The Mysterious Resurrection of the Infinite Realm

What is this? You were beaten into a dog by Liu Bin. There is no trash like you in any fan fiction. There is a ghost realm and you are beaten into a dead dog by someone who doesn't. It's one against two, and the supernatural weapons are also robbed. I can't stand it.

After reading Chapter 10, I felt lonely and foggy... And the parents of the protagonist have kept the protagonist at home like a dog since he was a child. Why does he look like a newly cured mentally retarded child...

The author was probably afraid that he could not write well or portray the protagonist well, so he wrote that the protagonist had basically never been out and was a novice to smooth out the bad points. But just because Xiaobai is naive doesn't mean he is stupid. Have you never eaten pork and seen pigs running? You surf the Internet every day, even if you haven't experienced it personally, you can find it everywhere on the Internet. I hope the author can elaborate as much as possible. That's not pure, it's stupid.

It's such a mess. After more than 30 chapters, there is neither the mysterious fear of the mysterious resurgence nor the foresight of other mysterious fans. The description and performance of the protagonist's abilities are vague. It's hard to write what I'm writing!

The long-term collection of the ghost files, if used, can be given to a character. The author is an unemployed vagrant with a lot of time!

I felt the writing was so confusing that I couldn't follow the plot of the book.

My investment is very small, but I promise that I will complete the remaining two tasks. This is a return on your investment. Don't worry, I will never be a prisoner! Now two items have been completed, the updates are stable, and the amount of updates will be increased in the future to improve my coding efficiency!

I have read about 20 chapters, and the writing is okay, but the writing rhythm is very messy, the scene changes are abrupt, and the narrative is messy. I guess you wrote it based on your feelings. Don't you feel it is very messy when you look back? The plot narrative is fast and slow, and the characters' expressions and dialogue emotions are basically absent. I suggest you control the rhythm when writing, write slowly and slowly, and pay more attention to the plot and atmosphere. .

Quite interesting. Hope it doesn't stop updating. Because of the ghost, the character of the protagonist cannot be a good guy, but because of his childhood experiences, the protagonist is not too cold or impersonal. The character attributes are pretty good.

Have you ever had nightmares? This is probably how I feel when reading this book... It's like the author had a nightmare and devoted himself to writing out what he could remember. I seemed to have seen something, but when I recalled it, I felt like I had seen nothing. From the intervention to the end of an event, everything was blurry. The event ended up in a Schrödinger state, and it was hard to say whether it was resolved or not. Is the protagonist strong? He seems to be quite strong. After all, he is the second generation ghost. There are indeed few people at the same stage that he cannot beat. Is the protagonist weak? He seemed quite weak, at least during the process, he gave people the impression of being weak. (It is not ruled out that he is mentally retarded) How is the scary atmosphere? It's okay. This has to be put together with the story. Basically, the story is quite interesting. The horror is okay, but it has a strong sense of powerlessness, and because of the poor writing, it makes people lose their sanity. If you are interested, start from Chapter 6, a growth-oriented protagonist and low pressure. ps. The author is a comma expert... It is the first time I have seen someone who can use commas so randomly, and there are a lot of repetitions in some chapters.

Confused? What did the author think of and write about?

It is recommended that the protagonist be executed immediately

What on earth are you writing? It's cloudy and misty. It's unlucky. It makes me feel bad.

I feel like the writing is good, and it feels like a mysterious revival. It is not impossible to maintain this level and surpass all current fans.

It feels very confusing and confusing. Some words are not expressed clearly and I don't know what they mean. Very baffling. The protagonist's abilities are unknown. I just read Chapter 8.

Let me tell you, the horror atmosphere is quite good and the descriptions are spot on. But there is a big problem, that is, it is very messy. I have looked at it very carefully, but the development of things is still very fragmented, as if it is intermittent, giving people a sense of fragmentation, and it is very tiring to watch. I can't tell you what the specific situation is. The interaction between the characters is very strange. It seems that there is a lack of connecting sentences.

The protagonist is very mentally retarded in the early stage and feels like his IQ is only that of a teenager.

Believe me, you must start reading this book from Chapter 6, and you don't need to read the first 5 chapters!