I Am the Only Magician of the Magic Civilization

How to say it! When I saw Chapter 8, I felt like this. The world should revolve around pig's feet, otherwise it would be wrong. Highly poisonous, debt is seen.

The protagonist's camp is absolutely neutral (the fourth natural disaster), I think. . . It has nothing to do with oneself but one's place of birth, and the camp of friends. . . Lawless (law, common sense, status), what is good for me is good, what is bad for me, 😒 Haha (no matter who you are, kill decisively) Be kind, the protagonist's original world view is here, if possible, be kind (kill normally in battle, but not kill when out of battle) In general, after joining the Fengling Moon Shadow Sect, the protagonist will let himself go, those who follow me will prosper and those who go against me will die (although this is a bit exaggerated)

It's a good idea, but it's a pity that it's used in the wrong place. The planeswalkers are still on the battlefield. Oh, bye bye.

Bao, listen to me, find a factory and work hard, stop writing, Shennong will bury one one, and two will bury a pair, none of them can bear it 🤫

Although I am a first-level new author, I should try to be as tolerant as possible. But the poison resistance was completely unbearable, the inexplicable war, the inexplicable magic, the inexplicable behavior.

Too young, and the writing is very illogical, as is the case in many places. It is actually very easy to write about the military state in the 19th century. You can watch many documentary documentaries to see what actually happened in reality, such as World War II, instead of just making up random things. The escape of prisoners is too unrealistic. In the situation of being surrounded Under the circumstances, there is also a moral kidnapping, and you are a 13-year-old boy. I think it is okay for you to escape alone, but it is impossible to succeed and it is meaningless to lead people to escape. For foreigners, in essence, the two countries are not familiar with each other. They are just guests. Just running away at night is a good idea.

It's quite funny to see that system data.

I still don't understand that it's almost industrialized. Why do we need orcs? Shouldn't they all be made into canned food?

When I saw the title of the book, I wanted to come in and complain! ! ! What does civilization mean? Can't you look it up in the dictionary? ! ! Is the minimum limit for online writing so low? You can write a book even if you don't recognize all the words!

The subject matter of the only mage is quite interesting, and the writing is passable. But I guess what most people want to see is a travel costume or building a mage tower to let a very small number of people come into contact with the extraordinary... I don't think many people like you who are engaged in war...

My feelings as of Chapter 49 Four words: A complete mess The beginning is good, the setting is also good, semi-invincible, even a little bit wise and cautious, it is no different from invincible. However, after the protagonist showed various abilities in the early stage: First, he was not taken seriously by the high-level officials of all parties; Second, when he really wanted to kill and take revenge on the battlefield, he was forcibly interrupted by the author, with various specious reasons. It limits the protagonist's passionate performance; Thirdly, both the description of the intrigues and the description of the battle scenes are careless and even confusing. The protagonist's IQ goes up for a while and makes various predictions, and for a while he doesn't understand anything, just like a child. These problems lead to a complete lack of plot coherence, which greatly affects the reading experience. What a pity for such a good subject matter!

In front of you is the novice in the greenhouse, and below you suddenly become a lunatic, just like those large bases where there are always one or two humans with abnormal brains.

Don't understand? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

What the hell? Even if the whole plot is incomprehensible, it's still a war story wrapped in a magical skin. The various operations are confusing.

? What exactly was written? Am I looking at Bright Sword?

I don't understand what the protagonist wants to do at the beginning? At the beginning, he has to cause trouble and must take the captives to escape, or why is it all?

It should be called the only shit stirrer in the steam era.

I saw Chapter 20. Is there any attack magic behind the protagonist? Is this the traveling mage in the private server? It only flashes for healing, is immune to 90% of the damage, and has no attack ability. Isn't this a pure wet nurse who can withstand beatings?

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 13. There is a senior who established a pure mechanical technology empire in a high-energy world. It's outrageous.

Thank you all for your support, thank you.

The idea is very good, but it seems a bit awkward. I just feel like I can't get to the point.

Collected it, just curious how long this stand-alone author can write

The fantasy feeling is almost too cold

Shit! Same book.