Self-Cultivation of Dragon Palace Disciples

The author has a small suggestion for you. Since you have read about the Dragon King of the Four Seas, you should look up the attributes and positions of the Dragon King of the Four Seas. The Dragon King of the East China Sea lives in the east and is the Qinglong, which can control rain, thunder, floods, ocean tides, etc. He is the absolute god of rain Dragon King of the South China Sea, the south belongs to fire, and fire is red, so the Dragon King of the South China Sea is a red dragon that can control fire, real fire, lightning, etc. Living in the West Sea, he is a black dragon. The Dragon King of the West Sea is a black dragon that can control wind convection. It is in charge of the cool climate and weather changes The Dragon King of the North Sea is a white dragon. Because he is located in the remote and cold land of the North Sea, the Dragon King of the North Sea is in charge of weather changes such as snow, hail, freezing and frost

Liu Er's master shouldn't be Arhat, but Huang Mei. Isn't Karma-Destroying Fire Xiao Leiyin's skill?

Recently, there are very few books that I can read carefully and slowly. Most of them are read at a glance or skipping. This book by the author is actually good. I read it all without skipping it. Now that I have a family, I don't have much money to read novels, so I always go to other stations. I am really ashamed and can only vote for the author.

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I can't grasp the key point. Why am I writing about a widow? It's unlucky.

The chicken system, God TM decomposes the treasure into itself and combines it into a low-level magic weapon. It's sick.

The writing at the beginning is really poisonous 😅 Among the first twenty chapters, seven of the protagonists are in a state of invisibility. I skipped it directly. I read the comments and said that it was all about a little widow who was rescued. After a few chapters, the action of helping Qingjiao seemed inexplicable. Maybe I looked at it with my crimson eyes and didn't understand whether it was a mission or an injustice. There was also something wrong with the female green dragon. She broke in and killed all the unrelated servants in the courtyard, but she spared the life of the villain who stole her dragon ball. She didn't understand the logic of this thinking. Originally, I saw that this book had many reviews, and I thought the quality would be good, but the beginning is really a little bit toxic, and I don't know what it will be like later on.

Your white dragon protagonist is thinking about cheat's upgrade skills, while being dismissive of the source of silver coins for cheat's upgrade skills. I really wanted to hit him on the head with a shovel. After hiding in the water for a long time, your brain is filled with mud? What logic. The description of Goldfinger is simply a failure. Putting aside Goldfinger, the story is just a daily invincible and carefree flow. If you delete Goldfinger and rewrite it, the same story outline will be better than this one.

Someone has written 1.28 Million words, and I haven't even kissed him. I won't say who it is 😴 Why are there so many monk articles in Qidian? Usually when I meet a beautiful woman in real life, I can't walk, but in the book, the woman is so toxic that I would rather be gay? (I almost forgot about Qingyu, the heroine who is hidden in the world.

Author, if you want to write a group portrait article and delve into the supporting characters, you must remember to use a main line to guide the stories of all the supporting characters, so that they can express their own character traits in their respective plots without getting rid of the will and influence of the protagonist. Otherwise, if you don't mention the protagonist in three chapters, it will be very strange to read. Also, I really can't understand anything in your introduction.

Why do you have the nerve to mention the words "genius flow"? Has this time traveler graduated from elementary school?

After reading more than fifty chapters, I just feel that the protagonist is not likeable at all

The cheats and strength are vague, and the protagonist is doing things here and there with a hammer and a stick. It feels like this book has no main line. The author just writes wherever he thinks. If it weren't for the Westward Journey, it would have been completed in two hundred chapters. It seems quite boring, but it's just that I often end up traveling thousands of miles away. Moreover, the protagonist is just a fool, so he doesn't need to be embarrassed. If you can click 2,000 silver coins once, it will take half a month to reach the level of cultivation. However, if you don't click it, what's the logic of spending time cultivating? Silver coins are related to the use of gold fingers, and I have not studied clearly. When you were worshiped in Xiaohe, you got more than 10,000 silver coins, which is enough for you to spend several months practicing. Isn't it right to think of ways to earn silver coins? It's a bit boring. The protagonist is just upgrading for the sake of upgrading. He has no goals and is too adrift. He feels like a tool man.

There is indeed something remarkable about this book What moved me the most was the love between Wu Song and Diao Chan. In order to save Wang Mang, Zhang Fei turned against his sworn brother, the Golden Retriever Lion King Xie Xun. Especially when I read that Guo Jing gave up his position as the leader of the Sun Moon God Sect and resolutely wandered around the world with the gentleman Jian Yue Buqun, it made me cry. Linghu Chong joined the anti-Japanese war to avenge his father.

I'm relieved to see in the comment section that I'm not the only one who thinks the protagonist has a skull.

First: If it is a demon cultivating article, then the detailed description of the monster's body should be the first priority, right? At present, I know that the protagonist is a white dragon, and the dragon's mouth does not look like a crocodile; second: I don't have a good grasp of the data, and the protagonist's realm is still at level one at the beginning. Just a few people in a small fishing village so-called worship, and the protagonist's skills and skills have improved by leaps and bounds inexplicably? The number of silver coins started to increase by tens of thousands. Isn't it a bit out of line? Third: The protagonist's sense of presence. I haven't seen the protagonist in Chapter N. Isn't the sense of presence too weak? Fourth: Doesn't the protagonist practice cultivation? Do you keep upgrading like this to gain experience and increase your mana? Fifth: The protagonist is clearly a person wearing dragon skin, right? Sixth: Panel... Can you be more detailed? Can you express it clearly? Seventh: I've already gained millions of experience points in just a few chapters. It's inflation, brother; Eighth: Is there any news about leveling up and skills? Do you really think you are playing computer games? Ninth: What a mystery, the protagonist doesn't know how big he is...

I don't like the protagonist's casual attitude. He doesn't care when he knows something has escaped and a whole city has died. He doesn't care when Qingsame goes to take revenge and people die. It's as if he has forgotten all his past lives after turning into a dragon. Don't you even cultivate your mind when you become an immortal? I'm not afraid that karma will catch up with you

A widow with children can write five or six chapters on it... No wonder this book is lukewarm.

I suggest you change the protagonist. There is no need to write this one with extremely low IQ.

Not happy. Ghost Valley. Taoism. It feels like slandering Taoism. Taoism. Let nature take its course and rule by doing nothing. Taoism kills ordinary people to refine treasures for the sake of authority in the underworld. Not happy. I didn't write about the Taoism in my heart

Everyone is welcome to jump through the chapters to find the protagonist, but isn't the protagonist a woman? A widow?

You're kidding me, Cheng Yaojin has only been practicing for a few days and can rival Daluo Jinxian.

Abandoned. The front and back do not correspond. I also fought with Yang Jian in the front. I don't know the back. The back and forth are inconsistent. The front is still good at upgrading. The back can't win. Don't upgrade yet. Forcibly make a villain. Lower IQ. You can still take a look at the front. The back is just water, water, water. For the sake of water, the word count is forced not to upgrade. Vomit🤮🤮🤮🤮

What the hell are you writing? For example - an ordinary village woman without any explanation of her appearance in advance can make middle-to-upper-class people in big cities feel amazing. I am really convinced. And who are you writing about? I think my resistance to poison is very strong. Many people say it is poisonous, but I think it's okay. But for you, I can only say you are poisonous! Can't stand it

It was poisonous to death. It was okay for the first few chapters, but then it took a turn for the worse. I was so angry that I subscribed to one chapter specifically to give a negative review...

The current plot has something to do with "Children of the Dragon Palace", Shui Shui Shui

This book has been getting worse and worse lately. The main character was originally written well, but since the monkey came out, the main character will only revolve around the monkey. It is no longer clear who the main line of this article is, and it has lost its soul.

What is this author doing here? Doesn't he have an outline? The preface does not match the postscript. The previous part is about the first meeting after the fight with Yang Jian. In the previous chapters, Sun Monkey wrote that he became Daluo and founded the sect. Now, can the Buddha's bone relics help him become Daluo? ? ? ?

Just cut it and you can't stand it. It will be good for you and the readers.

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