The Ancient Warlock of Hogwarts

The heroine is Hermione. I don't hate Hermione, but you made her so disgusting. It just adds to the confusion. Hermione is a very brilliant character. Now you are crying and hiding in the arms of the hero. Especially during the battle, she is like this, and she is almost vomiting.

I can't say it, it's well written, but I personally don't like this setting. This kind of Voldemort and Dumbledore are nothing. There are many dark organizations at the level of Dumbledore. All modern magic is just a piece of cake, and ancient magic is like a god... You are so awesome, where were you when Voldemort turned Europe upside down?

This is too cheesy. At first, he said he was adapting to the world and couldn't control Harry, but then he just walked out of the house. That's awesome. This leaflet is a slap in the face.

I feel that the author does not like Patsy, and is very disgusted with Patsy. In fact, Patsy is the so-called model top student living around us, but his nature is not as indifferent as the author describes. In the fifth part of the original book, he also secretly helped Harry and others.

The setting of the dark wizard organization is too disruptive to the plot experience... It has a strong sense of instant visibility.

Harry Potter's Hermione has become Huang Rong in martial arts, and is remembered by all kinds of perverted time travellers.

First of all, it feels like a mentor in the Dark Wizarding Organization can go toe-to-toe with Dumbledore. Secondly, you have to block a knife for Hermione. What is your relationship with Hermione? Are you serving in the army together or four years of college together? Are you suffering from hormones? Helping her is a matter of affection, not helping her is a duty, if nothing else, how can you take a bullet for a woman when you have been working with her for half a year? And you are a dragon. You have mutated dragon lungs. If you can't breathe fire, what are you going to do with the lungs? The third one was Ron's whistle-blowing. This was a very cruel attempt to dismantle the Iron Triangle. Hermione and her two losers were immediately and completely isolated.

Hermione's face turned red, obviously furious. Although I don't know what's wrong with this description, when I saw this sentence, I didn't want to read on.

The narrative of running accounts is comparable to the compositions I wrote when I was in junior high school.

Fan fiction is originally based on the original work and is a magical modification of the author's own ideas There is no need to hold on to the outrageous setting I feel that the author has written it well. It is about the 100th chapter where Sophia is in danger and the protagonist is doing something else, which makes me feel a little disconnected It feels a bit like the kind of pornographic article about what the heroine is doing. The heroine has been succeeded by the villain a long time ago. Although I know that the author will not write like this, I feel a little disconnected.

How are druids connected to warlocks? ? Another setting created by a self-righteous author, haha

I couldn't stand nine out of ten books with the heroine Hermione.

Well, not the kind of warlock I thought. Or maybe I didn't see the warlock.

I'm very strange. You just left without reading. Why did you post it?

Lj is old-fashioned! Nothing good