Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from Traveling Through the Republic of China

There are too many contradictions. A general who was almost invincible in the middle of the Ming Dynasty turned into a zombie and became a weakling in the Republic of China. Not to mention that he didn't even understand the secrets of military strategists. He had to learn from Maoshan's secret books. As a result, even the descendants of a down-and-out Qing Dynasty general understand it. It's a contradiction. In addition, I don't believe that there were no monks participating in the Ming Dynasty's expedition. How could the protagonist not know about it? He only knew that there were cultivators when he met Dragon Slayer. The setting cannot be justified.

There are so many cultivators here. Why are these countries still being bullied? There is a problem with this setting. One monk can kill 10,000 British troops, and a thousand can kill 10 million. Britain has been destroyed.

This is this holy article. It has been tried and tested, so don't read it.

The author makes the background of the spiritual world involved in the change of political power in the Republic of China similar to that of Jiuliu Xianren, and will write 4o4 later. It's best to change the direction. The protagonist is a zombie. Due to the advent of the end of the law, in order to transcend this world, he travels across the heavens and collects the secrets of various sects. Gods and immortals live, ghosts and immortals live for death. Open up a side of the underworld and wield the power of reincarnation.

I was a little confused. At the beginning, someone attacked the protagonist's power. It was a decisive attack and a good start. Unfortunately, the protagonist's power collapsed too quickly and I didn't know how to arrange the plot. Then there is the old man part. This is for the plot to ignore the protagonist. There is no logic. If you can't kill the old man, there is nothing to say. The protagonist who kills decisively slaps a few big mouths on the people who bring life and death to him. That's not enough. He even invites you to dinner when you meet him later. This is a good brother who fell in love at first sight and got married directly. It's hard not to be rigorous at all and not collapse.

Everything collapsed from behind and transformed into the Virgin White Lotus

This book is good, don't follow the trend blindly.

I can't figure out what the main plot is, and also, the setting is broken.

There are too many typos and the author won't correct them.

The author doesn't know anything. A zombie king who is about to become a demon can be written as another type of zombie. There are different types of zombies. For example, the small zombies in Uncle Jiu's Foreign Zombies are the spirit zombies in Alien Zombies. They can be smart or not suck blood. There are also bronze armored zombies, which are the same, and then Maoshan. The zombie king among zombies, this zombie king is Flying Zombie, and the weather in the place where it is has begun to be sweltering. It sucks blood from the air, flies to the sky and escapes from the earth, and is reborn by sucking blood. It is wise and knows how to seek good luck and avoid disaster. This is Flying Zombie, and it is just one step away from being able to overcome the disaster and become a demon. It is amazing to be so weak as you wrote

There are so many practitioners that they are all over the place, which makes me feel that this book is written in prehistoric times and not in the setting of the Republic of China. Confucian practitioners are also a failure. Confucianism is originally incompatible with ghosts, gods, and immortality. It has no extended basis for these mystical sciences, and it has no sense of mystery as an explicit school. The practitioners' interference in the secular world is too deep and their power is too strong. According to the author's setting, the history of this world cannot be decided by mortals. If Feng Shui is so powerful, there will be no such humiliating history as the Republic of China. Too much historical involvement makes the theme of this book unclear. It does not look like a historical article or a fairy tale, and it feels particularly awkward. It is recommended that the author reduce the number of practitioners, weaken the power settings of practitioners, reduce the settings of practitioners participating in historical events, and focus on the protagonist seeking immortality from the background of the Republic of China and returning to the theme of cultivating immortals.

As an old bookworm, you can understand the author's skills just by reading the introduction. To be honest, it's a bit too young.