Journey to the West: Ranking in the Immortal Class

I remember Brother Monkey was a cannibal in the beginning.

No more, no more, I can't stand it anymore. I can't stand it anymore. Pig's feet exudes a funny aura all over his body. And I feel like I'm still a little worried about my IQ, and I'm just trying to be clever all day long, and the same goes for my attitude towards Sun Wukong. I just want to get without paying, so I'm a little confused. No matter how much Sun Wukong doesn't cultivate to others, he is still the wise stone monkey. He understands changes, knows the time of the sky, knows the location, and moves the stars to change the battle. How can he be deceived by you so easily?

You can't be serious when you should be serious, and you can't be funny when you should be funny. Cultivation is about competing with God for destiny. The protagonist is in trouble here and there. He is unwilling to fight. He has to be persuaded by others before he is willing to move forward. This is the good seedling that Bodhi originally wanted to harvest, the Taoist disciple who gave the treasure to him? Overall, it is not like the Xian Xia fighting against the sky, closer to the style of fantasy books (the kind that uses fighting spirit magic to relax in daily life).

I don't have much perseverance. If one day I can't write anymore, I hope you can encourage me. Also, if you find typos while reading, please help point them out, thank you. Attachment: Typo format Chapter 1: Expulsion and True View Qin Wei woke up from the Dream Bell and found that his legs were numb and uncomfortable as if he had cramps. When he opened his eyes, he found that his legs were crossed like that of an old Taoist priest practicing martial arts. The dream clock here should be in the dream.

Garbage protagonist! It's like I've never seen a woman in my previous life! Hungry ghost in sex! I can't walk when I see a woman! A saint would take a fancy to this kind of garbage!

After reading for more than ten years, there are very few books that I can read now. This is a novel read, but the author's level really needs to be improved. It's not that I'm being picky, it's just that the author is naturally an educated person when writing books. At least he shouldn't open his mouth or shut up and shit, and use a little logic. No matter who sees the author, is it okay to not express his lack of quality so vividly? I believe that the author is not a mouthful of shit in daily life. Is it okay to write well? It doesn't require too much, no matter what writing style or plot, at least it has a serious attitude. I rarely comment, so please forgive me if it offends me! Just ignore it!

I really can't understand what the author wrote, and the layout is messy, there are many typos, and the words are confusing.

Shennong is dead😒

In the first picture, Poison, the main character is the same as Sand Dollar.

People have ruined your Taoist intention. If you don't have the intention to kill, don't cultivate immortality. This is a difficult cause and effect.

I remember in Journey to the West, there was a demonic white snake near Black Wind Mountain that made alchemy, maybe it had a spiritual fire or something~

No wonder it's so exciting, such a low-IQ protagonist haha

I just want to know if the author has read the original Journey to the West

What is important in cultivating immortals is the word "fight", fighting for opportunities, fighting for magic weapons, and fighting for blessed places. If you don't fight and give in everywhere, you won't be able to become popular.

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There is no place for me to stay here, I have my own place Cultivation as an immortal and ranking in the immortal class, that fairy Chang'e... Are you poisonous?

😁 The process of this book is about to be completed. Currently, I am still in a mountainous area. It is inconvenient to print and mail it. Once it is mailed, it will become the work of Nasha. There is still some time. Those of you who have not invested yet can get started. Those who have already invested, don't worry. I hope everyone will like the work. Nasha are the last two words in the first row of investment rewards. 😁

Once upon a time there was a Huan Zhen Guan, and in the Guan there was a Su Huan Zhen

I couldn't stand it after seeing a few! Pig Knuckle Shabi

The cultivation speed is too slow. Just practicing Qi? Can it take 300 years to reach the level of Sun Wukong? In the episode of Journey to the West, Wanshou Mountain Wuzhuang, the monkey knocked down Zhen Yuanzi's fruit tree and went to Shizhou and Three Islands to find help. The longevity guy said to the monkey, "I am only Taiyi Sanshu and have not entered the true stream. How can I get rid of him?" It seems that your protagonist's qualifications have not reached the level of a monkey after 300 years. Journey to the West and go to heaven to be a soldier!

The subject matter is good, but the writing is not good. Why don't you review it after the author has finished it? The Chinese teacher was so angry after reading it, there were too many things that didn't make sense when reading.

How to say it? I usually jump into reading novels that travel through the heavens.

This book is awesome. Chapter 5: You don't understand that to cultivate immortality, you need to polish your foundation, don't you understand? Was he a sane person in his previous life, and he was already an adult? Where did he go to the nine years of compulsory education? He learned in elementary school that if a tall building wants to be raised from the ground, it must lay a good foundation.

The name is so lofty. After reading more than fifty chapters, I still didn't understand what the author wanted to write? It's time to see that the protagonist is a Sabi! This article is poisonous, all fellow Taoists, take your leave! ! !

Chapter 1: Pawn, I can't even see it

The monkey demon knows that Aolaiguo also knows the human race and even eats them.

The protagonist is too silly and self-righteous

The assistant has interacted with it, so I'll accept it. I'll interact with it here when I have time.

The protagonist's name is poisonous I've never heard of any ancient people using the word "wei" as their name.

After a few dozen chapters, the flavor has changed. It should be noted that you have to write a novel according to your own wishes. You write a novel because you want to write something you want to write. If you care too much about the readers' opinions, you will lose the original intention of writing a novel. If you are doing it to make a living, treat it as if I didn't say it.