Honghuang Life Restart Simulator

The background of Honghuang novel is very big, but the structure of your writing is too small. When this Dragon Nest sect comes out, it is completely like something from a cultivation novel 10 years ago. Be the leader of the tribe, lead the development, gain luck, consume it to become stronger, and then develop again. Since luck is consumable and can be commandeered, how do you replenish the luck of your tribe after it is consumed? In the end, the protagonist becomes Da Luo, and the tribe still relies on their bodies to fight? I have never played a life simulation, but through the simulator selection, everyone and everything involved in the protagonist has been fixed. Is it just to compile an outline and put it out and then start filling in the content?

I saw Chapter 20 and did not continue. Let me just give you a few comments. 1. Simulator = spoiler. The suspense of the plot of the novel is very important, but the introduction of the simulator is too detailed every time. It is equivalent to reading the following outline. Knowing the general development of the plot, the desire to continue reading has been greatly reduced. To no more 2. The practice of nouns is confusing. In the ancient background, Western fantasy terms such as "elements, kingdoms of gods" appear, and the leader of a sect "Dragon Nest Palace" is strange words like "Imperial Nest" and "Emperor Zun", but the protagonist, a small tribe, has a name, which makes people confused about the naming method of Dragon Nest Palace. 3. The collapse of the world view, let's talk about luck first. From Chiyang Sanxian's dialogue and the weight of the protagonist's luck, it can be seen that the author wants to set up Qi luck as a cherished resource, but at the same time, the author also treats Qi luck as a "protection fee" that can be used to collect taxes. This makes the word Qi luck suddenly lose its ethereal mystery. Feelings, degenerate general equivalents like currency, low comparison (anyone can do it casually, but later they have to ask for the method of converting luck and mana, which is somewhat contradictory), and this has actually locked the class in the prehistoric world. Losing luck is equivalent to losing the possibility of getting better. Any normal person It is impossible for any organization to accept this. This is basically the same as the difference from free people to slaves. Free people can be poor or rich, but they are always much better than slaves. Apart from having enough to eat (protected by high-level sects), Mao has nothing else 4. It is still a matter of worldview. The entire power system seems to be what the author thinks of Where did I write about the several realms before becoming an immortal? I don't know how to divide each realm. I don't know. Anyway, there is a stage of becoming a god. First, the protagonist has a few "Tao" mana, and then suddenly there is a "Nian" Tao Xing. However, there seems to be no corresponding relationship between this Tao Xing and the realm and the number of layers. The protagonist took the Shen Ji Kung Fu and chose the innate Tao body, but still Even hair cannot be repaired, and then suddenly you can make history and become a man who has reached the 100th level of qi training. There is so much blank space and no explanation, but you have to describe in detail a white tiger with 500 jun power and a human with 150 jun power (I may have remembered these two specific numbers wrong), and then turn around and tell you that these two are mortals. Beast, then why are you bothering to write these precise numbers? 5. World view, cause and effect, the protagonist is a "pseudo monk", a guy who didn't wear shoes on the journey of cultivation, and he is already thinking about "ending the cause and effect" here... You, a near-mortal, and a group of mortals are thinking about the cause and effect here 6. Each character seems to be mentally retarded, Chiyang Sanxian knows how to preach and use luck. The protagonist also has luck by being a one-time cultivation accelerator. It can be seen that "you can get luck by doing things that are beneficial to the human race (even the protagonist can get luck by doing things that are beneficial to a few people)". With such a timely and clear positive feedback mechanism, gods and monks from all walks of life regard it as if they are mentally retarded. No, let's not talk about the various innate gods. The three thousand sects are all from the human race. We have to wait until the protagonist is a little mentally retarded to come and improve the medicinal soup. If their average IQ can be over 20, the human race should have realized the four modernizations long ago The wording may be a bit exciting, but there is no attack on the author. I hope it can help the author.

This is a wasteful start, and waste is too wasteful. In such a high-level world like the prehistoric era, the protagonist is suppressed like an ant. The physical fitness of the god-level is not as good as practicing qi. You may not know the innate Taoist body level when you are born in the prehistoric world. Even if you are such a waste, training itself is to make up for your own shortcomings, but you keep amplifying this shortcoming, making people become more and more wasteful when they see the practice. In summary, this is a story about a waste in the prehistoric world.

After reading the first chapter, I couldn't help complaining that the layout was too small. The protagonist traveled to the prehistoric times and felt many times stronger than before. Unprecedented strength filled the whole body, weighing about two to three hundred kilograms. Just this, two to three hundred kilograms? Isn't this the beginning of martial arts? Or is it low-level martial arts, similar to the Dragon-Elephant Prajna Kung Fu, where ten dragons and ten elephants have the power of one thousand kilograms?

Good guy, during the Qi training period, his combat power collapsed to the point where he suddenly stopped caring about Daluo Jinxian, and asked the protagonist to rebuild the path of science in the ancient world. He named the realm after high school, university, and grade. It was completely over the top. I can't stand it anymore.

Except for the simulator, which is a bright spot, everything else in this book is rubbish. The plot is so nonsense that it is a complete mess. If nothing else, it is just a Qi-refining thing. How can it be awesome? If you dare to jump, you will be killed directly. There are many powerful people in the world, who can't crush the protagonist to death?

Looking at the most interesting subject matter, I thought I had encountered a good book

Talented people know how to apply things mechanically. Other simulators basically reopen a world and choose different talents and attribute points. This is completely understandable and necessary. In this book, the pig's trotters are set in the prehistoric times, and the simulator does not need to reopen the world. It only needs to simulate the subsequent life and choose a path. Choosing different paths will lead to different lives. At this time, the pig's trotters themselves do not have those talents or attribute points. But the author insists on copying it mechanically, including talent selection and attribute point selection. Is this necessary?

In the prehistoric era, a pig could live forever even if no one killed it. The protagonist is obviously not as good as a pig.

Is a time traveler in the Qi refining stage in the prehistoric world every second?