Starting from Konoha, Wielding the Zanpakutō

So, can Ichigo give up his friends, father, two sisters, all ties, and body in the real world, and go to Soul Society to spend the rest of his life, or can Rukia give up everything Byakuya has done for the sisters, give up Captain Ukitake's instructions before his death, give up Renji's pursuit of her for hundreds of years, and wear a righteous body to spend the rest of her life in the real world? If you really choose one of them, it would be cruel and irresponsible to the other party.

The protagonist of the time traveler writes about the aborigines' journey, and the author is also a great critic →_→

Haha, the protagonist knows this and that, for example, he knows Naruto's later process of practicing immortal arts, and he also knows about the leg shadow, but he just doesn't know some key plot points. Is this selective amnesia?

The protagonist is so weak! The golden finger was cut to death. Even though Tatsumi was released, he still couldn't defeat Zabuza! 99% Of Narutos are squishy, ​​and if they are approached by a master of swordsmanship, they will die. If you master just one Shunpo (I haven't seen Shunpo with a CD in Bleach), you will be able to kill only a limited number of them.

Rukia and Renji are childhood sweethearts. They have been together for who knows how many years. Ichito and Orihime are also childhood sweethearts, so I hope that those who are together with Ichito and Rukia will like ntr, and the minotaurs will die.

Pig's Knuckle is too weak, not only in terms of strength, but also in terms of combat awareness. Maybe the author didn't write it well?

Generally speaking, the book is not a big problem, but one is that the time traveler has no idea about the plot. The setting of Death is that ordinary people can't see it at all. Reiatsu can completely suppress ordinary people. Aizen's ordinary people can't even get up close. The other is that it is a bit awkward when combined with Naruto. When I start playing Jonin, what level should I start playing? There is a setting in Bleach that if the reiatsu is strong enough, all fancy abilities can be ignored. The battle of Bleach is the battle of reiatsu. Even Ichito can't break the defense when fighting against Kenpachi at the beginning 😒. The power system still hopes that you can find a way to balance it. Naruto's power is ridiculously expanded in the later period. Of course, Bleach is quite ridiculous at the beginning, with Shunpo and so on. Come on

The plot arrangement is super poor. Zabuza is defeated at the beginning. It would be okay if the protagonist's Soul-Zantoto swastika unlock or initial unlock ability is super good. He doesn't even understand the Liberation Language. He pretends as soon as he comes on the stage. He thinks he is the king at the beginning but turns out to be a bronze. Too many poison points😒😒😒😒

If nothing else, this author is really awesome, and he can write about people who have traveled through time and place themselves as aboriginals. Well, if what I said is not good, tell me. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

Why do they all have powerful spiritual pressure? Very few Hokages can see souls, so where does the powerful spiritual pressure come from?

I feel like this introduction alone can filter out 70% of readers.

Chapter 6: Poisoning individuals. The protagonist goes to a place and is targeted by everyone (it feels like it is not a group of people but two people) and then a very Long Aotian dialogue, such as: (To you, ordinary people are just tools for testing knives) Chapter 6 is full of preludes to show off, clearly telling readers that I am going to show off. Author, can you write a few more pictures of the pretentious prelude and then let the drizzle make it silent? Don't be so obvious, okay?

This introduction made me think that Naruto deliberately didn't save Neji in order to get Hinata.

The Zanpakuto and Golden Finger that use the mirror principle are not too brainless and have not completely destroyed the balance of combat power. I am looking forward to the later Swastika 🤓

Personally, I think it can be developed in the direction of Hanzo paired with a Zanpakutō, and combined with other ninjutsu. Otherwise, if it is limited to the Shinigami, it will lose the flavor of Naruto. And as a time traveler, it is very illogical to limit myself to the path of samurai at the beginning.