Pirate: Vice-Captain of the Whitebeard Pirates

Personally, if you don't like it, don't criticize it. The theme of Vice Captain Whitebeard is very good. I came in as soon as I saw the title. Unfortunately, after reading the first few chapters, I can't accept the ability of Sharingan and other abilities to enter the pirate world. The main reason is that it is too inconsistent. If you really want to play with super powers as a pirate theme, you should just eat the fruits.

I just put on my pirate skin, read some anime or fan fiction, and started writing. Marco was still an intern when Whitebeard arrived in Wano. Besides, Marco is not from all over the world. You can meet Marco in the East China Sea, a little kid who even ate the fruit and became the captain of the first team. Even if you are writing fan fiction or making up things, you still have to respect the original work. If it is vague and has no specific explanation, you will have no problem making it up. But if the plot and background have been clearly explained by others, you can make it up. Just stop writing books and start drawing One Piece. You start with a white beard, and you have to make up everything about the plot. You can even make up the plot that others have explained clearly. Let's not talk about comics. If you read anime twice, you won't make it so outrageous. The dialogue is awkward and childish, and he yells, "Don't you even read it after you finish writing it?"

The Whitebeard Pirates have another vice-captain, previously it was Cat and Rabbit

How do I feel about this cover, this title, and these eyes?

I don't even know if the author has watched One Piece. The content is all based on his own nonsense and does not fit the background of the characters in One Piece.

This book is extremely poisonous. I didn't expect that one day I, Shennong, would be poisoned to death.

A pirate captain with ten million beli in the new world?

I didn't read much of it before I felt that this book was plagiarized. It was plagiarized from On the Rocks Ship 996, the Sharingan, everything about weak physiques and strong abilities.

There are many first-class authors now. Are they just starting out or are they in the studio?

The writing is like boiled water, and the protagonist really looks like a pirate 😅

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I quite like this at the beginning of the Whitebeard Pirates, but your strength is too low. As soon as you start, you beat the strongest member of the navy generation to the point of suspicion. This is because Garp and Zeffa, who have no fruitful abilities, are not easily restrained by the protagonist's ability. If we write like this, and then go to the red, yellow, and blue generation, let them live like this. Whitebeard doesn't want to be the pirate king and doesn't want to overthrow the world government. Then we will write about playing house in the new world! Otherwise, other combat forces should be added to the world government. Anyway, the navy is basically useless.

There are always new crew members added to Whitebeard's ship. I've read Cat. The first part is good, but it's a bit unfinished. I haven't read Rabbit yet. . Now let's look at people. .

The writing is very nice. Good luck to the author and increase the number of updates.

I can't understand what I wrote from the time I came to this island to now!

To evaluate the protagonist, there is only one word - lick.

I originally wanted to read it, but after reading the author's words in the latest chapter, I wanted to complain. 1: Why did Garp and the Warring States Period fight the Golden Lion for three days and three nights? Because the location is at the Marine Vendor Naval Headquarters, the Golden Lion is here to save Roger. If he can't save Roger, he will be here. Personally, I think it is barefoot. Where are Garp and Sengoku? We have to take care of the lower-level marines and headquarters from too much damage, so we are tied up. Could you try another place? The Valley of the End has been destroyed by you. 2: We all know that the theater version is just for fun. Which theater version boss is not killed by the plot? How do you use this argumentative power? 3: Who is stronger between Whitebeard and Garp? There is no specific description of the Battle of the Valley of the End in the original novel, but a fan has written about Garp vs. Rocks, and Roger vs. Whitebeard. Leaving aside this for the moment, let's just say that in his old age, Garp was still active and active when Whitebeard was botching the bottle every day. Not to mention secretly hurting old wounds, Garp fought as much as Whitebeard, and he understood everything. The above is purely a personal complaint, please have fun watching it.