Proving the Dao Through My Other Selves Across the Heavens

Pulling each so-called world (planet) into the Gu world means giving up the infinite universe outside the planet and directly cutting off most of one's potential.

The writing is indeed quite good, but there is too much writing about Gu Tao, and it is very hypnotic in its verbosity. And because of the emergence of the chat group, dream communication was temporarily abolished, making it impossible for Goldfinger to provide new alter egos. It is understandable that they finally encountered an advanced world and began to dig deeper. All alter egos invested heavily in support, and even gave up extensive exploration to dig deeper into the Gu Dao world. The author himself may have a deep plot of Gu Dao, and he is afraid that he will not be able to write this fanfic well, so he always strives for excellence in explanations and uses his own understanding to improve the Gu Dao chapter. This makes the original refreshing setting of the novel become a literary and sophisticated novel, and he may be afraid that the text will collapse in the later stage, and the Gu Dao protagonist will be suppressed because of his fear of doing things first and last. It is recommended to streamline some of the introduction content and speed up the mid-term development. If you are afraid of collapse in the later stage, it is actually easy to solve it. For Zhu Tianwen, stacking boxes is the best way.

Author, you have written so many worlds, which is the main body, which makes people a little confused and will dissuade a large number of people.

The protagonist's behavior is a bit puzzling, and the ordinary soliloquy is fine. For boring emotional issues, abolish the golden finger memory transmission and change it to text communication through chat? Can you waste a little bit? Cricket is a boring womanizer? Strength makes rules, and rules determine good and evil. The will of the strong is the overall situation, is correct, and is the final right of interpretation. When you are weak, becoming stronger is the first factor

However, the author's writing is still very good, and I hope it will continue to be good.

The character problems of these "doppelgangers" are also too big (they are all messy emotions). If they were not pushed by cheats (it is cheating anyway), at least they would not have achieved what they are now. Is the Gu world so well organized? Just a few words casually, "It is true that I have known it for a long time, so I have a backup plan..." The Shadow Sect has a hundred thousand years... Heaven has three million years, let alone how powerful it is, how many traitors like Wan Zihong will cast a net? It's just that maybe the original novel felt that low-level traitors had little impact, so they didn't mention it. Think about the plan of Zishan Zhenjun and Tianyi to seize the chess, and Tianting used the true inheritance to coax the Qihai Ancestor. If the opponent is not hanging on the wall, do you really think everyone is a fool? Is the background easily followed or even ignored? If you can avoid corruption for three million years, you should think about it carefully. Ignoring these behemoths and still rising casually, isn't this deception? So, a fan is a fan, come on, author, there are very few fan writers who can write so much and yet not put it on the shelves, this is the only one. Since I plan to write it, I also hope to write better. Think more comprehensively about the issue.

A good Wanjie novel was turned into a Gu Dao novel by you.

It's not a system. It either takes the path of gods and demons, creating the world, or the Western divine kingdom system, etc., Which turn countless separate systems into a whole system.

The problem is quite serious, but you can still see it, but the hang-up is too big, good guy. Fangyuan's writing is so mindless.

I saw the Great Love Immortal came in with a snap.