Honghuang: I Have an Island in the South China Sea

In fact, the content is very good, but the writing method is not suitable for a novel. It is more like a script used for storytelling than an online article. There are many references to "mentioned in the previous article" and "comparing you and me". It is not like a novel and the author has brought his own private goods into the protagonist. There are many versions of the battle power of the prehistoric era, and each author writes a different version. But in order to avoid taboos, most authors will explain step by step while breaking through, or they will break through first and then explain when they reach the realm. But when the protagonist Jin Xian relied on the Internet articles in his previous life to make up for the situation in the next realm, it is normal to bring in private goods. Every author writes differently, but it is best not to be too abrupt. If you explain too much at the beginning, it will look twisted and confusing.

The writing is good, the author is great, do you dare to update it twice a day? 😠

Well written but updates are too slow

The protagonist has an innate soul power of level 100. He has a terrifying resurgence at the beginning. He wears women's clothes to kill Tang San, eats the rabbit Xiao Wu, kills women, kills Ning Rongrong, becomes a sister to Zhu Zhuqing, protects Qian Renxue's mother and daughter, and does not lick dogs. The title of the book: Gods in the Heavens Starting from Douluo, come and take a look, just click in to read it. Become a god at the beginning and play the role of a beautiful girl. Everyone thinks that the protagonist is a tsundere loli, but in fact the protagonist is already invincible.

Everything else is fine. As for the so-called cause and effect of the author, it is contradictory. I feel very sad. I helped you, but the result is destined, so I owe you instead? And the thing that gave birth to the protagonist was taken away by Sanqing, and it turned out that the protagonist owed Sanqing?

Cause and effect are the same as a mad dog. When you talk, cause and effect are attached. When you say hello, cause and effect are attached. Like a mad dog, you bite whomever you see.

The author is looking at others and looking at you😤

After reading about ten chapters, I feel that this book is like the suture monster in many ancient novels, with a hammer in the east and a mallet in the west. Many things are inexplicable. If you sort out the destroyed earth veins, you will gain merit, and then you will get a lot of innate spiritual treasures and spiritual roots inexplicably. It feels to me like no one else needs the prehistoric innate spiritual treasure. As mentioned in the previous article, the spiritual treasure is the teacher of the monks. Why is no one going to get it? Don't say that other monks don't need it. There are too many unreasonable places. There is a lot that cannot be done to justify it, and there are too many contradictions.

Absolutely, the cause and effect is strange, I successfully persuaded him to quit after reading seventeen chapters. We haven't met yet, but we already owe all kinds of causes and effects. Zhunti and Zhunti theory are combined into one Tao, and they owe us cause and effect. They owe us cause and effect, but they are also connected by luck. This is the most trouble-free method of enlightenment for you, preaching?

Everything else is fine, but the cause and effect you wrote is a bit messy. Is this what cause and effect is about? ! !

The cause and effect in the opening chapter with Zhunti was a bit ridiculous, and I was confused. The two discussed, and then the protagonist owed Zhunti karma. The protagonist advanced, and Zhunti could also share luck. I was really confused. What the hell are these things?

I always write about my views on people from ancient times in large sections, which is too cliché.

The Three Heavens and Three Corpses can kill two saints with the improved Nine-Bend Yellow River Formation. Even Tongtian cannot kill the saints, but the saints cannot break it. This is a bit abnormal

Another point is that if you can't write the cause and effect well, you don't have to worry about the cause and effect, or you can write it simply. The cause and effect you wrote is really too immature. Cause and effect are just like lines. Some are as simple as two points and one line. Some are super complicated. For example, I can connect point No. 1 To point No. 2, And then connect more points through point No. 2, Until a dragnet is laid and most of the points have a trace of cause and effect. Also, in the cause and effect link, you may think that I suffered a loss at this point, but who knows whether this loss was intentional on my part, just to leverage other links.          ，，

In the early stage, it was a bit novel, but in the later stage, it was completely about ancient history, popular science, and running accounting. Those so-called layouts all depend on the author YY. The author lets himself go too much.

This book is well written and can be read at a glance. The problem is that the author has become crazy and the protagonist has gone crazy. Everything is caused and caused! ! Talk to Zhunti, it's cause and effect! Problems with feet are cause and effect, speaking words is cause and effect, eating food is cause and effect! ! The protagonist tries to avoid cause and effect at every turn, but in fact he is infected with cause and effect! Why! ! I really want to say something to the author, just write the protagonist to death, there will be no cause and effect, it will be over! ! According to the author's writing method of cause and effect, the protagonist is really written to death. Really, this is the best operation to avoid cause and effect! After all! First of all, I owe a big cause and effect to the prehistoric world (breathing is cause and effect), I owe a big cause and effect to Sanqing (the protagonist is from Chaos Qinglian, Sanqing is the origin of Pangu Yuanshen), I owe Zhunti cause and effect (I talked to Zhunti)... Inexplicable cause and effect, inexplicable protagonist, inexplicable author! !

Chapter 17: Where is the causal relationship written? I really don't want to say it, so I will just say it.

Hunyuan Daluo, who controls the chaos, is still afraid of this cause and effect, and is speechless. I don't know what the cause and effect is between Cihang and the West. Does it count if he is forced by the other party?

It feels ridiculous to see the protagonist become a Hunyuan and simply transcend the world. Everyone knows that the kindness of childbirth is greater than the heaven, how can it be repaid easily? Look at Nezha's death to repay the kindness, and in the end he has to be called Li Jing's father. Not to mention that heaven and earth are still kind to the protagonist for his enlightenment, how can he repay it?