Transmigrating into a Fantasy World: Powering Up with Mr. Vampire

Author, are you a woman? The protagonist, a man in his thirties, gets shy when he sees his own naked body. Is this supposed to be a gay protagonist?

The beginning was alright, but then this pile of stuff comes along. What's the point of these two pages? It's not like we're subscribing to chapters.

The beginning was likely intended to attract those who enjoy cultivation-themed stories, but then a plot involving Uncle Nine suddenly appeared, and the plot felt a bit padded. I suggest that the later parts be revised.

What's your point of view, author? Training both physical body and magic is so confusing. The protagonist, with his infinite energy, is a complete waste; besides physical training and magic cultivation, he can't do anything else.

I'll wait two more. If it's still like this, then get lost. Go wherever you want, I'm never looking at you again.

The plot of Uncle Nine is really weak.

Ocean, you are all water, goodbye without words.

It's too verbose. The sect's environment is emphasized repeatedly. A simple message to an elder would suffice, but they make up a whole long paragraph about it.

You explicitly mentioned the Eternal Heaven and the Panchen Lama; if you don't promote harmony, who will? And they're all portrayed negatively...

After thinking about it for a while, I'll say this: actually, the later part about the main god space (Buddhist realm) wasn't as interesting as the earlier part about cultivating immortality. You were clearly just doing a task, so why not be more efficient? Instead, you dragged it out, failing to create any fun or excitement. It was just a waste of time. ╮(￣▽￣)╭