My Everyday Romance Is So Out of Character

I have a strong ability to withstand stress. If you come from a toilet bar, you don't need to worry about whether you will complain about autism. But try not to use bad words, which will affect your appearance. Other than that, I don't care if they are vicious. For me, it's better to have someone comment than no one commenting. As for the writing style, I am used to it, so it can only be relaxed and joyful. If I don't like it, I may not be able to change it. At present, this book's performance is not good, or it is very bad, but I won't cut it. It has to be on the shelf for at least three months with perfect attendance, right? Also, I would like to mention that the fourth heroine is about to appear in the plot (there are only 4 in the outline, so I should not add more). You can mention what you like about the character of this heroine here, and I can modify it as appropriate.

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"Hello Mr. Gennai, this is my application for withdrawal from school. " "Classmate Xiaoniaoyou, the teacher still wants to ask if you have encountered any difficulties. If you have any difficulties, the teachers and classmates can help you. " "It's no problem, teacher. I really just have a good friend who wants me to go to her school. " The scene of submitting the application for withdrawal is still clear. Everything is irreversible, but it doesn't matter. I am a sister and need to grow up faster. I have promised my mother to take good care of my sister. This is what I owe... Right... So, in Kanagawa, just be an ordinary person who doesn't help others... Then not many people will know me, I won't leave an impression on others, and I won't be recognized so easily, right? "Meow~" The little civet cat seemed to sense that something was wrong with its mother's mood. It climbed onto Xiaoniaoyou's legs and raised its front legs as if to comfort her. Xiaoniaoyou put his forehead on Mimi's forehead. "Mimi, I have to leave again, and I have to leave here again... Let's go together, okay? I don't want... I don't want to be here. I'm alone..." "Meow~" But I still can't let go, I can't let go of Nana, I can't let go of Ayane, I can't let go of Mie, I can't let go, Shiraishi... Shiraishi, that is such an outstanding young man... Such a dazzling young man, It's a pity that someone like me is probably not worthy, right? I haven't said a few words to him until now, It's just a one-sided liking. "Meow~" Mimi's timely cry interrupted the girl's random thoughts, temporarily awakening the girl from her sad mood, and then raised her front foot and pointed in the direction of the cat food. "Are you out of cat food?" The girl raised her hand to wipe away the sadness from the corners of her eyes. "Wait, Mimi, I'm going to buy some for you right now, and then we'll go to Kanagawa in a few days." Probably sitting on my knees. It took a while, and the girl staggered when she got up. When she walked out of the apartment door, because it was evening, there were still many pedestrians on the road. The girl hesitated for a while, and finally chose to go back and put on a mask and hat. The process of buying cat food didn't take long, and the girl felt lucky that she hadn't been recognized. Just looking at the sunset in the distance, she suddenly didn't want to return to the apartment so early. She sat on a bench by the river. , Closed her eyes, it seemed that what appeared in front of her was no longer the setting sun, but the young man who haunted her. The brilliance of the setting sun fell on her face and imprinted itself on her heart, as if she could reach out and touch him, but found that he was out of reach. "Are you okay?" The girl was startled by the sudden voice behind her. It was a voice she had heard countless times in her dreams, the voice of her love, She hurriedly wiped away her tears, lowered her head, and sighed. He replied dully: "Thank you, I'm fine, Shiraishi-san" "Huh? Actually, I'm a little curious, how do you know it's mine without even raising your head?" "Please... Please don't continue to ask. Thank you..." The young man scratched his head, looking a little confused, but since everyone else said so, it was not good for him to ask further, "Well, the bus is here, classmate, see you later." The boy noticed the bus approaching the intersection with his peripheral vision, and said goodbye to the girl, I like to take the bus at six o'clock in the evening. There is a crisp sound of coins in the coin slot, and people squeeze into the bus like sardines. The grandfather who was leaning on the chair and snoring, the man who called his wife softly to say he would be home soon, or the high school student who was reading or listening to English. Different people all got on the bus home at the edge of the city's sunset, and this is the time when you and I are closest. The girl sat in the corner where he could not see, quietly seeing the young man under the sunset. In fact, I am very satisfied. I at least know your name, heard your voice, chatted up close, and seen your eyes. I'm lucky, even if I'm sad, Goodbye, Shiraishi-san.

The spring breeze of late March blows from the north with a hint of chill, causing a dizzying array of flower petals to slowly fall. Sitting quietly on the bench, Soga Wuren gently closed the book in her hand and admired the sea of ​​flowers together with the tourists around her who sighed from time to time. Since resigning as the student union president in the second half of her second year of high school, the girl has been coming here every weekend, and this is even more true after she passed the independent examination at Tokyo University. Just sitting quietly on a bench and reading a book is already a stunning sight that is as stunning as the blooming Yae Sakura in the park. At this time of year, many tourists from all over the world come to Gyoen Park for the Yae Cherry Blossoms. However, when the supposedly noisy crowd approached the girl, they couldn't help but slow down their steps and words, not wanting to disturb the girl under the rain of flowers. "Hello, is there anyone here? Can I sit here?" The girl raised her head, and what she saw was a beautiful girl with a face that was no less than hers. There was a trace of doubt and trouble on her fox-like face. "Okay, please take a seat." Suga Wuren said a little stiffly, "Thank you!" "Really, I shouldn't have listened to them, saying that it is easy to meet handsome guys in Yuyuan Park in March. As a result, there were pairs of tourists along the way, and there was not a single vacancy along the way. It took a lot of effort to find such a vacancy, so I am really sorry for disturbing you." The fox-faced girl was slightly embarrassed. He said awkwardly, "Oh, by the way, my name is Ichino Chiyo, what about you?" "Soga Wuren" "Hey~ What a nice name!" "Thank... Thank you, you are also Ichinosang" …A gentle breeze blew up, bringing with it a hint of coolness, like an invitation to dance with the cherry blossoms. The cherry blossoms probably agreed, so the breeze carried the petals and danced in the air, causing tourists to exclaim in surprise. Then it slowly floated down and gently rested on Soga Kiruri's shoulder. Chiyo stretched out her hand to twist the petals. "Thank you for chatting with me. It's very nice. So, Soga-san, how about adding a line?" Shaked the mobile phone he just took out in his right hand. , As soon as he entered, he said to the girl in front of him who had rarely shown an expression since just now, "It's time for me to go back. My old father was very satisfied with my repentance this year and successfully admitted to the University of Tokyo. He said he wanted to give me a surprise." Sowa Wulian Nodding, Chiyo added as a line friend "Well, see you at Tokyo University, classmate Suga" "Yeah" Suga Wuren showed a rare smile and said to the "quasi-alumni" in front of him "See you at Tokyo University, I will Enter classmate." "Hey! Suga-san looks great when she smiles! Please smile more, bye Suuga-san!" The tall girl waved her hand and turned towards the crowd, and Suga Kiruzen also put away the book in her hand and stood up to come to pick her up. Suga Wulian, who was already lying on the bed, held up her mobile phone with both hands, looking at the message from her new friend today "… Speaking of which, even though I just met you, Suga classmate, I feel inexplicably familiar. " And Soga Kirien also agreed with this. The two of them were like old friends reunited. They were strangers but felt familiar. Even Soga Kirien, who had always been unwilling to communicate with others, rarely talked to the girl for a long time today. "Maybe there really is a parallel world, and we are very close friends in that other world, right?" Soga Wuren thought this way

‌Soga Kirien put down the "Prince Iduna's Wish" copied by someone in her hand, and turned her eyes to her wrist. The hand was extremely beautiful. It was narrow and slender, but plump and white. The nails were shining with green light, soft and pearly. However, the girl's eyes were staring straight at the slightly plain silver bracelet on her wrist and started to be in a daze. Her thoughts had already drifted to some lucky guy. When she came back to her senses, His face was already flushed, and he suddenly covered his cheeks with his hands, as if to hide himself like an ostrich, but he unconsciously thought about that lucky guy in his heart. That person was really a cold boy before, and he was a patient with 'gynophobia'. How could he meet so many beautiful girls in the blink of an eye? Every time I saw him chatting with the girl named Ichiyo Chiyo, I felt uncomfortable, but what could I do? He was not good at chatting, and why did he have so much to say to that girl? Hum, I really wanted Qing Shui to punch this bad guy to death. Thinking of this, the girl clenched her fists as if in revenge, raised her head, and the girl with still full cheeks looked at the necklace in the box next to it, which was covered with ordinary blue thin threads. The solid opaque gemstone she wore was like the girl's heart, hiding an ulterior secret. "I will give this away when I wait for the Chinese Valentine's Day festival, and then..." I don't know what I thought of, but the blush on the girl's face seemed to be deeper... (The writing is not good, I don't like to spray lightly)

After more than 200 chapters, the characters began to fall apart. After the problem of Kotori Yuzu was solved, the characters began to look artificial and unnatural, giving people the feeling of two-faced people. Although the plot is developing normally, the characters are starting to fall apart a bit. I can only say that it is too restrained. It is very restrained in all aspects, whether it is expression or heartbeat If emotions cannot be exploded appropriately, the characters cannot develop the plot according to their own emotions, and rely on the plot alone to promote the characters , then this plot is actually quite a failure Dividing line—— Because there are some ambiguous dialogues between the characters, but there are very few, and the conversations are mostly based on teasing and bickering. It gives the impression that the relationship between the protagonist and the heroines is more like friends than the atmosphere between men and women. This is also the main reason why the subsequent choice plot is so divisive I thought that the latter part was the moment for the male protagonist to show off his power as a boyfriend, but I didn't expect that the choice would start directly, and the relationship would directly change from friends to a couple. Well, the character of Bai Shizexiu is a bit twisted. Until now, I can only characterize the protagonist as: a good friend It is difficult to position him as a man, he is the man of all the heroines. Separating line—— And the character of Kotori Yuzu is useless. In theory, when other people are struggling, the character of Kotori Yuzu can actually eat crazily to relieve the reader's emotional atmosphere when others are struggling. Theoretically, it is no problem to delete other female characters On second thought, an extremely humble dog-licking character who longs for the care of the male protagonist is actually not bad. It is still a problem of idea design. The author still needs to work hard to strengthen it {"NickName":"Also thought about it,"UserId":224926567} Look at the last paragraph to see if there is something high that can make people shine.

At present, when I see the place where I gave up my seat, I have a few words that I am unhappy with. Personally, I think this book feels a bit Chinese. If the background is in the country, then there is no problem at all. But the setting is in Japan, and the characters' dialogues and behaviors are not in line with Japanese habits, and it feels a bit like a mixture of Chinese and Japanese. Recently, the chapter about giving up your seat really impressed me. In Japan, people are encouraged to give up their seats to middle-aged people who are working. People who are working in society are very tired after a long day of work, so the elderly and children should not fight for seats. I hope the following chapters will be normal. To put it simply, it is well written and the dialogue is interesting, but it lacks a bit of flavor.

Although it's no longer cold in Tokyo in spring, the average temperature of 14 degrees is barely warm. A beautiful girl with a high ponytail is sitting in front of the table. She is holding her cheek with one hand and holding her mobile phone in the other hand. She looks up out of the window from time to time, looking a little bored. Looking at the message interface where half an hour had passed but still no reply had been received, the girl was a little angry. She decided that she would never forgive this hateful guy easily! ——At least I won't forgive him like before! "Shiraishi-kun, you have lost me forever." Xiuzhai's long and slender fingers typed this sentence hard on the phone, as if he was treating the phone as someone, and punched it hard. Or maybe, she really thinks so at this moment? The girl who was sitting quietly waiting for the line prompt sounded inexplicably lonely at this time, like a castaway standing on an island waiting for rescue. When the girl almost gave up and continued to wait, the reminder tone that she never got tired of no matter how many times she heard it finally sounded. What followed was a sincere apology from someone. "I'm sorry, Mr. Boring. I just did some exercise, bathing, copying calligraphy and so on. I forgot to check my phone. I'm sorry." The girl's eyes were filled with life again. Her eyes as clear as autumn were staring at this reply, but she snorted softly with a slight nasal sound. 'I forgive you this time. Next time, and the next time, I will never let you go like this! ' Oh, here it is again, this cute girl who forgot what she said in the blink of an eye! I don't know how many times I have said this sentence! At 4:25 pm the next day, Mingchuan High School Student Union Conference Room. Although the conference room was almost full at this time, there was no rush to start the discussion, and no one made a sound. Everyone was sitting upright, as if waiting for something. Suddenly, the sound of the door opening attracted most of the attention, except for the girl at the head of the table. The girl's attention was focused on the scratch paper in front of her, as if everything else was not enough to attract her attention, Oh no, I think there is still something. "Is this Mr. Shiraishi?" The girl who heard the name suddenly raised her head and glanced at the boy at the door, but immediately looked away. Probably a coincidence, the girl thought, and then she no longer planned to pay attention to what was happening in front of her. But it seems that the direction of things recently is unexpected, isn't it? When she heard the words 'He has had a problem with his throat recently', the girl looked up again and looked at the boy who was 'unfit to speak'. This time she did not look away again until the boy noticed. She lowered her head, as if nothing had happened, and she still looked as cold as before. It's just that the girl's heart has become panicked where others can't see it. The repeated writing of the word "" on the draft paper all shows how overwhelmed the girl is inside. "Welcome, welcome Shiraishi..." Perhaps because she hasn't spoken for a long time, the girl's voice was a little soft, but it still overwhelmed all the sounds in the conference room. However, it turns out that Mr. Shiraishi is really called Shiraishi.

The first order for this book is only 250? Many students who have better grades than you write far worse than you.

I only have two requirements for harem romance novels: the climax should be grand (referring to the happy reunion moment), and the ending should be long (referring to the sugar-coating).