Yaoshou! Why Is There Something Wrong with Me Adding a Bit of a Cultivating Style to My Painting?

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Phonetic code words? No wonder I found some parts inexplicable. I thought the author was taught Chinese by a physical education teacher. If you are so lazy, this book has no future. I felt so uncomfortable watching it.

Since this book is a phonetic code word, there will be typos. I always check and miss some. You are welcome to catch bugs and just say it directly in the chapter. If you see it in the background, I will correct it. If you have any comments about this book or the plot, you can leave a message here.

I'm investing in you, the author. Can you finish writing this?

Nice introduction (to be honest I don't like cyberspace) Come on!

This content is really not bad, but if you take a quick look at it and revise the paragraph arrangement or typos after you finish writing, you will get a lot more mistakes than you do now. How troublesome is it to take a quick look at it and correct it after you have written it? These days, when I meet a "sloppy" Buddhist author, I really feel like I hate iron but not steel 😅

The author, let me tell you my feelings. I feel that the writing was good in the early stage, and the idea is a genius idea. However, when I found out the truth behind the death of my childhood sweetheart, which was just a few pictures, it became very messy, confusing, and unreadable. It was also very dense and dense. I wanted to explain one thing in a few chapters, but it felt confusing, and then the story felt more and more unreasonable.

Well, how should I put it? ! ! The new generation of Suicune feels like water. It has the same style and feel as Taibai Suicune, water.

The biggest problem with this book now is that the sentences are not fluent. If you don't improve it, it will be useless no matter how good it is.

This guy is an old eunuch, just take a look at the creative ideas of the free chapters. Whoever subscribes is a fool.

Is this another sit-up? I feel that the books written by the author are all very creative, but they disappear as soon as they are written.

I'm probably here to read the novel, not to listen to the whispers of the ancient gods. Why do you say that? One is that the settings are too many and too close, which can easily cause a critical blow to the brain; for example, Shura Shen, this idea can basically write a whole novel in a martial arts world The swordsman's self-schizophrenia skills can be more foreshadowed before sending the sword, such as: "... As a listener, (the protagonist) secretly wonders whether this guy is smart", so that it is not abrupt. One is a typing problem. There are typos in the settings and it is difficult to understand;

As far as this idea and writing style are concerned, it is a masterpiece, but there are really too many typos in your phonetic input method, and some sentences are not very smooth. Can the author check it when he finishes writing the chapter? You can easily lose readers this way.

No wonder I thought this book was so long-winded and familiar. It turned out to be the author of absurd fairy tales.

Kick me when the main character becomes a jerk, I'll watch it then

This,,,, this is the taste of Taibaosuijun

My brother's idea is good, but sharing the same problem with layman Gu Yue is too arrogant. Readers are here to see the story, not to see your intracranial orgasm. You don't want to climax all the time, or even set it up and don't even write the main text (not yet), but I feel like the story doesn't connect to it. This way of writing is really not advisable. After you finish writing, I suggest the author read it and think about whether the readers will understand what you wrote when they read it.

Not the author, you are a eunuch every day. Who will dare to read your book in the future? Wear your vest every day. It's not a big deal either.

Reading the novel feels like being tortured

I just remembered that the author discovered that the author's new book is gone. To be honest, most of the time, the author's writing is okay at the beginning. After writing, he may write and write to get excited, completely ignoring whether the reader understands or not, and letting himself go. It is similar to the kind of person who sees a very funny joke, and then wants to share it with a friend, and then laughs after saying a few words, and laughs after saying a few words. The friend is confused and has no idea what you are talking about.