A Primordial Spirit Master from the Start
开局就是元神老怪
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Classical Xianxia
- Updated
- 4y ago
- English
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I wanted to see the main characters' screen time, but instead, I kept writing about supporting characters. It ruined the immersive experience of online novels. The plot and character development are all a mess.
I finally found a novel with a Celestial Gourd system, but it still starts from the protagonist's primordial spirit. I have to spit this out. The Celestial Gourd system, the Gang Sha Golden Core, and the primordial spirit are the essence of the story. Why did the author skip over them?
It's great. I've finally found a story with a high starting level, a good premise, no bad points, skillful writing, and a reasonable plot. Just keep writing at your pace, author, and don't let the comments affect you.
How to put it... It's like something that's tasteless to eat, but a pity to throw away.
It's truly a story of cunning and scheming. The first ten or so chapters are filled with plotting and scheming against that demon, but in the end, it's still the protagonist who has to face him one-on-one. He sets up an array, searches for a while but doesn't find anything, then withdraws the array without any warning and gets ambushed...
The premise is acceptable, the writing is mediocre, and the plot structure is passable. Over ten chapters were spent setting up a scheme to outwit a demon, but the actual battle felt like a mere skirmish.
His combat power is quite strange. When he was being chased by someone, he fled three thousand miles overnight, but his primordial spirit was able to watch the sun explode and then use great magic to retrieve the good stuff from the star. Although it's only a difference of one level, the difference in combat power is more than a hundred million times greater, right?
It's too bland. Even a Nascent Soul cultivator has to be subservient at the beginning. It's boring. It's not as good as another book that starts with a Golden Core Ancestor.
What does this mean? It's already cut?
You wrote twenty chapters scheming against a villain, but it was all bark and no bite. Everyone expected a sneak attack, but it turned into a direct, open fight. What was the point of writing all that? Was it just a waste of everyone's time? Speechless.