I Don't Want to Be a Non-Human Being

Lightning protection: There is a system, and the dream has reality. Others can enter, and can be brought into the protagonist's dream repeatedly. It is similar to the traditional closed beta player flow. The transition before and after Chapter 19 may make you feel uncomfortable.

Is there any heroine who can tell the truth?

Why don't I want to become a non-human? If I become a species with a high starting point and a high upper limit, it doesn't matter if I'm a little ugly, I think I will be ecstatic. Humans are too weak.

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Three girls and the God of Death, please choose according to your own preferences!

The small dungeons are too fast, one after another, and the buffer between reality and reality is too short. Originally, the reaction of reality after a dungeon and the changes that resulted in various characters were a great pleasure for the protagonist to observe as the mastermind behind the scenes, but they were all brushed aside in one stroke.

This picture is good, it fits my imagination very well, please take a look 😁

Hey, after reading the two dungeons, the subject matter is very good, but I still like the first dungeon and the form after the first dungeon is written into reality, rather than the "coincidence of the gods" in the future, where the whole world can see the extraordinary at once, and there are many players who know some of the truth. It suddenly felt like a game like Lord God. I have to say that the first dungeon was really immersive, and I was extremely excited after watching it. As soon as the second copy was opened, it was like a basin of cold water was poured on my heart, and all the blood in my body froze.

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I think the author could take a look at Genshin Impact "Wolf King of the North Wind", it's really handsome!

You eunuch, stop writing books, right? They are all bad works, which makes people think that you, the author, will not finish the book and can only write bad works.

There is always a feeling that the supporting characters are being taken advantage of, but no responsibility is taken. . .

Sure enough, it was cut. To be honest, all old readers would have expected it, because it has become more and more boring from the beginning of Peach Blossom Fairy, not that it is boring, but compact and boring. Just like a game, if there are too few gameplays, players will soon become bored, but too many and too complex gameplays will also discourage players. Other people's books are written in such a way that the routines are repeated at the end, and the storytelling is reduced, resulting in GG. You are different. You are also unique at the starting point, because the plot is too tight and GG. I hope the author will take a look at my suggestions. Creativity in writing is the way to go, and it can be cool but not dealt with properly. As soon as you throw out the cool spot and it doesn't start to feel good, you move on to the next cool spot. The exciting point of this book is actually the manifestation of reality or the transformation of reality, rather than the quick travel. Although the plot is well written, because of the subject matter, readers will subconsciously expect the excitement of this template coming to reality. As a result, you are not happy yet, so you have to open it. This is just like the protagonist in a fantasy novel learning a Kung Fu. A Kung Fu boasts that it is omnipotent in the sky and on earth. The reader just thinks that the protagonist will be able to use it to show himself as a saint in front of others. As a result, you have boasted a lot, but it has not been used. You have also learned an almost awesome Kung Fu, but it has no use, so you continue to learn it. If there are too many, readers will lose interest.

Author, you always end up ordering eunuchs because your subscriptions are low. Readers who originally subscribed to the eunuch will no longer subscribe when you write the next book. They will want to raise eunuchs first to avoid you being eunuchs, and it becomes a vicious cycle. I feel that you are too pursuing a book to become a god. If you want to go down the road of online writing but feel that the initial money is too little, you can not work full-time and find a job that allows you to make a living while coding.

I've just started reading the second copy now. The subject matter and some settings of the book are very good, and I personally think the plot of the first copy is also okay. But starting from the second copy, I felt something was wrong. First of all, is the dungeon opened too fast? Also, if the lucky players who get 500 in the first copy are not their own people, if there are a few high-level figures from a certain country, they can report it to the country to essentially define the protagonist as an evil god or a demon invading the world, and then secretly find the protagonist to pretend to be a good person or design a routine to gain favor from the protagonist and gain abilities. Obviously the setting can use 500 random players, but the logic of choosing the protagonist does not make sense at all and is disgusting. There are no punitive measures in the dungeon itself, and there is a certain death option. You have to take a player who has nothing to do with you in the dungeon together. I don't understand the logic of this. Are you really afraid of a few dark characters appearing to plot against the protagonist? There's something wrong with the protagonist's IQ.

It has the feel of a non-human genetic fusion, but each small chapter feels forcibly stitched together.

It looked pretty cool at first, but the more I looked at it, the more awkward it became. Various myths have revived, and they are still at the myth level. It is estimated that there will be many bugs within a few copies. After all, the world is so big, and there are so many bosses that it is impossible to use them.

The themes of several of the author's books are very good and very attractive, but most eunuchs

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The creativity is good, but the progress is too fast. There are only three copies of the sixty chapters. I really need to slow down. I write dozens of chapters in one copy, focusing on the characterization of the characters. Lilith and Immortality can definitely take up more space. At the current speed, no matter how many creative ideas the author has in his mind, he will finish it quickly. The subsequent stories will inevitably be homogenized. Slow down.

Forced to pull people in, and those who die in the copy will die. This style will be much more serious. Maybe it is because I have read a lot of books about the fourth natural disaster, and now I hate the playful and smiling style of players.

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The topic of this book is actually very good. It breaks new ground in the same old themes, but the author can't fully control it... Alas, I like this type of book very much. It's a pity.

Hey, the book written by the author is indeed good, but there are too few people to subscribe to it, so it is difficult to stick to it.

This one is handsome

This problem is actually very common. Many authors are like this. Got new ideas. My brain clicked and I wrote it out. I was so excited that I finished writing three chapters. Then I finished 300 chapters and ran out of ideas. At best. The writing is very tight. Full of useful information. In other words. It doesn't expand the content at all. Even if it is a little watery, the main line, branch lines and sub-lines are all finished.

It collapsed starting from Chapter 19, it's a pity

None of the four books is finished

I originally wanted to keep it first and then look at it after it has fattened up. I didn't expect that after raising it, it would become useless.

You only have a few chapters and you just let us collect it. It's hard to end it 😜That's it