Ninja Dream Master

After reading it, my personal views are summarized as follows: ① Disadvantages: There are a lot of fights, and I prefer daily peace; as netizens said, the protagonist was outwitted by the author when he met Obito for the second time. In fact, the author's purpose can be achieved in other ways; the author also admitted that some parts of the writing are excellent. The writing is not very clear, there are still some bugs but they do not affect the progress of the plot; the connection between the protagonist and the real world is not very smooth, and it always feels a bit stagnant ② Advantages: The author is very good in both daily life and combat, especially in the details of the main plot; the protagonist is better portrayed , has her own thoughts and her mother is stubborn and insists on insisting on her choice even though she knows that she made the wrong choice; the emotional line of the characters is okay, there is no blunt feeling; the imagination is relatively big (not referring to skills and tactics, but to the combing of the original plot. Personally, I think the theatrical version is very smooth) ; In fact, this book could be better, but the author was a novice at the time and did not take into account some things; Tsunade's emotional line is smooth and flowing, but it is just a dog-licking club that everyone will not like; the protagonist's own emotional line is a bit stagnant, maybe the author forgot the previous characters and settings; overall it is pretty good. The above are only personal temporary opinions

I have been following this book for two days since I discovered it the day before yesterday, and finally reached the current progress. I have to say that this is one of the best Naruto fanfics I have ever seen. There are no embarrassing names that are not down to earth, there are no dark plots that are eye-catching, and there are no so-called decisive killings that take away human lives. Although the protagonist knows the plot, he is not without a clue; although he is powerful, he is by no means without weaknesses. Although the system is a major help for the author's strengthening, even without the system, Old Man Liu Dao still has sufficient reasons to help the protagonist grow. The dream-making system makes up for the regrets in everyone's hearts and retains those initial touches. The author describes this ninja world. There are no conspiracy theories or heart-breaking theories. Black is still black and white is still white. I like it very much. Regarding the complaints from some readers, I think the author can view it dialectically. After all, I really like it. I think the author must also have liked it when he wrote it down. As long as we are happy.

In the original book, Kakashi cares and helps Sasuke more than Naruto, or in other words, most of his attention is focused on Sasuke. One is the only orphan of the master, and the other is a clansman who is beyond the reach of his teammates. You can tell at a glance who is kissing and who is not, but Kakashi does the opposite. Kakashi's excuse was that Sasuke's attributes matched mine, making it suitable to teach him, fart. At the jounin level, the five elements of attributes are basically involved, it's just about whether you are good at it or not. But if you're not good at it, the Jonin's experience and knowledge are there, and it's more than enough to teach a Genin. But Kakashi, on the other hand, if the difference in attributes was a joke in the jounin circle, he immediately abandoned Naruto and Sakura. Fortunately, Naruto introduced him to Asma, but he didn't introduce him either. He just said that Asma was good at wind escape and asked Naruto to find Asma by himself. The teacher who leads the team doesn't care about Naruto. It's impossible for other teachers to try their best. I'll teach you the basics and figure it out on your own. What made Sakura even worse was that she was sent to the hospital with a letter of introduction (I forgot whether she gave it). Kakashi had some connections with Asuma and others, but he really didn't have many connections there. The "only" Uchiha tribe is human, and the orphan of his master is not a human. He dragged Sasuke to special training, and threw Naruto to Ebisu and Asuma. If he hadn't met Jiraiya, he would have been destroyed. The only combat ninjutsu that Naruto can master in the whole story is the Rasengan and the Shadow Clone (even if there are a few wind release ninjutsu in the later period, I forget if there are any, even if there is, it is taught by Jiraiya and has nothing to do with Kakashi). Kakashi is mostly responsible for the unfavorable ninja career in Naruto's early stage, and Kushina and Mizuna Kakashi was a good friend to Kakashi when he was a boy. Not to mention how much care he had to take care of Naruto, he didn't even treat him the same as Sasuke. That means Naruto has a big heart, otherwise Minato Kushina would really be angry, and others would just forget about Naruto. His senior brother and the teacher who led the team would also deal with Naruto. Besides having the surname of Uchiha, the boy Obito basically doesn't get the treatment that Uchiha deserves. A well-known bastard in the school wants to get some good treatment in Uchiha (it is actually nothing new to open a magatama at the age of twelve or thirteen, or to be a ninja) Uchiha also need to open their eyes at the most basic level, which is a rare improvement from the second and third magatama.) They haven't opened their eyes yet, and they don't know how good life in Uchiha can be. If they didn't go dark in school, they would be obito, and they still care about the glory of Uchiha. It's not bad, but it's difficult to have a deeper bond. Even Obito himself doesn't care about the descendants of ordinary clansmen. You, Kakashi, have done your best, but you have been perfunctory with the children of your master and his wife who took good care of you. It's really incomprehensible. Facts also prove that after Sasuke left in the later period, no matter what the psychology was, the focus did shift to Naruto and Sakura. Naruto and Sakura were Sasuke's replacement.

① In front of Naruto who has no parents, he said, "It's better not to have such parents." Say in front of Naruto who likes me, "Why is it you who is in front of me? If it were Sasuke, he would definitely understand me." -------------- ② Kushina : "I want to find a good woman like my mother"; Minato: "This girl looks a bit like Kushina" Minato's sentence describes that Sakura's divine form when she is angry is a bit like Kushina. It is indeed a bit similar, but it is just a divine form. I think Minato's expression looked like this when he saw Naruto being beaten up by a girl he didn't know: As a father, Minato was not sure what to think at this time. You see, he didn't ask Sakura's name in the end. Kushina's side: A woman like my mother is a strong, self-respecting, brave and gentle woman. The most important thing is that people like her can use their lives to protect Naruto and those who love him. In the original work, there were many people who were willing to sacrifice their lives to protect Naruto, but only three people really did so and left a deep impression on the audience: Iruka, Sasuke and Hinata. The similarity between Sakura and Kushina lies in the divine form, and only in the divine form. When Kushina was teased when she was young because of her red hair, she fought off the bullies herself; when Sakura was teased because of her wide forehead when she was young, it was Ino who helped her fight away the bullies. Kushina's fists hit those who bullied her and would not be violent towards Minato; Sakura's fists would fall on Naruto, sometimes for no particular reason. Kushina is the same on the outside and extremely strong; Sakura is strong on the outside and soft on the inside, but fragile on the inside. Add to add why Sakura is said to be strong on the outside and soft on the inside: Sakura cried when she asked Sasuke to save Naruto, she cried when she thought of Sasuke, she cried when she begged Naruto to pursue Sasuke, she cried when Saai said a few words, she cried while calling Naruto when Pain came, and she cried when the Raikage kunoichi said a few words about Sasuke. This is all a sign of her inner fragility. It is obviously not a shortcoming but just a character trait. I don't know why some fans just don't want to admit it. 4. Naruto took almost no action in pursuing Sakura. Naruto has very little time left except for training. Doesn't it stop him from pursuing Sakura? As a result, Naruto didn't take any further action except taking a walk with Sakura. What I essentially want to say is that in fact, Naruto didn't like Sakura that much. It wasn't to the level of "love", and it wasn't like what some CP fans imagined, like an unforgettable, deep-lasting love, silent protection, just an ordinary love for a girl. Care is concern, liking is liking. I have never denied Naruto's concern for Sakura and Sakura's concern for Naruto, but care ≠ love. Uzumaki Naruto is a man with an independent mind and a sound personality. He is not the infatuated persona that some people imagine. He is free to decide who he likes or dislikes, and there are traces of emotional changes. He does not like him from the first episode to the last episode. Don't say that Naruto was chasing Sasuke for Sakura from beginning to end. First of all, Naruto was indeed chasing Sasuke from beginning to end, but not for Sakura. The agreement between Sakura and him is very important, but it is Naruto's own will to recover Sasuke. This was said by Naruto himself after Sakura's false confession. If Naruto has been pursuing Sasuke for Sakura from beginning to end, then why should Naruto continue to pursue Sasuke when Sakura has given up on Sasuke? He happily accepted Sakura's confession and it didn't matter whether he was Sasuke or not. But the actual situation is that Naruto rejected Sakura's confession and continued to chase Sasuke. So here I reiterate that the agreement between Sakura and him is very important, but it is Naruto's own will to recover Sasuke. Naruto didn't give up on Sakura at the end, but he lost his love for Sakura a long time ago. First of all, I think everyone can notice one thing, that is, Naruto says he likes Sakura every day, but in fact, he almost takes no action in pursuing Sakura. In contrast, the competition with Sasuke and the subsequent actions to recover Sasuke were relatively positive. When Naruto first introduced Sakura from Naruto's perspective, he said "a girl I have a crush on". It's normal for a twelve-year-old boy to have feelings for girls. This is not to deny that Naruto once liked Sakura, but it can be said that Naruto's love for Sakura was gradually consumed by Sakura. The first time Sakura consumed Naruto's feelings was when Naruto retrieved Tsunade to help treat Sasuke who was unconscious after being tortured by Itachi using Tsukuyomi. Tsunade healed Sasuke, and Sakura immediately hugged him. Naruto's expression at this time must be obvious to everyone. The second time was Sakura and Naruto's "lifelong agreement", asking Naruto to take Sasuke back. Although we all knew later that it was Naruto's own decision to take Sasuke back, there was a difference between Sakura crying and begging Naruto to take Sasuke back at the entrance of the village and Naruto taking the initiative to ask to take Sasuke back. Sakura knew that Naruto liked her, and Naruto knew that Sakura liked Sasuke. Thinking about it, a request of this level in this situation would be very cruel to Naruto. The third time was the "false confession" incident. This event was the event that announced the official death of Naruto's love for Sakura. In fact, before the false confession, Naruto's love for Sakura's relationship between men and women was already very little, but this incident was officially over. You can take a look at the change in Naruto's expression when he was falsely confessed: First he was surprised, then he immediately realized something was wrong, and finally pointed out directly that Sakura was deceiving. Just imagine, if a boy really likes you wholeheartedly, why would he doubt you when you confess your love? It is true that the timing of Sakura's confession is suspicious, but with Naruto's character, if he was confessed to a girl he likes, he would not react so calmly. Comparing this level of reaction with Naruto's character, it was simply calm. Finally Naruto said the word "hate". Naruto is a good-natured person and rarely speaks words with such strong negative emotions, especially when he is "the person he likes" in front of him. Therefore, the emotion that was left before the false confession finally died at this time. At the same time, the official formula book has also finalized this. Naruto's arrows towards Sakura disappeared (previously in the formula book, Naruto's arrows towards Sakura had "like" written on them). So, Naruto didn't "suddenly" dislike Sakura during the Fourth War, but he had slowly disliked her for a long time. Since Naruto had long disliked Sakura, why did he admit that Sakura was his girlfriend in front of the fourth generation? Naruto's reaction here is actually easy to see as a joking answer. In fact, the fourth generation was not serious when he asked the question. He had just been reincarnated by Gutu and saw a girl of similar age next to his son. It was normal to ask a similar question, and the fourth generation didn't think much about it. (I didn't ask Sakura's name in the end) Moreover, after the fourth generation asked this question, Naruto did not answer immediately. Instead, he hesitated twice and said, "Uh--" "Huh?" Before agreeing, with a very calm expression and not even shy. This is indeed not a serious attitude towards introducing your girlfriend. On the other hand, looking back at the words he said with tears when he said goodbye to the fourth generation at the end, it is clear which ones are sincere. _ I don't know where I found it, it's been in my memo for a long time.

If the heroine is not Tsunade, write a hammer🔨

When Naruto's pants were torn, Sakura was the first to notice and patch them up for him, not Hinata. It was Sakura, not Hinata, who helped Naruto clean up his room. When Naruto suffered from insomnia and couldn't sleep, the one who stayed with him and promised to become stronger with him was Sakura, not Hinata. When Naruto was training in the rain, it was Sakura, not Hinata, who helped him make soldiers' food pills to accompany him in the rain. When Sai insulted Naruto, he punched the tree to pieces and warned that the next person to hit Sai would be Sakura, not Hinata. Naruto turned into a tailed beast. He knew he couldn't stop Naruto, so he ran up to stop him. However, he was beaten to death by Naruto who lost his mind. However, it was Sakura, not Hinata, who endured the pain silently for fear that he would blame himself. She felt guilty because Naruto was injured while saving her, and it was Sakura, not Hinata, who decided to become a medical ninja. When Naruto went through life and death, it was Sakura, not Hinata, who almost exhausted all his chakra to save him. Naruto introduced Sakura, not Hinata, as his girlfriend to his father. It was Sakura, not Hinata, who Minato said personally, "This girl really looks like Kushina." When Naruto makes a mistake, it's Sakura who stops him and tells him it's wrong, not Hinata who lets him go. When Naruto was hospitalized, it was Sakura, not Hinata, who came to visit him holding flowers. During the genin exam, it was Sakura who chose to uprightly give up the exam for Naruto's dream of becoming Hokage, instead of directly copying Hinata's answers to Naruto regardless of Kiba and Shino's life or death. When Naruto was sitting alone on the horizontal bar, it was Sakura, not Hinata, who held his hand. When everyone was far away from Naruto, it was Sakura who was willing to accompany him and hit him without any hesitation, because in her eyes, Naruto was Naruto, not the demon fox in other people's eyes. When Naruto was wrongly accused of stealing by everyone, it was Sakura who stood up to help her, not Hinata who just stood aside and covered her mouth. In the Battle of Pain, Hinata rushed up and was slapped into the ground (in the manga, not a stick was pulled out, the confession was not finished, and it only occupied three spaces in total). When she fainted and fell unconscious, Sakura was responsible for medicalizing hundreds of people with one person. After learning that Naruto went berserk, she was worried that Naruto would have another one. He was responsible for evacuating the crowd to prevent more people from being accidentally injured. After that, he had to pick up Hinata for treatment after killing her. Hinata's response seemed to be very affectionate, but in fact it had no effect at all. She was short-sighted and emotional. If it weren't for Minato's seal, Naruto would have died long ago. Kushina said, "Look for a girl like your mother, don't be snatched away by a strange woman." Naruto's first impression of Hinata was "a strange person." Minato said, "I'll leave my son to you." It was Sakura, not Hinata, who entrusted Naruto to her. Until now, mom and dad thought their daughter-in-law was Sakura, not Hinata. Kishimoto's original words: "I didn't want to write Naru Hina's love story at all."

If the author is writing for his dream, I won't say anything else. The author can delete the post directly. If it is for signing a contract, maybe the 100,000-word application can give you a friendship sign, but there is a high probability that it will be rejected. If I made a mistake and have already come to the website to sign the contract, then the author please delete it. If the author can see this, I will say a few words. I don't know what the author is writing, and I have no sense of involvement. For example, the first story, Tsunade's dream, should have been a lot more exciting. But in fact it was as bland as water, with no sense of conflict. To be precise, it did not express Tsunade's confusion. She was confused when she first entered the dream world, was happy when she met her grandfather and brother, and finally was overjoyed when she met Suan. In the end, I saw through the illusion in the struggle. The dream is false, but the outside is real. For example, setting up the dreamland is that she didn't know it was a dream, and then she could write some daily life, a little sweet interaction, and then discovered that this was a dream, and finally chose to leave. Sprinkle some dog food in the middle, go play cards with grandpa and lose in various ways, and finally win a handful to hint that she will leave. However, about three chapters into the dream, you and I couldn't feel her joy and happiness, as well as the loss and regained confidence after leaving. I think that this chapter of Tsunade's dream, at least not talking about anything else, could be written in 60,000 to 70,000 words, but it was lost in a few pictures. A little personal reflection.

Easy to lead, oppose infinite Tsukuyomi, and support the eradication of chakra in the ninja world? Are you a spy sent by the people from space? There is an Otsutsuki clan in the universe. Who knows when a Saiyan Frieza will come, and he plans to die when the old, weak, sick and disabled? Wouldn't war happen without chakra? The earth has been stable for a hundred years, and local wars are still occurring in various regions. Either you become the eternal emperor to ensure internal and external peace, and vigorously develop the level of science and technology in the ninja world to deal with possible cosmic threats, or you can enjoy the false but real peace of Infinite Tsukuyomi. Did you choose to eliminate chakra? ? A lot of productivity and combat effectiveness were lost like this.

Very nice, I don't know what other people are spraying. Does it have to be a mindless drama about Long Aotian's 180 harems to be good? Support support.

I don't know what the author thinks that removing chakra can bring peace. It's funny. If you read more books and read more history, you will know that wars between ordinary people are more cruel. The war spreads across the country. Every time a dynasty changes, tens of millions of people may be killed or injured. If there were people with the power of ninjas in reality, ordinary people would not have to go to the battlefield. The ones fighting are ninjas. How many ninjas are there? How many people can die? At most, the civilians near the battlefield will suffer a little more. If you really want peace, it is better to unify the ninja world, then pull down the daimyo, ninjas become the ruling class, use ninjutsu to develop, earth escape can repair roads, maybe it can also improve the soil quality, plant trees between dirty soil pillars, water escape artificial rainfall and so on, perfect without talking about technology, the technology in Naruto is completely incomprehensible, technological development is like taking hormones.

Can there be peace without chakra? What did the author think? Is the world at peace now? Peace is guaranteed by strong force!

Stupid, when others suspect that you have a world-destroying weapon, you'd better really have it, otherwise you will be the unlucky one. What kind of naivety can you realize your dream?

Can the six paths and five shadows be defeated within seconds?

Before I read the book, I saw a bunch of people in the comment area scolding Haruno Sakura. To be fair, shouldn't the author be scolded? In the first half of Naruto's gloomy life, Sakura occupied a very important position. Naruto and Sakura's identities keep changing. Sometimes they are siblings. Sometimes it's brother and sister. Sometimes it's buddies. Sometimes best friends. When Naruto was bullied, Sakura stood up like a sister. Drive away hostility and take care of life. Naruto became the big brother when Sakura was dark. He said to Sakura, I will definitely capture my brother-in-law (Sasuke). No matter what method is used. Hinata is different. Hinata is like the beautiful mistress you brought back after you became rich. Everything about him was good, like a dummy. Sakura is like a wife of chaff, sometimes gentle, sometimes kind. Sometimes violent, even domestic violence. Like a total bitch. But it's true. In this story of Naruto, when Pain came to Konoha Village, his combat power completely collapsed. When Minato Namikaze and Kushina Uzumaki became famous parents, the passionate story of hard work also completely collapsed. When a celebrity married Hinata, the love story of that childhood sweetheart, with ups and downs, joys and sorrows, also collapsed. If we really travel to Naruto, we will choose teammates among the 12 Xiaoqiang, and they will not be separated except the pigs, deers and butterflies. Who would you choose? I would choose Naruto, Sakura. Naruto is like a little sun. Always be optimistic and positive. It seems like I never get tired. Sakura is like a wife. When you are not satisfied, he will cheer you up. When you are weak, he can transform into Brother Ying. A punch breaks the ground. When you goof off, he turns into a bitch. Calling you a coward. When you are struggling outside, he turns into a good wife and mother, taking care of the family, children, and taking care of everything. Such a flesh-and-blood, real character, if it's not well-acted, I won't blame the author. When Pain destroyed the village, it shouldn't have been Hinata who rushed out. As a warrior, what can he do? There's nothing you can do except give someone a head. The one who rushed out should be Sakura. After all, among the Konoha ninjas who were still standing at that time, Sakura was almost the number one in combat power. And it also fits the author's new Sannin setting. I wonder why the author is so confused?

It feels like the protagonist wants to erase chakra, just like the ancient people saw World War I and World War II and then wanted to erase technology. In addition, in reality, science is the primary productive force, but in the ninja world, chakra is the primary productive force.

This book should be called "The Ninja World Where Everyone Can Be Happy, Only the Nezhi Tree Is Ignored"

This book is so good, why is the score so bad? This book ranks among the top three Naruto fics I have read.

So awesome! Using dragon veins to practice in ancient times, you often get slapped in the face for pretending to be cool when you come back? The perception is so powerful that even Kagura's inner eye is far beyond it. As a result, even the second-generation Mizukage who was reincarnated in the filthy earth cannot sense it. I was obviously tricked once by the so-called Obito, but I still pretend to be cool. I really don't know how to get a refund?

This book is poisonous. YY was engaged in literary school throughout the whole process. The appraisal is completed.

I disagree with the protagonist's idea of ​​clearing chakra. Once the ninja world loses chakra, ordinary people in the ninja world will definitely attack ninjas. Daimyos and ordinary people in various countries behave like mascots just because ninjas have chakra. They have been frightened for a long time, and they will definitely riot at that time! Will the protagonist's character kill ordinary people? There is also the matter of the Otsutsuki aliens. Looking at the comics alone, there are only a few Otsutsukis. But if you think about it carefully, Otsutsuki has been around for a long time, and these are just these rookies? Otsutsuki eats chakra fruits to increase his strength. The anime universe is so big, is there only one place in the ninja world where chakra fruits can be grown? There are no people who have eaten the fruit, and even the top management of Otsutsuki who have eaten a lot of fruits, the protagonist is strong, but can he stop the entire Otsutsuki clan from attacking now?

Personally, I feel that Orochimaru's defection was a bit unjust. Human experimentation is basically a semi-public matter in the five major countries. You must know that Orochimaru was also the battle commander in the Ninja War. Would he not have his own direct troops? In addition, his own personality charm is not something to brag about. The fourth Hokage was chosen, and Minato Namikaze was almost there. If you want ordinary material, send your men to find a gang of bandits' den. What age is there no material for? Why bother to attack someone from your own family? Just like most of the families in Konoha have the roots in Danzo's hands, Danzo and Orochimaru cooperate. I am afraid that in addition to Orochimaru's own abilities, the power in Orochimaru's hands is also the same thing. Danzo asked his men to die without blinking an eye. Orochimaru's methods were no worse than Danzo's. As Orochimaru was the Hokage candidate at that time, I am afraid that there were many families who showed favor to him behind the scenes. Sending a few "wastes" from the family to show favor to the next Hokage in order to seek better development was not more cost-effective than buying and selling. As for why he messed up, apart from being stabbed in the back and the development of the plot in the future, there were other reasons. That is a matter for the beholder. During the experiment, Orochimaru might not repay Konoha if he made some other progress. The improvement in Konoha's overall level does no harm to Orochimaru. What's more, when medical ninjutsu was first formed, it didn't use living people? Training with animals or something is just theory after all, it has to be practiced. Is it because of the merits of medical ninjutsu that the dirty behind it is ignored? But it is true that most people take the initiative and ignore the nastiness behind it. The advantages outweigh the disadvantages. To bring the nastiness to the surface after such great achievements is "you are ignorant" No matter what Sarutobi thought in the later period, at least in the early stage, he cultivated the Sannin as his successor. But among the three, apart from his identity, Orochimaru was the best. His wisdom, power, and political methods were the top among the three. Tsunade has the name of Senju in vain, she is just a fool and has a follower by her side. If she is really powerful, the name of Senju is bigger than the word "fat sheep". Jiraiya said that he has his own intelligence network, but it always feels like it is an afterthought. I am afraid that the power in his hand is just two or three big cats As for Orochimaru, his base is spread over half of the ninja world. There are also many talented villains, and there is also a small and medium-sized ninja village (you must know that not all countries can have ninja villages, and the sound ninja village is at least recognized by Konoha, the five major countries, and being able to take the chuunin exam is a kind of recognition, otherwise, what is the face of the five major countries if you just set up a ninja village and take the exam). In this case, who would defect if Orochimaru didn't defect?

Another author who considers Uchiha Obito as his father

It's a little bit toxic in the early stages, so it's not suitable for people who like to watch Naruto fandom but have no interest in the original work. This book is only suitable for people who have deep feelings for the original work Because the world view of the Naruto fanfic that has evolved over the years has actually been somewhat different from the original characters. The Qidian Naruto worldview is more reasonable, but this book is written more towards the fans of the original work.

The book is very good, but it is still a bit poisonous, for example, it forcibly lowers the emotional intelligence of the protagonist. Secondly, there are some problems with the setting. For example, it is outrageous that the Flame Ball Fan can fly away the Jade of Seeking Dao, and there is also the big spiral wheel that can break the Jade of Seeking Dao. The Jade of Seeking the Way can annihilate anything under the ability of the Six Paths (except natural energy and magic)

The protagonist is obsessed with destroying chakra. He thinks that without chakra, there will be no ninjutsu, no struggle, and the world will be peaceful. It is too naive.

Hiss~ Is the chapter list at the beginning so poisonous?

What the hell is the chapter name? Do you think it's very meaningful?

So... So pretty😭

Those who have made mistakes cannot be washed away. Everyone should be responsible for what they have done.

It's well written, but I don't like it very much. It's normal to have different opinions about the original work, but I don't like the author's opinion very much, especially about the change of fate in the original work. Everything is attributed to the original protagonist group. If this is the case, it may make up for some regrets, but it is not satisfactory after all.