Hinata Crane of Konoha

The other plots in this novel are well written, but your harem is really poisonous! You don't have a good plot design and promotion of multiple female protagonists, you just have a harem for the sake of the harem, but it's okay that the friendship with Tiantian originally in the same team developed into fruition in the end, and you have laid the groundwork well. But you added Hinata and Hanabi. The key is how old Hanabi is. Lsp, have you never seen a woman? Is this okay? ! 🤯

It's a bit confusing to kill Hinata and Hiashi. They obviously want to marry their daughter to you, but you still don't understand. It's okay for you to kill other clans, but there's no need to kill Hinata.

I hope a big book lover can give me a cover, preferably one with fireworks. It would be better if Hinata, Tenten, Sakura and Ino were all present.

In fact, it seems that Kurenai Yuhi was not married to Asuma in the original novel. She was pregnant out of wedlock, and Asuma died before she could get married.

This is the darkest Naruto I've ever seen, and the author's imagination (conspiracy theory) is amazing. This is how unsatisfactory it is in real life to have such an idea 🥵

When I watched Naruto before, I felt that Tsunade was the prettiest, and the others were like that. In other words, Kurenai Yuhi could compare with Tsunade and be favored by the premature uncle. Then after watching Boruto, I found that only Hanabi was good-looking, and then she had to be favored by the Monkey Family? So in order to avoid this plot, I just stopped watching it 😁

Decide on the heroine early, don't worry about Yuhi Kurenai and Tsunade, she is an aunt and grandma level. To be honest, the other ones written on Naruto are considered the best among them, so don't fall into the harem trap again. Times have changed

I read about twenty chapters, especially the handling of the two debt collectors in the casino. It has a strong fantasy novel about killing people and seizing treasures, with a single-line narrative, and the sight is limited to the protagonist. There is no such thing as Naruto and Obito. Even if it is involved, it is only a very flat image. The protagonist's parents are not. It's vivid, but the overall layout is smaller, and the protagonist already has the strength of a jounin in the early stage, such as Thunder Refining Technique, Medical Ninjutsu, Soft Fist, Rasengan Kai, Wei Li Jutsu, and Eight Gate Dungeon. In just twenty chapters, the protagonist has mastered it. This is a routine that I miss very much. It doesn't feel out of place in a fantasy background.

There are many secondary assumptions that are too unreasonable.

Help everyone pull weeds, some places are poisonous. Jiraiya is dead, that's not the point. The Blood Successor Snare is a fusion of multiple attributes that an individual possesses, not a fusion of multiple escape techniques. Where did Jiraiya get the Blood Successor Snare? Toad Flame + Toad Oil + Wind Release Immortal Technique + the protagonist's one move of Ryuken Ruohuo becomes the Blood Successor Snare? You can say it is a six-level ninjutsu. In addition, Jiraiya's sensual skills require the assistance of two sages to maintain them for a long time. When Jiraiya died, he burned meteorites and the two sages exhausted their lifespan to output. Jiraiya could not maintain the sage mode at all. If Otsutsuki Toneri dies, will there be a wedge? That's what a real Otsutsuki can do! How many generations are there between those who sacrifice themselves? Is it possible to be related to Kaguya? How much difference is there between Otsutsuki on the moon and Hinata on the ground? The difference is just like the author said between Senju and Uchiha! Where does Wedge's technology come from? Then the poison point comes, Hinata breaks Toneri's wedge (unpossessed state) and gets the memory? Do you want to be so powerful? Your white eyes will turn into straight-death demon eyes! Do you know that the male protagonist killed the Hyuga clan? Killing the Zong family is also quite bloody. I want to write about the two Hinata sisters who want to be with the male protagonist, so why do they have to kill them? Isn't it okay to just force them to talk like a caged bird? There are also many poisonous points such as the effect of spiritual transformation into a heart-turning spell I now see twenty chapters left, and I plan to change the map before deciding whether to continue reading

Isn't it possible to forcefully cross the timeline and write Yuhi Kurenai as Asuma's wife? After writing it many times, it can't be changed. Such a basic timeline can be wrong.

I won't mention it in the encyclopedia. Everyone will read it if they know how to read it. The explanation itself is not complete, but it is basic. A simple speculation about the details of the caged bird sealing technique is indeed a speculation. First, the caged bird is just a simple body sealing technique. The caged bird is of no use to the dead Hinata. That is to say, the caged bird only acts on the brain and white eyes of the entity, and has nothing to do with the soul. It is already a form in the state of reincarnation. Second, the caged bird is a sealing technique that can sense souls. After the death of Hinata after the separation of the Caged Bird, the contract between the seal between the Byakugan and the Caged Bird has actually been released. In other words, at this time, the Caged Bird is just a symbol and has lost its practical effect. The caged bird may only use its destructive function once, and it becomes ineffective when Hinata separates and dies. In other words, for the souls who have returned to the underworld, the caged bird no longer has the function of destruction, but may have the function of induction. Thirdly, the caged bird is a type of sealing technique, but it involves part of the soul. The Caged Bird itself is a type of sealing technique, but it is different from the transfer seal. Instead, it transfers the pupil power and part of the soul of the Hyuga clan into something set up by the Hyuga clan. Therefore, the Hyuga branch family lacks that one degree of scope. At the same time, the Hyuga clan still has the ability to restrict the Hyuga branch family that is far away. Because currently, only special soul sealing techniques have such ability. Fourth, the caged bird is an unfinished but pure soul sealing technique. Caged Bird is a pure soul sealing technique, but it is different from the corpse seal, but the reverse corpse seal. Fifth, the caged bird is not an ordinary sealing technique, but a special blood succession technique of the Hyuga clan. The caged bird itself will not have any impact on the division of the Hyuga family, but is similar to the "wedge" of the Otsutsuki clan, but in an incomplete form, with some special functions specifically for the Hyuga blood succession. Sixth, the caged bird is a special technique that integrates the Hyuga blood inheritance and is not controlled by the Otsutsuki clan. Of course, the caged bird also has some special control functions of the Otsutsuki clan.

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The timeline is not ready, Xiaoqiang has not graduated, Shizune is still in Konoha

Doesn't the protagonist have any desire to become stronger? Will you only bet your life on the plot? What if the plot changes? Or are there other time travelers? You can travel through others, why not?

It is impossible for Byakugan to copy ninjutsu. It is possible to copy ninjutsu if he fully understands the flow of chakra, but the speed of chakra travel route is too fast, and he cannot react at all.

To be honest, the art of spiritual transformation has great potential that can be tapped. The essence of life of ninjas has not changed, it is the same as ordinary people. Ninjutsu and the like can only be said to be superpowers rather than the sublimation of the essence of life. The art of spiritualization can make a person who is essentially an ordinary person have his soul out of his body. Does that mean that you can practice spiritual practice, just like the Taoist sayings about yin, yang, wind, fire, thunder, etc. After a strong soul, is it possible to generate telekinesis or spiritual consciousness, and is it possible to fly with a sword? There can be many tiring thoughts.

A few points to complain about 1. You cannot use other ninjutsu when using Byakugan. The protagonist can do two things at once, so learn more ninjutsu of other attributes. Well, this setting is a bit tricky. You have to turn off the Byakugan when playing Baguazhang and returning to heaven... This is too much more pitted than the Sharingan 2. The Byakugan can master the secret technique by observing the flow of chakra. Well, this is even more flawed than the copying of the Sharingan. Kakashi also failed to copy the secret technique of Akimichi. Bai Yan was so cunning that he was exterminated during the Warring States Period. Especially after seeing Choji's Doubling Technique, I figured out Tsunade's strange power... Uh, how can he be the tail of the crane when he is so awesome, but it's not surprising when you think about Jiraiya, Obito, and Naruto were all the tail of the crane. 3. Never have a "gift girl" plot. It's normal to hug Kai and Tsunade's thighs when they are weak. But Naruto, before the Fourth War, the protagonist was not weaker than Naruto, after all, he can kill Jonin now; during the Fourth War, Naruto could not protect the protagonist, so Neji died; after the Fourth War, the protagonist was at least Kage level and did not need to rely on Naruto. Why hug him? A sibling or brother-in-law of Hinata is not necessarily as important as Naruto's friend Kiba. Even if he wants to hold Naruto's lap, be friends with him, and agree with his ideals, this is more reliable. As for the Crown Princess, Sasuke was more suitable. In the end, Orochimaru was asked to help the two of them have a child, which might be more combustible. ... I've read about thirty chapters... I haven't read the follow-up plot yet.