Tokyo's Holy Father

To be honest, I suggest you change your number. The reason your grades are getting worse and worse is that you have not completed the course in the true sense. I read it from the Kyoto Wings book, and I followed it all the way to the end. Everyone's money is not brought by the strong wind. Reading a book at the beginning cost more than a hundred yuan, but the Kyoto Wings book was unfinished. When I started to make soft rice later, I kept it, and as expected, it didn't end well. How many books have you read yourself? New readers are limited, and whether old readers can still trust you is a very important question. Don't talk about others, just me. When I read books, I always had the idea of ​​​​paying for pirated copies. I spent some money at the starting point. But then I encountered a lot of deleted comments, and the high fan value in the comments section of the book wore away my emotion of giving up votes to previous pirated copies. Now, my idea is that I am willing to spend money, but I have to get the value of the money. Either I read the original book, or I read the guaranteed book. So which book is guaranteed? At least the author must have a few truly completed books. For new authors, I am willing to spend some money to support them and follow them first. But for older authors who have written quite a few books, there are eunuchs or unfinished books, which really affects my willingness to pursue books. Oh, regarding the latest notice, I really suggest you cut it off. It's not necessary. You even asked such a question, which proves that you no longer have the motivation to write it down. As for the opinions of readers, to be honest, there aren't many old readers left to follow, and many of them may still be waiting and watching.

I hope I don't get pulled over by my former god and die later.

The biggest feature of this book is that all categories are not covered

Please support me!

The first Kyoto book is the pinnacle, it's so classic, and the subsequent ones are worse than the previous ones.

I think you haven't figured out the main storyline. It seems like you want to make MLM stronger ✍🏻, but this is only 40 chapters short. What are the skills of the protagonist? Some of the skills of the supporting characters are not impressive, and there are no specific changes after being imprinted. This goes against the core needs of the upgrade flow. From the perspective of upgrading Shuangwen, the data is not solid and the comparison is not obvious. If you want to write a story about superpower love, I feel that the protagonist has a stronger sense of presence than these female characters. Women in previous urban novels can be labeled because they can easily mirror the characters in reality. However, in this context of more intense conflicts, the female characters are a bit floating, and it is difficult to feel like they are knocking on CP. Finally, there is the protagonist. He calls himself the Holy Father, but what exactly does he do? He persuades actors to be good, helps clerks get justice, fights with the police, and pretends to be coquettish with his colleagues. Isn't this the same as the Virgin Bitch? It is true that this transformation is out of the comfort zone for the author, but I hope the author can write better and better. Finally, here are some personal thoughts on the plot. Since the skill templates are like this, let's just start a pyramid scheme. Holy Father, Holy Daughter, Holy Spirit, etc., To spread the power. The society is so rotten, it is better to enclose the territory and become the king and build an utopia. Other sages can later develop into subordinates and some are hostile forces.

It's you again, I've already cut a few copies. Before, I was in school and had limited living expenses, so I read pirated copies and tried my best to buy some genuine copies. Now that I'm working and have enough living expenses, let me read the genuine edition of this book and read it to the end, giving both parties a perfect ending.

Please write a longer one. The first few books were very good but a bit short. The character development is really good. Come on.

Let me see who has opened a new book

Lao Da won the Easter match 🙂