Starting from the Bitter Ancestor of Jindan

First of all, it's not appropriate for land immortals to still call themselves Taoists. Secondly, if the golden elixir cultivation is forcibly weakened, only the strength of Qi training can be used. This is a routine from 800 years ago. It is really not suitable. It is also included in the third golden chapter. It is very discouraging.

This novel makes your eyes hurt when you read it. You won't understand it if you don't read it carefully, but it's not particularly interesting.

1. The Development of the Protagonist Since this book is titled "The Hard-working Jindan Ancestor", it should focus on the development of the protagonist and the development of the sect as a auxiliary line. In the development process of the protagonist, there is currently no clear main line, and it does not reflect the hard-working state. The means are not clear, and on the contrary, it is too easy. The protagonist is currently a Yin Shen. If developed alone, it is promising, but when combined with the sect, it is slightly weak. Suggestions for the development of the protagonist: The protagonist's natal five-element flag already has water and fire. It is a bit monotonous and repetitive to give the dragon training attribute to the fire attribute. Currently, the author has less description of the protagonist's dragon training. If not, it would be better to change it to 'thunder', which also has powerful means to gain merit against monsters and monsters. 2. Development of the sect The current development of the sect is too abnormal, the sect has no management, and the mountain (Pearl Dragon King) is empty; the number of people is too small, all are outer disciples, there is no one in the inner sect to support the scene, and there is no golden elixir to sit on the scene, the protagonist ran outside. How can he be so arrogant? Aren't you afraid of being trapped? The disciple develops too fast, the protagonist returns the elixir in his 90s, but Lei Sheng returns the elixir only a few years ago? Moreover, they have too few methods and give people the impression that they are children. Suggestions for sect development: Build a good sect framework, including internal, external, core, guest ministers, general affairs, disciple recruitment, etc. The development of the sect requires management. When the social influence controlled by Taiwei is large enough, interests will be involved. If others want to touch the protagonist, they have to think carefully, instead of like now, the sect feels too weak and cannot help the protagonist, and it has been feeding on his big brother. His big brother is also the one who is taken advantage of. Why is his big brother here? Currently, Taiwei cannot help him! If the protagonist disappears and falls, this sect will not be able to develop. As long as the sect has some airs and the protagonist runs outside, it will not appear that he has abandoned his family fortune! The heroine suggested to the Dragon Clan that they would be too helpful and it would be inappropriate for them to live their entire lives; don't be afraid of the Demon Clan stealing power, and appoint a core disciple as the leader! The author apologizes for the simple joking. If it offends, I apologize. The book is quite good, and it is developing into a masterpiece. Come on!

Author, if you write that the main character has a middle-aged appearance, don't use the word Xiaodao. Let's not mention that he has a golden elixir cultivation level. It makes me feel very inconsistent to call him a Xiaodao despite his age. Isn't it better to use Pingdao?

In the first chapter, it is said that the protagonist is in the realm of Jindan and can only show his strength through Qi training. There's really no need to read any further about this setting.

This is the time for cultivating immortals. What are these cultivators doing now? Killing people and grabbing treasures, not cultivating mind, or cultivating supernatural powers... That's not called cultivating immortals, that's called fantasy... There are not many serious people like the author... Author, do you have any recommendations for this type of person?

I'm thinking what is the use of this golden elixir? Good guy, I thought Jin Dan was already very powerful, but I never expected it. After reading it, I found out that except for the disciples, all the supporting players with a little bit of strength are Huan Dan, and a bunch of Huan Dan are trying to fight against Jin Dan? Where is the level gap? And as if everyone knows what great opportunity the protagonist has got, the atmosphere of conspiracy surrounding the protagonist is dizzying.

The Daily Poison Guide is well-deserved. In the second chapter, Jin Dan can only use his Qi training strength to directly persuade him to quit. There are only about 20 comments left on more than 160 floors. They must have been deleted because of complaints. You can think of the backstory with your feet. I am tired of this kind of retro routine. They are all attracted by the title of the book and it is still this type.

I found that I really couldn't read it with my head. The protagonist has a physique that attracts hatred. The protagonist's golden elixir monk was forced to kowtow to the Heavenly Corpse Cult by the Huandan monk who was also a member of the three sects and six sects. After the force failed, several people from the same three sects and six sects openly besieged the protagonist without even an excuse. Then the protagonist's eldest brother came and killed them and ran away. Then the protagonist's friend concluded that the protagonist killed Zhen Yu without any basis. . . Anyway, the plot has so many loopholes that you will be disgusted if you have even the slightest bit of thought.

All the special codes received are monsters, and the eldest disciple is also a monster. If the protagonist ascends to the fairy world in the future, is it possible for a weasel to be the master of the sect? Inherit the tradition? So is your special code a Dao sect or a demon sect? I've taken it. It's too special. It's poisonous.

This protagonist is really hard-working and rubbish, not to mention being invincible at the same level. He was defeated by the returning elixir before he was killed. Then he damaged his foundation and defeated the other one who had never been defeated. He had to run to find the big brother to save him. He was plotted by the same camp all the way. Then he chose to forgive because he was the right way. After reading hundreds of chapters, I can't see the reason why so many people are targeting him. What can he be targeted at? In addition to the mediocre golden elixir cultivation level, the leader of the sect who was neither good nor inferior was also bombed by his predecessor. It took my breath away. I really couldn't bear to say goodbye.

I was attracted by the introduction and thought it was the ancestor of the golden elixir of the beginning. But you did it for me and forcibly weakened your cultivation. You might as well just start the opening and practice your Qi.

I still feel angry. It was pretty good at first, but I ended up being annoyed all the time. I've already suffered enough in reality. Let me read a novel like this. After seeing the chapters about Dayu, I just couldn't stand it anymore. Now I just want to say something. My mentality is shattered, fuck

With this golden elixir, hundreds of pills can be produced every day in a tertiary hospital. Each one is different and has different sizes.

The golden elixir in this book has no status. Anyone can push his nose into his eyes. And I can't understand the social aspects in this book. Has the author Zhen Huan Chuan read too much?

I really want to persuade the author to stop abusing pigs' feet. He has no memory and is disgusting with the protagonist who has all kinds of debts from his previous life. The Da Yu in the latest chapter is so disgusting. He also regretted not killing the protagonist at the time because he predicted that he would die in the future related to the protagonist. He also said that the protagonist owed them, so the protagonist deserved death anyway. It was disgusting. Until death, a person who studies destiny will not be able to understand that destiny is like a mad dog that blames everyone all day long. I hope that the protagonist admits his guilt later and avenges them. He is constantly suppressed and tortured by the powerful immortal family, and cannot be free and peaceful for a moment. It would be best if the book collapses in the end - the author should be more sadistic.

The second one died from poison, without even the thought of having sex for free.

Dao Wuqing must not have a bunch of female supporting characters. Just the Holy Mother and the like. Recently, they are all model articles that make me want to vomit.

Does the author have no idea what kind of crowd this introduction and name attract?

What are you writing about? A small golden elixir that is targeted by a bunch of people every day? How good is it?

Rubbish, even if the golden elixir is useless, it is still better than practicing qi. Don't talk about serious injuries. Can you reach the golden elixir if your body is not strong? When will the golden elixir's body be unable to even compete with the qi training? Pujie Wen

I've been reading for a long time and still can't find a theme. It's so poisonous that I have to say goodbye.

The plot is a bit deceitful, who do you think you are and are being plotted every day?

It's a great, unique novel in the style of cultivating immortals. It inherits the characteristics of cultivating immortals after the prehistoric times!

Is there a heroine? Which dragon girl is she? Can I give you a small red envelope?

It's early in the morning. Isn't it okay to commit theft?

Don't you plan to update once a day? I've had it for half a month and it's still gathering dust on my bookshelf 😡😡😡😡

Apply the settings of cultivating immortals! Golden elixir is equivalent to a main battle tank! There are no armor-piercing shells (golden elixir cultivation) The armor has no self-respect (flesh body) This is not a setting, please ignore fantasy!

Don't be fooled, I haven't spent any money to read many novels, and it took a lot of effort not to go to whoring once, bro, don't let me down.

The writing is really good. Why are there so few clicks? I hope the author will stick with it.