Uchiha Kenshin of Konoha

The writing level is very poor, the ANBU is written as inferior as a horse, the combat power is collapsed, the non-heroine's emotional line is written a lot, and there is no connection, it is not understandable at all. There is no artistic connection when the Sharingan is open, but when the seal is formed, One seal requires half a page to write, and the author seems to have never seen a carriage return. He only wrote 8 pages in total, and the seal takes up half a page. Sometimes he borrows more than one seal. In terms of word count alone, a normal young author would start with 11 chapters. You have so many consecutive chapters. The number of words in tmd is only 8, especially the writing is not very good. I just bought a paid chapter, so I came here to talk. You can see from the front that you don't need to use this kind of book to kill time. You can see how much it costs. Starting from 11 B, those first-class authors are almost the same as you. You are really amazing. There is nothing to say. When I first read this title, I thought it was pretty good. It's a mess. The level of writing is at best that of junior high school without a paper.

The Valley of the End

I'm just complaining. It's really not popular nowadays and there are artificial intelligence systems. They are still female. What's even more terrifying is that they will come out and enter the harem later.

The first chapter left me speechless. It was a bit cruel to mock the halo. It was just a sword practice! So many people said it! And does the author have any misunderstanding about Uchiha?

After the Second Ninja War, the protagonist will leave Konoha for a while, and the story of the heroine will occur while traveling in the Land of Iron. Well, it should take some time to get there. Please wait a moment, readers. Single female protagonist, no need to remove the original CP

The author is definitely not old, and there are so many poisonous points in the whole text, it's a waste of time

Found

Did the author misunderstand the combatants' concept of time? You drew your sword so quickly that you could kill three times in just one-tenth of an instant, five seconds? ? ? The day lilies are already cold. Do you think the children are fighting? It's only five seconds.

Nose Tree and Tsunade

Kingdom of Iron was fine before, although there was a feeling that the protagonist was deceived and lame. But the Iron Kingdom collapsed from the beginning.

After it was put on the shelves, was this the only water bottle written by the Kingdom of Iron? 😰

If it is put on the shelves at this level, can it be said that the author is committing fraud? Scamming money, didn't read the paid chapters!

Betting on the sword and the heart, flashing the big and small soldiers

😏 The live-action version of Iron Kingdom's Rurouni Kenshin is really good.

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The author should watch Naruto again, he doesn't even know about ninjutsu.

Arrange the identity of a passerby, such as the owner of a certain store in Konoha, If you have any ideas, please speak up 😄