Black Hole Jianghu

Anyone? Show your claws😎

Is it well written? What I wrote earlier is terribly messy, and the most important point is that the word count is too obvious, and there is so much water in the early stage. Is it really good?

The completion does not highlight the role of the golden finger. The so-called unlimited upgrade requires finding the purchased price skills to upgrade. Can it also be called unlimited upgrade?

Refill. Very well written. . . I really want to see the development of the plot later,,,

How many people are there in your world if you can eat hundreds of millions of blood at every turn? Speechless, speechless,

A Diwu was written as a fantasy by the author🤭🤭🤭🤭

After reading more than ten chapters, I feel a bit less immersed. 1. Without an introduction to the world view, there is no general understanding of the world. 2. There is no introduction to the game and I don't know much about the game. 3 There is no description and introduction of the protagonist himself. 4 To be determined, I haven't finished reading it yet, so I don't know what's next. If the author has information, please post it and take a look!

The idea of ​​the book is good, but I don't know why. I just feel awkward and can't read it. Like Black Tiger Bully, I feel like they all look like actors. They are just there to go through the motions. I don't know if it's a problem with the author's description or something. The whole thing is very abrupt and full of dissonance, but I can't tell what's wrong. Does anyone know why?

I just read the first chapter and found a problem: The introduction is about the protagonist traveling from the 20th century to the 30th century, and a century we are talking about is 100 years, so the protagonist should travel from one day in 1900-1999 to one day in 2900-2999. However, the author wrote in the first chapter: The protagonist traveled from 2019 to 9102, spanning more than 7,000 years. Then the question comes: The first point: 2019 is the 21st century, not the 20th century; The second point: The 30th century is 2900-2999, not 9100-9199. So, author, is this wrong in your introduction or in your main text?

If the root bone is low, don't you have the Yijin Meridian, the Marrow Cleansing Meridian, and the Nine Yin Bone Forging chapters? How can I improve it to 5?