Miserable, I ask you to take your little grandson out. This place is not a place that people should stay. Although my grandson is still young, he usually learns a few tricks from me, and he can help you when he goes out. What do you think, young man? As long as you can take my little grandson out, I, Old Zhao, can help you with everything here. If you explain it clearly, there will be no problem even if I help you deal with the things in the town." Tombstone Town, a B+ level ghost, suddenly appeared. The administration had sent people to investigate and found that it should not have been formed recently, but why did it suddenly appear? This is the reason why Qiao Yuan sent you in this time. You're the only one in the game who can run fast. I don't know if others can outrun you, but I think you can do it. Don't worry, Bureau Sun. Once the mission is completed, I can even bring out all the treasures inside without any trouble Haha, Qiao Yuan felt aggrieved thinking about the big talk he had boasted about earlier in the morning. This place is really difficult to deal with. Without this old man, I might not be able to handle it. Forget it, just take it out. It's such a big deal, it's just a child. I, Old Qiao, can afford it.