Konoha's Five Attribute Ninjas

The more I read, the more depressed I became. Is it time travel? You have to say that you have never watched Naruto. There are many things wrong with it. Has been pressing the protagonist from beginning to end. There will be no chance of success until death

The protagonist who started poisoning in Chapter 17 and was a sure hand in everything was kidnapped by his mother to do some very deceptive things. I don't quite understand how her mother, who is also a ninja, can trust others so easily and yet is still busy engaging in real-life marriage plans. If you can accept this woman, just keep watching. It's great that the main character didn't have to hang up, but he still had an inconvenient oil bottle. It's really worse than having both parents dead.

From my point of view, the Will of Fire is the alliance of noble clans (all families in Konoha, this is the basic plan) + the ninth rank Chusheng (controlling the promotion channels of civilians, blood relationship + marriage + famous teachers and genius apprentices) + exclusive centralized power (anbu + jounin class + consultants all listen to the Hokage). Civilian ninjas do not rely on masters and apprentices, and do not rely on marriage. If they want to get ahead in Konoha, what good things are they thinking about? In the original work, The awesome civilian ninja Orochimaru, Jiraiya's master and apprentice, Minato is the master and apprentice + marriage (without the resources of Jiraiya and Kushina, there is no Flying Thunder God, advanced sealing technique, without him, it is definitely impossible to reach the Kage level at a young age, maybe he is an elite Jonin or working hard in the ANBU, or he will die somewhere, forget it, how many years will it take). The heirs of the three patriarchs of the Ino, Shika and Butterfly tribes have grown up together from generation to generation. This is a political alliance. Shikamaru started studying and assisting Kakashi when he was the second in command of Konoha at the age of 17. Ino was the leader of the communications team at the age of 17. Choji is probably not bad either. Later, Sayi also got married (there are no Inorakacho clans. I want to be the ANBU minister, or the ANBU after integrating the root, is it possible)? Think about Yamato, the number one master of ANBU, who was born in the ANBU. After that, he worked in the ANBU for more than 10 years. He needed strength and qualifications. After the Fourth World War, he was reintegrated into the ANBU. The ending was to monitor Orochimaru for a long time. What kind of job is this? Has he been assigned?

Come on, this is the real situation of non-common ninjas. They are helpless, step by step difficult, and growing up is not easy. It's difficult in this world where people eat people.

I almost finished reading it, and all I saw was a person who was unhappy with his life, a person who was kidnapped by a certain species, and a dog who wholeheartedly loved eating and being a kidnapped dog. It made people angry. I didn't see a person who traveled through this book. I only saw a dog that was kidnapped and was led incompetently and barked.

1. No plug-ins: The main character's route in the general Naruto web novel is crossed out. 2. Not a direct descendant of the Otsutsuki clan: the bloodline atavism route is crossed out. 3. Scientific literacy is not reflected: Orochimaru's route, or the route of scientific research on the bloodline of the Otsutsuki clan is crossed out. 4. If your talent for cultivating immortality is not strong enough, you cannot switch to cultivating immortals. The route of cultivating immortals will be crossed out. 5. If the chakra cultivation talent is not strong enough to independently learn the seven attributes of chakra and merge it into the Blood Succession Snare, the Blood Succession Snare route is crossed out. This protagonist is so messed up that he will reach the level of Hiruzen Sarutobi even if he is exhausted.

Can you give the protagonist some land and sea diving skills to enhance his life-saving ability?

I read almost 40 chapters, and then skipped a few chapters. The protagonist looked like an aborigine wearing a time-travelling skin. It doesn't make sense to look at it~ Hi. Fanbooks are in short supply

The author went too far in blaming the third generation. I saw the Thousand Hands retreating. The author described the third generation with his own hand. Indeed, Senju's retirement must be related to the rise of the third generation, but this is by no means the author's conjecture. The third generation described in the author's writing is not the Shinobi in Naruto, but a villain who is carried away with his own complacency. Seeing Danzo handing the Senju to the Third Generation and being tricked by the two of them, causing heavy casualties, the Third Generation actually laughed? Brother, the nine-tailed jinchuriki, the ninja world without Hashirama and Madara, the perfect jinchuriki Uzumaki Mito is the ceiling combat power, she is not dead yet! Why are we called the Three Generations of Shinobi? Because the third generation was ordered to do something in danger before the second generation died, fought World War II, and won. The next 3 battles were won. He has fought against all the ninja villages, and won them all when the situation on multiple fronts was extremely unfavorable. Senju's retirement should be attributed to the exhaustion of strength in many wars that were not conducive to Konoha's situation. Instead of the Third Generation providing information about the enemy to deceive his own people when it was not conducive to Konoha, he was still his own backer. When the Third Generation first took over the position of Hokage, the Third Generation was troubled by some ninjas who did not recognize the reliability of his position as the Hokage and denied the feasibility of the Third Generation's proposal. But it shouldn't include the Senju, who were part of the ninja clan who supported him. In this situation, Shinobu seemed to have made arrangements for the battle without the benefit of Konoha. Relying on the support of the main force of Senju, the third generation went his own way, pushed forward the plan strongly, and won the victory. The Senju who supported him sent the main force and was exhausted. Therefore, at the end of the second battle, in Duo Only when he wins the national war amidst the clan's doubts can he win the trust of the ninja clan and establish the prestige of the third generation. Only then can he be called a ninja hero and Orochimaru will worship him. Only when he is old and indecisive with Danzo will he be disappointed and feel that the ninja hero is not like what he idolized before, so he wants to kill the third generation. Taking the initiative to trick Qian Shu? Tricking Sandai's own backer? Except for the paranoid Uchiha, the other ninja families are not fools...

After seeing Chapter 90, I couldn't bear the previous ones, but don't you look at the map of the Ninja World. The Kingdom of Whirlpool is on the peninsula southeast of the Kingdom of Fire, not the southeast of the Kingdom of Water. The Kingdom of Water is already the southeasternmost archipelago of the Ninja World continent 😰😰

He is Minato's licking dog. He can't learn to fly the Thunder God. He is restrained by others. Minato has been brainwashed by the third generation. The Third Generation told him to kill his mother and he killed them all. You and the Third Generation fall out and wait to be tricked by Minato. Let's look at the fandom and just try to make it fun. If you can't learn to fly the Thunder God, you must have the ability to check and balance the flying Thunder God. God's hands are short. You escape by Minato every day. There is always one way to look at me. Other countries have nuclear bombs, but our country does not. Then I feel humbled, but your writing is still good, I also like the character of the protagonist, everything else is good, but I can't learn to fly the thunder god, and there is nothing interesting to watch below, because the gods fight in the later stage, and there is no flying thunder god. How to support quickly, how to use the flying thunder god to kill the shadow level instantly, flying thunder god + White Fang, wouldn't it be beautiful to kill the third generation with one knife, the third generation is the shadow level, White Fang is almost super shadow, but it is not super shadow yet.

The writing is very good, but the follow-up chapters of the girl you brought back should be dealt with well. Don't become a licking dog, don't let your mother force you to get married, that would be poisonous. This is Naruto, not a city, nor a historical novel.

The main character travels back and forth and is written like a native. It's hard to bring in. It's awkward to watch. There's no such thing as a first-come-first-served advantage. What kind of fanfic should I write? I'll stick with it until chapter 28.

This book is bound to be unfinished. This time traveler has no plug-ins, doesn't know the plot, and has average talent. He's just waiting to see how you can write the protagonist to the sixth level.

😂The writing is pretty good, but traveling through Naruto and saying that I have never watched Naruto is a poisonous point in itself.

Many dark-oriented Naruto fans have fallen into a misunderstanding, writing the protagonist as a philistine and thinking of the worst in everything without real pursuit. If this kind of fandom does not have the help of a system or a force from another world, and only relies on the local power of the ninja world, the protagonist will not be able to become a top master, because chakra itself is a combination of physical energy and spiritual energy. Your spiritual realm is so low, how can you activate chakra, and how can you get the local power to recognize you? In the world of Naruto, no matter whether you are a good guy or a bad guy, a madman or a fool, you must have a belief that is enough to bear his power (maybe Kaguya is not outstanding enough, but she is a special character, a standard tool for the ending). Kishimoto can write a lot of things, but he has never been able to write at this point. They are repeatedly emphasized. The most obvious example is Hanzo. Because he wanted to save the Land of Rain, he ended up becoming a standard politician. His combat effectiveness dropped to the point where he lost all his strength due to his vulgarity (this is also the normal logical ending of many dark-style Naruto protagonists in my opinion). So back to the novel, readers also hope to see a protagonist who has a strong will to change regrets and does not take the iron fist of reality. However, the author, you can actually write about forced marriage to disgust so many readers, which proves that your thinking is completely contrary to that of most readers.

In Chapter 50, I didn't even see the shadow of the Five Attributes and Five Elements. I complained all the way that the slow-burning type is not unacceptable, but Chapter 50 has not improved yet. Too slow.

Just after reading the introduction, I want to correct the author. Metal, wood, water, fire, and earth are the five elements, not the five attributes. . . The Five Elements describe the changes of yin and yang: Fire, extremely yang, Wood, changing towards yang, Earth, the balance of yin and yang, Metal, changing towards yin, Water, extremely yin. So, the five elements are a description of the changes of yin and yang. Yin and Yang are inseparable from the five elements, which are integrated. . . The earth, water, wind, fire, and thunder in Naruto are the five states of chakra that simulate matter, solid, liquid, gas, ion, and electronic. . . The two are not the same system. . .

The war is over. Don't let the protagonist get involved with the female partner. Don't contact her after completing the formalities. It's better to marry an ordinary person in the village than to have an affair with an existing female ninja.

This book is outrageous, the protagonist is always miserable, the protagonist is depressed, the protagonist cannot rise up, and he doesn't dare to rebel after being treated so unfairly, I just feel like hehe

It's a pity that a good book was good at the beginning, but it fell apart a bit after Hatake's death.

The comments are not very friendly🤣

I can't stand seeing 68! It's frustrating, you're a time traveler and you don't have any plot to worry about! Not even a little trick to improve your strength! Everyone can step on him, but the protagonist can only bear it with anger! I'm so angry! The 5 lines of the title can be given right at the beginning, and your strength will gradually increase. Only when you have strength can you see hope, but there is nothing in front of you, no hope at all. How can I continue to read it when it is so depressing? It pisses me off so much.

Is the heroine Tsunade? Why did they break up hastily later?

The first few dozen chapters of World War II are really good, realistic and compact, but they fail after returning to the village. It's a pity that many Naruto fans are like this.

I'm getting better recently. Come on.

I started writing in 21 years, and now it's 24 years and I've only written 1.1 Million words? With this update, will the author really not starve to death?