The Mystery of Resurgence

As the title states, after three years and two months, Shen Lin finally reached this point. Seven hundred chapters, spanning more than three years, is so long. After countless despair and terror, the ghostly figure Shen Lin finally became a stranger! Although the process of the alien is not very to my liking, and there may be foreshadowing in the future, the chapter of "He's Back" made me see Shen Lin, who was full of character and amazing when he first appeared in the original work. In the original work, as soon as Shen Lin arrived, he instantly invaded the memories of all the captains, and then walked out of their memories as if they were in that place. Now that the heterogeneity is completed, it reminds me of the original mood again. ▶▶▶(The scene when the original work appeared is as follows) However, just when several of them mentioned Shen Lin. Suddenly. A memory that did not belong to them suddenly appeared in their minds. In their memory, they seemed to have been to this place and were standing in the square of this park. But the park square in my memory was not so deserted. It was still normal. There were passers-by nearby. They also gathered here to chat and talk like today. The only difference was that there was one more person in the party in my memory. The man named Shen Lin, in my memory, was sitting on the rest chair in the park. Yang Jian, Li Jun, Liu San, and even Feng Quan and A Hong on the side all had the same memory. Suddenly. Everyone looked in one direction. That was the bench where Shen Lin sat and rested in his memory. Something strange happened. Memory and reality overlap. There was actually an extra person on the bench that was empty just now. The person was wearing casual clothes, looking somewhat comfortable with his legs crossed, and he nodded and said hello with a smile on his face. This look is exactly the same as the Shen Lin in the previous memory. It was as if the scene in my memory had reappeared. "Shen Lin?" Yang Jian's eyes narrowed. He had seen Shen Lin's file information, which had his photo on it. Without a doubt. This is Shen Lin. "It's incredible. I feel like his memory appeared in my mind, and then the memory appeared in reality. How did he do it." Feng Quan was extremely shocked. This Shen Lin is no longer a normal person. "He is a person who does not exist in reality." Yang Jian peeked with his ghost eyes and found some traces. Based on the situation just now, he made a bold guess. "Shen Lin, how did you do it, what happened to you." Li Jun said. Shen Lin slowly stood up from the bench. He is a living person, but he does not seem to exist in reality. He said: "It's just good luck that I survived. It's not something I can make the decision to become like this. What happened in the supernatural incident?" It's all possible, isn't it?" "Let me introduce myself first, Shen Lin, one of the twelve captains of the headquarters, responsible for Daxia City, codenamed Ghost Phase" (The original scene is as above) ◀◀◀

After reading more than 300 to 400 chapters, the description of the male protagonist's ghost appearance and the ghost mother's memory killing ability are too abstract, and the attack methods are too mysterious for the brain to figure out. Yang Jian is simple and crude, very intuitive, ghost realm hallucination killing, teleportation, sniping, star movement, ghost hand sneak attack, coffin nailing knife melee combat. The author's description of the male protagonist's battle is unrealistic. I thought it would be okay to imitate the upside-down ghost and half-corpse in terms of ghost appearance. I don't understand what he is talking about in terms of human appearance. The ghost mother's memories of killing are also vague. The portrayal of the ghosts is also average. They are all scary and terrifying. The characters feel terrible in their hearts, but the author cannot describe the horror, and the readers have no sense of empathy. Although this book is a fanfic, it has almost no interaction with the original characters. At least the first four hundred chapters are like this. They are all original characters and original plots. The prophecy from time travel is of little use except for avoiding dangers. It feels like the protagonist lives in his own time and space. There are also fragments of chapters that are very rubbish, and some fragments of chapters even have no preface and follower.

I haven't finished reading it, and I haven't finished writing it yet, but it's okay so far. I've been reading for more than ten years. Although there are fewer and fewer good books, which lowers my taste, I'm still pickier than most readers. I have seen the revival, but it took me a long time to finish it. Then this book is very good, almost in the same flavor as Resurgence. The early stage is both a review and another perspective. Some people say it is watery, but the protagonist originally insisted on not changing the timeline to promote the plot. In fact, the early setting is quite consistent with the identity, and the prophet is cautious. The biggest disadvantage of this reborn version of the prophet is that the more the timeline is changed, the more prophetic he loses. Moreover, the protagonist still has the bad habit of the rebirth party. He is superior to others and feels that he is special, but his ability is above average. It should be written like this. With subsequent training, he has become more and more down-to-earth, more integrated, and his level and decisiveness have also improved. The original ghosts constructed from several major events are also oppressive, no problem, the basic skills of writing ghosts are at a good level. And the expansion of humanities, patterns, and beliefs in the middle and later stages are enough to be fleshed out. Pressure, character creation, curiosity, and settings are all online. I feel that the score of this book is lower than the quality, and it should be more famous. Nowadays, the rankings are either homogeneous or the settings are monotonous, and I can't find anything that can be read. This one is indeed readable, but it has no reputation. Maybe this kind of book is not suitable for catching up on updates. One event has to be finished before the food is served, which is the case in many novels.

After reading Chapter 26, the protagonist keeps encountering powerful ghosts, and then the protagonist keeps gambling wildly. The poisonous point is that the protagonist keeps emphasizing that he is a gambler and a madman. More than one person often emphasizes it, which looks very bad.

The advantage is that the writing style is closer to the mysterious revival, the plot is compact, exciting, and the atmosphere is just okay. There are also shortcomings, but they are not serious. Every time I see one, it is very special, very special, and when I see another one, it is very special, very special. Buddha also has this problem in writing books. When I read it, I feel... Well... How should I put it, the rush of a country bumpkin who has never seen the world (๑•ั็ω•็ั๑)

First of all, I can definitely say that this book has indeed broken the way of writing popular fan fiction, and it is a work that can be expected in the future. Although the grammatical expression is a bit unfamiliar, this is inevitable for new authors. This phenomenon will continue to improve as the author progresses, and there is a lot of room for manipulation. Some personal opinions on the author's writing ideas 1. The author relies too much on the influence of the mysterious resurgence. In other words, the author ties the two too tightly, which makes people easily think of the original and lacks core competitiveness. The result is that those who have read the mysterious book will feel that this book is very good, while those who have not read it will feel that many parts of the book cannot be explained. 2. The protagonist in the author's novel lacks personal consciousness, cannot live, is not agile, and is not vivid. Whether you understand the protagonist from the first person or the third person, you will find it particularly embarrassing. 3. The book lacks an overall outline, the main line is unclear, the copy is incomplete, and the ending of the individual plots is delayed, which does not give people a feeling of being in it. It can only be regarded as listening to a story, and the story is a bit boring. 4. It is too bland, like writing a running account, the plot There are no ups and downs. Often, at the beginning of a stage, you can immediately figure out the follow-up while reading. Take the Taoist priest in the previous chapter as an example. There are few twists and turns, and it uses clichés to pretend to be B, and it cannot give people a bright feeling. If you want to read it word for word, you often don't have the patience. Speaking of the overall length, the author too blindly emphasizes gambling. Basically, every time he encounters a crisis, he relies on gambling to force a transition. Secondly, the core of the character is missing, making it impossible for readers to get involved. Finally, the protagonist's character does things for no reason. Forcibly explaining the protagonist's character makes people feel casual and contradictory. And Yang Jian's sense of substitution is very strong. Every few chapters, Yang Jian will be used to talk about things and comparisons. I want to use the original protagonist to set off the protagonist of the book. There is nothing wrong with writing like this, but it is too frequent. I hope the follow-up will be a hit, thank you.

But the plot development is too deliberate and watery, especially the extremely cliche and boring plot that likes to show off and slap people in the face, which will disgust readers every once in a while 😵

I've always been curious, my third brother is so good at writing, why doesn't anyone write fanfics about Liu San? Basically all the captains who showed a little bit of performance in the original work have been written down, including Li Leping, Wang Sandai, Cao Yang, and Zhang Xun. The most important thing is that the material is easy to find. Basically every fanfic is related to my third brother. The copy can be extended at will. The route to becoming a god is also written by Bai Wuchang, Xie Bian, and even Buddha helped you write the beginning.

I started this fanfic a year ago. It is full of twists and suspense. The plot arrangement is very exciting. The author was slow to update for a while, so I gave up for a while. I found that the author started to update daily and then returned to the trap. I highly recommend it. It is absolutely wonderful. I also hope that the author will get better and better as he writes. The status is online.

It's very well written, keep up the good work!

Don't delay, let's solve it quickly

26-28 The author's writing is really messy, with many poisonous points 😅

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Write down your character name, setting, and ghost type, and I will use my discretion to make various characters in the book, maybe even important ones. Even a member of the protagonist group. In terms of settings, there are a few rules I want you to follow. 1. Choose a surname that commonly appears in hundreds of families, and cannot be too middle-class. 2. There are laws for the existence of ghosts, and no matter how complicated the laws are, they are still laws. 3. If there are rules, they will be cracked, and even the most troublesome cracking methods can be cracked. Thank you, everyone, well~

This book is so depressing. You think the protagonist is awesome, but turns out he is still a novice. When the protagonist encounters these ghosts, even in the original book, he would not survive three minutes in the earthly world.

Shen Lin did not travel through time! ! ! Actually, I have long suspected that if the setting of this book is simply "traveling with memories", is it really worthy of Buddha paying attention and including the fancier in the original work? The following is my guess: In fact, it is not that Shen Lin watched the so-called "Mysterious Resurrection" in his previous life and then traveled through time. In fact, it was the future Shen Lin himself who gave his current self the memory of "Mysterious Resurrection", making his current self think that he had traveled through time. Just like many people speculate that the ghost eyes were given by Yang Jian in the future to Yang Jian in the present. All of this is actually Shen Lin's layout for the future! Based on two points. First, the ghost mother's ability is memory. Judging from Shen Lin's performance in the Ghost Lake chapter, his core ability is also memory. The description of Shen Lin in the article is "He is a person living in memories." In the future, Shen Lin encountered a desperate future and decided to save part of Yang Jian's memory and go back to the beginning to start over and reverse the future. Isn't this setting reasonable? Second, the part that directly strengthens my suspicion is the chapter "Disordered Memories"! Many people think that this is just a small linkage and a little Easter egg by the author, but I don't think so. The author actually uses this chapter to hint to us about future development. Hint 1: Shen Lin can be reborn in the memory of the past and exert influence on himself at that time! Hint 2: Destiny is a logical circle. Shen Lin does not remember that he was helped by his future self in Guiwei Mountain, but the help did happen! Finally, in summary, only if the author sets it up like this, I think that is the reason why Buddha pays attention to it. Mysterious Resurrection's fan-made airborne system and other methods are rubbish because they do not follow Mysterious Resurrection's worldview! And if the author sets it this way, then the setting of this book will also be very "revival" - there is no time travel, everything is the power of ghosts!

(Introduction to the author) Half the Corpse was born in the Daoguang period of the Qing Dynasty. When the Ming Dynasty Li Gui first recovered, he was already in his seventies and eighty years. After controlling the ghost, his first ghost was very weak. He had to physically touch the person being attacked for more than three seconds to trigger the law. When he was old, he had ghost recovery, but his physical ability was not good enough, and he had no fighting ability at all But the kind-hearted old man got into an extremely terrifying supernatural incident because of saving people. The core of the incident was that the ghost was a body skeleton that could weaken people or ghosts, and he was eventually dug out of his own body. The old man controls the bones The old man who controls the skeleton ghost assembles the puzzle step by step, just like Hong Qigong's game of the world. With the torso bones as the core, he collects leg bones, arm bones, skulls, and the flesh and blood of the ghost. Finally, he will use the core ghost as the main axis to increase the ghost and use the ghost after the puzzle to suppress other ghosts in the body. After returning to his origin, he will complete The puzzle pieces of two powerful ghosts merged into one, and turned into a complete ghost. After becoming a complete ghost, the ability was further sublimated, all aspects were reset to zero, the barriers were eliminated, and the fusion was complete, and Ba was born (In the setting of this book, Ba is the most outstanding person in the Republic of China) In that special era, after wandering in the world for decades, being bullied and suppressed, and seeing the worst things in the world, Ba's willpower was ridiculously strong. When the other ghost masters were complimenting each other and having a sword showdown in Huashan, the sudden appearance of Ba made them so embarrassed that they called them grandpa Ba was a different kind, but during a big operation, he was distracted due to some things and was stabbed in the back by his teammates. His whole body was severely damaged by supernatural objects. Hidden dangers were left. In order to completely solve the problem, Ba dismembered one of his opponent's bosses, and then gathered many resurrected ghosts. He created a unique ghost balance with himself as the key, and turned Fengmen Village into a ghost village. Many ghosts were imprisoned in it to imprison himself who was about to resurrect.

I don't know why this book is called the best mysterious resurgence fanfic. I personally feel that the author's description is very unclear and the overall feeling is very confusing. It seems that it is deliberately written to show the mystery and mystery. The unclear expression makes readers read everything, understand nothing, and forget everything after reading it. The feeling over and over in their minds is that the ghost's ability is always written inexplicably. This book is not good to read👎

(Introduction to the author) At that time, Yan Liben was a very ambitious person, relying on his talent and arrogance. Although he was a sick man, he felt that he had talent, but the era was too chaotic, and he had no opportunity and environment to display it An accident changed him. When he was out, he happened to encounter an incident and became a ghost controller. The wedding room in Wangzhai was the ghost controlled by Yan Liben. The reason why it rarely appeared was because Trapped in that wedding room Until later, an opportunity arose. A foreign ghost controller entered Dongwang Village. Yan Liben led him into the king's house, trapped him and killed him, and controlled the second ghost through the wedding room. Its specific manifestation was the red and white lantern in the underworld marriage After controlling the second ghost, he also gained the right to go out appropriately, and then accidentally met the ghost bride in a certain incident. So he began to plan, using various forms of trading, imprisonment, etc. To form an entire jigsaw puzzle. Then, based on the wedding room and red and white lanterns he controlled, he turned the entire royal residence into a ghost wedding venue. He narrowly escaped death and lured the ghost bride into the ghost wedding ceremony. He tried to control the ghost bride and connect the various ghost puzzle pieces to transform into an alien But people are ultimately weak when facing ghosts. He underestimated the terror of the ghost bride, especially the ghost bride. The increase of each puzzle piece in the wedding scene allowed the ghost bride to completely revive in the last step, and because of the lack of the last step, Dongwang Village was never complete Yan Liben did succeed, but also failed. The success was that he did integrate the ghosts in the entire Wangzhai into a brand new ghost event. He was the leader of the entire event, which was extremely terrifying; the failure was that he died, his consciousness was completely annihilated, and the last step of transforming the alien failed. Each generation of outstanding people will follow their own path, either succeeding or failing, but Yan Li's original path is stealing, Bao is Rong, Shen Lin is Zheng, and Yang Jian is Pin. It should be noted that in the great era, there are people outside the world and there is heaven

The original work is a cool novel in the guise of a horror novel. Xiao Yang basically pretends to be B all the way. The protagonist of this book is purely aggrieved. He is beaten under high pressure throughout the whole process. Others must rely on themselves or calculations to control the ghosts. In this book, the ghost mother begs Chu Li and the ghost lake begs Xiao Yang. At the beginning of the game, I gave away two ghosts (Ghost Elephant and Ghost Mother). After writing more than 600 chapters, including the first rush, I only managed three. Others, Xiao Yang, can control new ghosts every time I play a dungeon. What's the point of writing a bunch of scripts that have nothing to do with the growth of the protagonist? Chapter 800 finally made me an outlier, so I thought it would be cool. Then the protagonist, the butler of the National Boss, couldn't stand the look in his eyes. Even reading the original novel was not that aggrieved. The author's writing skills are not bad, otherwise I wouldn't have been able to follow him for several years, but the flaws are also quite obvious. There is really no need to stress the combat power of a fanfic like this.

Even though I was reading it, I didn't even know what ghosts looked like after reading more than 60 chapters. People say this is the best-written novel besides The Mysterious Resurrection, but it really doesn't feel like I did when I watched The Mysterious Resurrection at the time, and there are many parts that make people feel like they just glanced at it and forgot about it the next second. .

I'm really speechless. Going back to the past, there are no advantages at all. Gu Chen is written like a fool. Everything he encounters will only be scary. It's so scary. It doesn't feel like it's scary. I don't understand it. It's so scary all the time. The memory is restarted and the ghost lake is added. It can't kill you in the horror. The writing of the guys who are doing some intelligence collection is even more funny.

Hey, if a novel turns out to be like this, I might as well stop writing it. A piece of paper every half month. Whether you write or not depends on your mood. What kind of online writer do you think you are?

Regarding whether the protagonist's strength is too weak, he clearly controlled the ghost mother and was killed like a pig by Fang Shiming. You either don't emphasize how strong the ghost mother is, or you let the protagonist be powerful once or twice, okay? Ye Zhen can understand if you can't beat him. It's all luck along the way. Do you understand, it's just a gamble. Can cheating be accepted? Forcibly suppressing the protagonist's strength is really poisonous.

Codename: Impermanence Nanhu City, person in charge: Zhao Yan, male: 42 years old! Supernatural weapon: Ghost sickle: (the kind that cuts rice and wheat) trigger condition; touch with one hand, place the sickle in one hand on the neck or other position of the touched object, and cut it off. Objects similar to it within the range of your field of vision will be split into two halves at the same location. Cooperate with the ghost domain and use a shit ball as the trigger medium. Everything you see, including the ghost controller, will have his neck split in half. Kill a city in one move! ! ! (Meaning, cut off a lot) Driving ghosts: black and white ghost eyes, two ghosts! (Black Eye Ability: It can make the whole world become dark. Your perception and your body will be separated from your thinking. You can only know that you are in darkness, but you have no way to escape. You can only wait to be sent away by the fifth-level ghost realm) (Byakugan's ability: see through everything, there is no obstacle to everything, and send away everything easily. Byakugan's five-level sending away ability is comparable to the six-level ghost realm. Only by opening the sixth or seventh-level ghost realm can one resist the sending away and erasure) PS: The so-called several levels of ghost realms, to put it bluntly, are just the strength and weakness of supernatural powers. Yang Jian's several levels are because his ghost eyes are special. If one ghost eye is regarded as a water gate, ten water gates will separate it. The other powerful ghost realms are The water from several sluices is combined together, and Yang Jian opens more ghost eyes, which is like letting go of the sluice. More water is combined, the supernatural power is enhanced, and the ghost realm becomes stronger, allowing the ghost realm to affect more things in the outside world, so that more abilities can be used! Origin of the ghost: On the way back from the city, he got off the car and walked home on a small road. He passed by a small temple several meters high. He went there on a whim and had a look. The moment he encountered the stone elephant, the surroundings changed and he came here. Stumbled into an unknown area (ghost land), and after an hour of searching, I found an abandoned thatched house. The thatched house was very clean and contained some daily necessities. It was a simple cement bed, covered with a wooden board, and a straw mat was spread on the wooden board. On top of it was a withered, skinny man about 1.56 Meters tall. From the white beard on his face, he could vaguely be seen as an old man, lying on the straw mat. His eyes were extraordinarily big, like a monkey. Zhao Yan walked forward slowly and calmly. During this hour, he had already calmed down. When he was 12 years old, his father wanted to build a house for him, but was reluctant to find a machine to demolish the house (the family was not rich). He demolished it manually and was killed by a collapsed wall. He still remembered that night, when he received a landline call from his school teacher and rode his bicycle to his home from another town, he knelt on the ground and looked at his father lying on the straw mat with his head rolled up and his dirty and wrinkled clothes. It was slightly similar to the scene at this time, except that there were no sounds of conversations from relatives and neighbors around him, and the collapsed ruins. As for his mother, she had already passed away in childbirth when she gave birth to him. (The social medical level at that time was insufficient, plus there was no money and no security.) These years of social hardship have long made him look down on life and death. Everything is dull, day after day, and he lives the same life every day except for work. Nothing can stir up waves in his heart, just like a pool of stagnant water. Slowly moving forward, one hand began to tentatively touch the old man. From the appearance, it was certain that he had died long ago, but there was no trace of corpse odor or corpse spots. Zhao Yan's hand began to move towards the old man. His particularly protruding eyes were cold in his hand. It was so cold that he couldn't help but frown. Then he ignored it and opened the old man's left eye. Black! It was pitch black! It was dark enough to reflect Zhao Yan's figure! ! ! This made his body tremble, he took a breath, his heart suffocated, and he loosened his fingers, but the eye did not close, and he didn't care. He started to turn to the old man's right eye against the wall. It still had the familiar coldness. He opened it again, but the next scene made him stunned. It turned out that the eye was not black, but an extremely contrasting white, so white that his reflection was blurry. Looking at the figure reflected in the pair of eyes in front of me, it felt as if my soul was being sucked in. The reflection in the black and white eyes of his eyes became larger and larger until he looked at himself in the black and white eyes. A sharp pain hit him from the eyes, and he could no longer see anything. Following the body's instinct, he closed his eyes, squatted down and knelt on one knee, curled up his body, covered his eyes with his hands, and his face was slightly distorted. He endured severe pain, but the pain soon began to subside. When he opened his eyes again, there was only black and white in his world. When he closed his right eye, the world was only black. When she closed her left eye, the world was only white. He discovered that he could see very far away from the perspective of the third God, so far away that he could not believe it. He could also see a temple, a country road... And his hometown through his eyes! See further, see the farmers working their fields, see the people greeting their neighbors, see! See! See more! And he felt as if he could control everything and space he saw with his eyes. According to his own understanding, let's call it space (ghost realm), just like people are born knowing that they need to eat when they are hungry, but he seems to have no understanding of this ability. It was still very superficial and needed to be explored slowly. Without thinking too much, his eyes began to look at the corpse on the bed. The eyes on the corpse had disappeared under his black and white eyes that were close to God's perspective. He subconsciously touched his eyelids and he realized something. Suddenly he felt something attracting him, like a ray of light in the darkness. It was a scythe on the wall, and he subconsciously wanted to go over and get it, but he had a feeling that his eyes might flicker... The next moment, his figure flashed, and he appeared next to the scythe. He reached out and took it off in a hurry. It seemed to be no different from the scythe used to harvest rice, but he could feel the sharpness and unusualness of this scythe. Two hours later... The body was buried, the house was searched and cleaned, and Zhao Yan, holding the sickle, stepped out and disappeared... Behind the small temple, a few miles away in the forest grass, a thatched house appeared inexplicably, and a small grave next to it. A wooden board inserted into the grave, with nothing written on it. (Because the eyes that supported the ghost realm have been taken away by Zhao Yan, the ghost realm disappeared and the thatched house reappeared in this world) Looking at the familiar jujube trees in the yard and the dusty two-story rough house, Zhao Yan thought of a lot and couldn't help but sigh in his heart, but his face did not change, ( I don't want to write it here, just to shorten it, the house is a rough house built with the money left by his father and government relief, and then he went to work with relatives to earn money) PS: The black and white ghost eyes are the puzzle pieces that the old man got during his lifetime, which are one black ghost and one white ghost each with one eye, so that he can be like Tong Qian. Such a perfect balance is why there is no resuscitation. In addition, the ghost realm of these two eyes is very powerful. When you open the eyes, you will reach the fifth level of ghost realm (the ability before the fifth level needs to be exercised). It can easily reach the sixth level. With full strength, it can reach the seventh level in a short time (it cannot reach the eighth level) because it will break the balance of the eyes. Resurrection is regarded as a critical line, then it reaches the eighth level. It will exceed the limit of its own endurance Unless you control a third ghost, such as Ghost Head Jigsaw (can only support opening eight levels) or a complete ghost (can support nine levels, and will be revived at tenth level), suppression is formed, and a new balance is formed, then the upper limit can be increased and the eighth, ninth, or tenth level can be opened. Finally, the black and white ghost realms are used at the same time, opening to the highest limit. The two puzzle pieces merge to form a normal ghost eye that looks the same as ordinary people on the surface, but its ability becomes stronger and the tenth level can be opened. But you need to become an alien (a ghost with human nature), let this ghost eye become the normal eye of this alien, an eye that belongs exclusively to this alien (a ghost with human nature), and then look for the black and white ghosts to find the other two eyes... Finished! ! ! (The explanation is a bit hasty, mainly because I don't want to write anymore and am too lazy to write, so that's it, it's almost done)

I always feel that the protagonist is in a state of being resurrected all the time, and there is no time to take action with all his strength. I started reading it when it was only a few hundred thousand words long. It gave me a headache. The protagonist is like a dog chasing after me. I haven't stopped. Now it has reached more than 1 million words. Let's continue to see the difference.

A big boss recommended me to come. There is no way, even after so many years of prostitution, I still give him this face. 😂

Seeing the 140 passengers, everyone was sulking and couldn't bear it. Except for a few wild people inside, everyone was better than the pig's feet. They were all people who only had a few months to live and started fucking at every turn. The strength of kneeling would aggravate the recovery. It seemed that only the pig's feet could revive. Everyone else was doing it desperately. Slipping away

The routine is too boring. The ghosts the protagonist encounters are all S-level. They are on the verge of despair every time. They are faced with the resurgence of evil ghosts every time. Menopause fights back every time. This routine is boring if used too much, and it does not show the advantages of time travel. It is a gamble every time. I hope that there will not be much intersection with Yang Jian, which is not good.

The author's degree of originality is quite good. The designs like ghost phase, ghost mother, upside-down ghost, half-body corpse, and ghost pawn shop really stood out to me, but the shortcomings are also obvious. The following are my personal opinions First: The dungeon is downloaded too frequently and lacks routine. Although the author explains later that the protagonist is cursed, so he keeps encountering supernatural events, but the non-stop rush will cause visual fatigue for readers. In the original work, every time Xiao Yang downloads a copy, Buddha will arrange daily routines and some small events to make the transition, so that it can be slow and moderate, so that there is a sense of rhythm when watching it. Second: Brain-burning, this is a common problem among many weird authors. In order to make readers feel that the books they write are in-depth, some authors deliberately write the plot to be particularly brain-burning. In the end, not only was it not written well, but it was inconsistent. It also makes readers tired. The essence of novels is entertainment products, not math problems. It is okay to occasionally write brain-burning plots, but don't overdo it. Third: I found that the author has been avoiding contact between the protagonist and Yang. The original plot is occasionally summarized in a few sentences. I know that the author wants to write his own original plot as much as possible, but your book is a fan fiction. Most of the readers who read your book come here for Yang Jian and the original plot. So I think that after the protagonist usually downloads the original dungeon, he can interact more with Yang Jian in daily life, brag about it together, exchange feelings, grow and progress together, download the dungeon together, and show off in front of others. These are all fun points. As long as you don't harm him, Yang Jian will basically not treat you as an enemy, and if the two become relatively good friends, the protagonist should have no problem using a ghost chef or something.