Cultivating Immortality in Tianjin, 1979

The emotional scenes are too long. There is no need to write about so many women. Is it difficult to take them all to ascend together? The road to immortality is inherently lonely.

It was disturbing to see that even though he was at such a high level, he still used his fists to fight. Haha, the enemy will always have more upright methods than you. Pig's feet will win completely due to luck. 88, It's a waste of my subscription

Author, don't blame readers for criticizing you. Look at the title of your book. What kind of title you write will attract what kind of reader group. People who read your book are attracted by "Cultivation of Immortality in the Republic of China", but your plot always relies on "Siheyuan". Those who like Cultivation of Immortality in the Republic of China feel cheated, and those who like "Siheyuan" will not click on the book title after seeing it. You are not trying to please both sides.       ，，，，，，

I was convinced, and I gave you a reward for posting this article No, brother, the author's grandpa, you finally got a copy of the food and grass, what's the result? You don't know how to write female characters, you don't know how to write emotional scenes, so don't write, don't write, don't write! It would be awkward to leave this alone. What's this? Don't write emotional dramas. If you can't write a female character, just let the heroine be a vase. If you can't handle the emotional line, don't write it. It's a good book and it's gone. Especially the heroine, I don't like this character now that I see it, and I don't want to read it. Please, author, cherish your book. If you are joking, I will leave right away.

My first feeling after reading this book is that I can't live without women.

There is no need to describe the widow too much. It is best to move away when there is a chance. Otherwise, just write it down and end it instead of a plot that looks like a silly pillar. Not many people like to be a silly pillar.

Why add a woman from the Siheyuan? It reminds me of Qinman Siheyuan. It's so fucking disgusting. I can't write this person to death.

Alas, how should I put it, the description of Fu Yunzhao's character was originally low in favorability, but she became the heroine. The other emotional lines have not been dealt with yet, and there is a female heavenly master. I don't know what to say. Now the female protagonist Fu Yunzhao suddenly leaves this kind of sexy operation again, and the male protagonist goes to chase and ends up in jail, causing harm to others. Now the sense of the female protagonist that the reader had a hard time maintaining is instantly cleared. I immediately lost interest in pursuing the book when I saw it in the Northeast, but when I saw it was limited to exemptions, I took a look at it again and recommended six of them to support the author.

The writing style is just okay, but the plot is very poisonous. The author has mastered the seven or six orifices of Taoist cultivation, and the writing is completely different.

It's getting more and more boring, and I look suffocated