Edge of Polar Night

Ah point, everyday ghosts and beasts

Come on brother, brother, I can only help you so far, I hope you can realize your dream!

The author did not repeat settings, and there was no inconsistency between context and context. The settings were very normal. Looking back, I can still find many small details. The descriptions of the characters are quite consistent with the character settings, no matter what kind of personality they are. I like it very much.

Why haven't you signed a contract yet? It's obviously better than some signed ones, but it's strange... What's the problem?

Based on my many years of experience, they are all sailors.

Are they all sailors? Brushing is really powerful

A reward of 200 coins. Come on, brother, hold on.

There are a lot of reviews, but no one says what this book is about, and the introduction is vague.

Now here it is: the main character is the strongest, but everyone kneels down when he sees him, and the emotional scenes are too cliche. The plot is unreasonable in many places (1. The protagonist was imprisoned from childhood to adulthood, but he didn't have much resentment, and he happily worked for others every day. 2. The protagonist brought an omnic with him every day, and he didn't care about it during normal times. He still brought it with him when performing tasks. Isn't it suspicious? Have you ever seen anyone bring a pet dog with them to a war? 3. He rescued important people many times and performed extremely well. Strong ability, but anyone can ride on his head, what about the respect for the strong? Not only must he be on call, but he is afraid of being scolded even if he doesn't answer the phone. 4. The protagonist has the most contact with women, and even a few male teammates have become passers-by. I hope they won't turn into scumbag stallions in the end...) I won't say anything else, I hope the author can see it.

The book is above average, but the reviews are so negative that even real book lovers can't read it, which is counterproductive.

To be honest, I am a bit confused. Does the author want to write something more serious or more light-hearted?

Hmm... The performance of the protagonist is indeed quite fragmented. We won't discuss the issue of being released from prison because a soul has been changed inside. But to find out the truth of the incident, you have to say that he cares... He usually just cares about it, so say he doesn't care. It's strange that he almost loses control when he encounters the incident. As for teammates, I usually don't write about joint activities at all. Saving Shen Lu's mother and attending Zhou Qi's wedding feel like a relationship between passers-by and friends. What a great opportunity, but there is no bond at all and they come and go at will. Looking at it, I feel that these teammates will be sacrificed in the future. Then, the captain's father may actually be the one who directly ordered the capture of the protagonist's original body. If they are indeed enemies and will be sacrificed to heaven, downplay them a little more. Don't waste words on them, which will slow down the progress of the plot and affect the rhythm. Of course, you can also heighten their feelings and kill them to make them cry. If they are indeed teammates who share the same joys and sorrows with the protagonist, make a good bond! What a passerby! The biggest problem is Qi Jiang. Who takes a pet with him on a mission and still remains inseparable? This is too strange. Those people are obviously suspecting that the thing is on the protagonist, but now they don't react at all. It's too fake. Qi Jiang should be designed to hide in peacetime, and only use wireless signals to communicate with the protagonist when the network is hacked. The last pity is the energy base incident. Such a big battle ended up with no fighting. The protagonist fought a miscellaneous soldier at the beginning, and then there was a boss chase and then he was killed by the plot. After picking up the weird Shen Wen, he was killed by the plot again and changed the scene. After changing the scene, it turned into a mount training. After finally finding his teammates and finishing the team battle, he lost his mount... It's... Very inexplicable. The whole incident has no point, but there is nothing wrong with it, it's just a matter of writing skills, and there's nothing that can be done about it.

After reading dozens of chapters, I still feel that there is a serious sense of incoherence and fragmentation in the author's creation of characters and personalities, whether it is the male protagonist or the supporting role. To put it simply, it feels like their characters change from time to time. Although the author will mention a few details that seem to be foreshadowing, it just makes people unable to connect.

Come on brother! I read the first chapter and thought the writing was great, so I didn't read it again because it was too short. The newbie period is very difficult, I hope you can get through it.

The protagonist is a dominated person, a slave. I want to know in which chapter the protagonist breaks free from manipulation and has hope of rising.

Create a character naming post, I have difficulty naming! Please write down your character's name, gender, and age clearly.

🤤 Brother, you are so honest that you have ruined the Silver League and don't control the comments. You use the trumpet to fight in the lane? Nowadays, readers are very sophisticated, so this operation will not work.

Brother, if you brushed this comment, I advise you not to brush it again. The editor can see that it has been more than a month since you opened the book and you don't have a single good recommendation. This is probably the reason. Of course, if you didn't brush it, just pretend I didn't say it.

This book is just around the corner to become a god.

I thought I was going back to the time of the disaster, and then you told me eighty years had passed. . . . . . . . . . . . . Are you playing confrontation? . . . .

There are basically many problems in this novel such as poor writing and poor characterization, and if there are, I would not recommend it. What attracted me to the novel is that the author is good at writing characters. Although there are some shortcomings, the overall flaws are not concealed, and it is safe and sound.