Life in Tokyo, Starting with Romance Tips

It's hard to understand, why today's Nikkei has to add a yandere who is unreasonable and makes the protagonist weak. Is it possible that Nikki's character design is fixed? Others appear at the beginning anyway, and they get together early and leave early if they can't accept it, but the protagonist has always been smooth sailing, and you suddenly have a female supporting character who constantly attacks the male protagonist. One-third of the recent updates are about yandere. How can you not dare to offend her if you are rich and powerful? Why is this? !

It's okay in itself, the beginning is great. But after the girlfriend line appeared in the middle, I thought it would be developed in depth, but suddenly a yandere young lady appeared. At this point, the protagonist is a scumbag, and the girlfriend's role has a very weak sense of existence. Finally, it's over, it's over. The writing style is okay, but the quality of the writing cannot be said, but the logic of the story is not perfect.

I like the style of your book very much, but your ending made me think ten years later... It was the first time I tried such an ending and I vomited blood.

①More than a hundred chapters are still good ②The plot advancement is not slow ③There is little interaction between female characters The most important point is that there are too few updates🤓

There is a lot of nonsense. Every time I encounter something, I first interpret it mentally or make some comments, and then quote a famous saying while explaining it. What impressed me the most was the chapter about how iced soda should taste good. It explains that ice contains more carbon dioxide and stimulates the brain more. Then what is the protagonist busy with? The soda is no longer iced and doesn't taste good, but he still drinks it in order not to waste it. This chapter can be written twice.

It looks good

， I have to say it's too pretentious (referring to the author), and I feel this way in the two chapters before and after (88 and 89). Just be firm when you need to be, don't be coy. Uncomfortable. While talking about his heroic ambition, he is also all kinds of hypocritical.        ， Who can remain indifferent? Not to mention whether you can help or not, even if you are a ruthless person and just want to protect yourself wisely, what does it matter if you help call the police. What do you think? (It takes ten minutes to walk, and it took 6 minutes for urgent matters. Is there anything worth saying? Is it a short time?) Let's not talk about this for now, after all, it affects all aspects. But this thought is speechless, (original text: It feels like it is not good to turn a blind eye). Do you really have this kind of thought? ? ? Although the result is correct, these are just the inner thoughts of the protagonist, but there is something wrong with the idea. Some things are wrong, even if they are insignificant, they should not appear. It has to make you feel sick, right? Some people may say that I am hypocritical, but this is an idea that is inconsistent with my three views.

Compared with the current wife's character, she is peaceful and serene, and has a haggard and weak feeling that a single mother with no debt should have. Let's regard it as the character of the wife who has solved the trouble with the help of the protagonist. Artist: mono Illustration id:85430828

It's normal for this daily novel to have inner drama, but there are too many. Every time I meet a woman, I have to repeatedly talk about what the hero is doing 😅. The character image is not enriched by the inner drama, but it seems a bit long-winded. In many chapters, almost half of the content is inner drama, which is a bit excessive. Also, the plot really should be advanced a little bit.

Aomi Kawa Nanase is sunny, cheerful and innocent.