Cultivating the Dao, Starting with Dao Soldiers

This is the fourth book! Wu Ni, we met in the book Feng Yin, which is also my favorite. The subsequent Qing Mei is also good, but I don't really like the ending, so I didn't write a supplement. I saw that the title of the third book was quite to my liking, but the content was not very satisfactory. You are no longer a newcomer, and you cannot make certain mistakes. I hope you will be more mature, reasonable and logical in this new book. As I get older, I have less and less time to read. I hope you still remember my old friend!

The basic training is not explained clearly. It keeps saying that practicing to become a Taoist soldier is useless. It keeps saying that it is useless without explaining it, and you can only become a stronger Taoist soldier. It is really annoying to watch.

Qingmei Xiandao is good-looking, but I couldn't stand the first one. I hope the author's new one will be good too.

Today is New Year's Eve. First of all, I would like to wish all the book friends who have always supported the author a Happy New Year. I hope that in the new year, everyone can live happily and have good health, and that they and their families can be safe, have love in their hearts, have money in their pockets, and have light in their eyes. In addition, I would like to thank several old friends such as Eric WSC who have always supported the author. Thanks for their almost daily support, which enabled the author to persist in writing this book. During the process of writing this book, the author could clearly feel the decline of his own condition, coupled with the interruption of other things, and some inner anxiety as he grew older, which led to many places being unsatisfactory. The revised outline continued to deviate, and many things he wanted to express were not expressed. These are the author's problems. Thank you for your tolerance. Afterwards, the author will work hard to adjust, recharge his batteries, and review some things again. He does not expect much progress in the next book, but hopes to tell the story more clearly and more interestingly, and give readers a better experience. There is also an attitude that the author has always adhered to, that is, to bring you something new as much as possible. The author does not have the ability to create a sect like those great writers, but whether it is the plot or the setting, he still strives to bring something new to everyone. This concept, the author will continue to stick to. Finally, I would like to thank you all, and wish all my book friends once again, may you have new good luck in the new year, may everything go well, may all your wishes come true, may all the beautiful things be endless, thank you all!

I plan to quit. This kind of high-pressure flow seems new at first, but the further back I go, the harder I can stand it. I keep walking a tightrope, isn't it just trying to get a halo with pig's feet?

This book is doomed to fail! Don't you understand? Look at those who are slightly famous, they will start with your words: "I was forbidden by someone's soul. Life and death depend on someone's thoughts!" And the plot is still like this in the middle period. No one really likes it. The writing of Qingmei is really good! Please refer to this

I think the first priority is to get rid of the situation of being controlled by others when you travel to the protagonist's situation. You have to fall into a life-and-death fight at any time, with no benefits or freedom at all. Instead of not knowing where you will die at the hands of the enemy one day, it is better to give it a try.

Being controlled by others, I can only say that if you don't get rid of the situation of being controlled by others after thirty or fifty chapters, the book is destined to be useless. I haven't gotten through 10 chapters. I am not happy and making myself uncomfortable.

If you don't have enough writing skills, just write less about epiphanies and the like. It's only a few dozen chapters. There is no cause or effect at all. The epiphanies that appear out of nowhere are too embarrassing... If you really want to write about artistic conception flow, I suggest the author to read more works of the big guys of artistic conception flow... To be honest, it's really embarrassing to insist on writing about artistic conception flow when you don't have enough writing skills. It was the same with several previous books. They were all creative and OK, but the overall work is written like a running account...

The title of the book seems unreliable. Tao soldiers are almost like slaves, puppets and tool men. There is no way to get rid of them. They will always be other people's dogs.